rihaan os: yearning - Page 4

you made my eyes leak. this was so so beautifully written that i just want someone to play it out for me. i can visualise everything i felt in this os.

this poor girl wanted just one thing in life and she got everything but that one thing. i can't even describe the turmoil i felt in my heart after reading it.

Originally posted by: jisa

Yes, this time Vansh has played with her internally. Intimately. I wouldn't be able to digest if he gets an easy forgiveness. From Riddhima's pov it is very possible to think that Vihaan took Vansh's place many times in her life otherwise how he would know such minute details about them. Another thing, even after all these Riddhima not for once thought Vansh is alive. She just wanted validity of Vihaan's story. Not Vansh's. So he is very much Vihaan for her.

I don't know what game Vansh is playing at, but the end result won't be good for Riddhima mentally. He is psyching her. He is killing her internally.

Finger crossed 🤞

I won't either. Riddhima better put her foot down when it comes to Vansh this time. That's true! I guess, she might be thinking it must be impossible for Vansh to survive after falling from such a height. Which tbh, even I wanna know how the hell he managed to pull that off. 🤔

He better target Kabir & AP in his little sick twisted game. Targetting just Riddhima is plain wrong.

Once again, I don't know what to say. You rendered me speechless yet again. There is this heavy feeling in my heart, making me feel as if it's me in place of Riddhima, going through all this, the pain, the sense of betrayal and anything and everything that comes along with it. Such is the power of your writing!

Girl, you made a real fan of yours. ❤️

P.S. This piece has my whole heart.

Originally posted by: Moon10

You’re going to make me cry 😢 damn this was so sad but at the same time eye opening to read. You truly know how to make a reader feel so many feelings through your writing, just crazy talented girl ❤️

I feel so bad for riddhu, she’s literally living in the the unknown just craving to be loved. So heartbreaking 😢

Thanks MoonMoon. ❤️

Love is literally all that Riddhima wants and yet no one is able to see it. Sab apni hi duniya mein khoye hue hai. 😒

Originally posted by: vallu123

Guy this made me emotional....oh God...so beautiful it is...thanks....loved it...

Thank so much Vallu. <3

Originally posted by: Swathu

This one was so emotional😭😭

Felt bad for ridhu💔💔

Her turmoil is so heartbreaking💔

Excellent writing👏

Thanks Swathu! ❤️

Originally posted by: ashsamik

That is true....the game he is playing is not good....to use her to the extent that she is mentally breaking is not good at all....

To mix both vansh and Vihaan just to torment her to know the secrets is not nice....

You really showed it well the way Ridhima is going through all the emotions..👏

The way you wrote that in one way or another vansh is going to blame her to give herself to Vihaan even after knowing that that's vansh...

NOT GOOD...

You are a great writer👍🏼👏

I understand where Vansh is coming from and I'm okay with her being punished because she did make some truly grave mistakes. But to hurt her like this? At an emotional and mental level to the point her very sanity is put at stake? Naahhh, I'm not down for that.

Thanks!

These are the kind of vicious games that Vansh plays. Kuch bhi ho jaye, lekin samne wali ki haar ho kar hi rahegi.

Originally posted by: Dreamgirl08

Awesome 🤗....par wo tha kaun ? Was he vansh or Vihaan😊....m still confused 🤔....par jo b tha I enjoyed it😘😘😍😍😍...thank u darling for this wonderful OS❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thank you!

I left it ambiguous on purpose. Vansh, Vihaan; Vihaan, Vansh - regardless of the man that was with her, it's Riddhima who had her spirit broken.

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Just loved it👏😳👍🏼

Thank you! <3

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

I won't either. Riddhima better put her foot down when it comes to Vansh this time. That's true! I guess, she might be thinking it must be impossible for Vansh to survive after falling from such a height. Which tbh, even I wanna know how the hell he managed to pull that off. 🤔

He better target Kabir & AP in his little sick twisted game. Targetting just Riddhima is plain wrong.

I doubt if he has even an iota of idea of AP. He definitely can guess Riddhima wasn't alone. But who was the other enemy he has no clue off.

This guy can hack Kabir forging his signature but can't hack what happened in his house in his absence.

In your drabble series you had made Vihaan look into everything. I wish something like that happen in the show as well. Please please please 🙏🥺