rihaan os: yearning - Page 3

You’re going to make me cry 😢 damn this was so sad but at the same time eye opening to read. You truly know how to make a reader feel so many feelings through your writing, just crazy talented girl ❤️

I feel so bad for riddhu, she’s literally living in the the unknown just craving to be loved. So heartbreaking 😢

Guy this made me emotional....oh God...so beautiful it is...thanks....loved it...

This one was so emotional😭😭

Felt bad for ridhu💔💔

Her turmoil is so heartbreaking💔

Excellent writing👏

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Thank you! 🤗

Vansh needs to pay for what he did big time. I mean, as much as I love Vihaan, the game that Vansh is playing with Riddhu is extremely sick and twisted.

That is true....the game he is playing is not good....to use her to the extent that she is mentally breaking is not good at all....

To mix both vansh and Vihaan just to torment her to know the secrets is not nice....

You really showed it well the way Ridhima is going through all the emotions..👏

The way you wrote that in one way or another vansh is going to blame her to give herself to Vihaan even after knowing that that's vansh...

NOT GOOD...

You are a great writer👍🏼👏

Awesome 🤗....par wo tha kaun ? Was he vansh or Vihaan😊....m still confused 🤔....par jo b tha I enjoyed it😘😘😍😍😍...thank u darling for this wonderful OS❤️❤️❤️❤️

Wow Gur; good morning. Reading this on a wet and windy morning. Its beautifully written; very poignant and very sad. Poor Rhiddima always a puppet with someone else pulling her strings. All she wants is to be loved for herself, but no its never that simple for her. Right now at this moment when she suspects Vansh is back playing his elaborate games or whether its his doppleganger playing his; whether one or the same man, both want her & equally she is drawn to both though her heart belongs to Vansh...what I would like her to do is despite the love and longing, is simply get up and walk away; forget packing her bags, walk away with the clothes on her back - does she have the strenght and fortitude to do this? To carve out her own identity not as bahu; or that famous Mrs VRS title; but her own identity? We shall see what you have in store for us.

If the mastermind husband is back let him sort out his household or is he not capabable of doing that without an elaborate game of revenge targeted at just one person?

I t was truly amazing... yes heart wrenching and damn emotional but riddhima's feeling were portrayed beautifully...

Awesome ....

🥺🥺🥺

Feel bad for her 🥺

Beautifully written gur

So beautifully written Gur👏

Poor Riddhima 😭😭

Gurr, I gotta ask. You doing okay ? It’s just your fics recently has a melancholy feel to it that I’ve just gotta make sure you’re okay 🥺

Anyway, bechara bacchi. Always being trapped in the middle of something. When all she ever wanted was love. Her naivety became her weakness and the two men in her life preyed on her emotions. Sometimes good people get hurt the worst. That’s why bad people are increasing in the world. I don’t know man, on one side I want Riddhima to change, the stand up for herself, to finally push back on all the people that toyed with her. But on the other hand, I don’t want her to change. Because this naivety, this realness, this love starved girl is the essence of what she is. Of who she is. I don’t want her to hardened and loose all the charming qualities that makes her Riddhima.

Now I’m thinking more than Kabir, what Vansh is doing now is ten times worst. Yes I know where he is coming from, I know his reasons, but we all know that after all is said and done, after the revenge has been carried out, he will still not let her leave. So she will live a broken life with her broken heart for her husbands betrayal. In reality, even if one day Vansh finds out the truth and begs for forgiveness, and Riddhima will forgive him, the psychological damage has already been done. I hope CVS won’t cross any lines that will make people hate Vansh. Even if he is the anti hero, still it will hurt so bad 🥺🥺

Great job on this fic, bacchi is just tired of all the games. She just lost her husband for God’s sake. She’s still in mourning and grief numbs us with pain. I read somewhere people say that a funeral is one of the best places to find a good lay. It’s because in grief, people find any means to let us FEEL something else besides the numbing pain.

Great job again Gur, sending virtual hugs and chocolate chip cookies to you ♥️🍪♥️🍪♥️🍪