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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zajedno

Dazz... You're really amazing😉


Thank you, Zajie! 🤗 I hope you liked my version of ViDha's consummation. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl82

The trailer is too good BB😆
Honestly DAZZ deserves even more appreciation...😃


You're making me blush! 😳 😆 Love you, Pearly! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~


Thank you for your generous feedback, Avani! 🤗 Your comment's so sweet! 😃 Phew, I'm so relieved that this chapter wasn't a failure. 😆 It's been the most challenging so far. 😳

It isn't a failure...I must say..
It's a great success👍🏼
I know it would have been a great challenge FOR u...u have emerged a winner DAZZ👏 after your immense hard work...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~


You're making me blush! 😳 😆 Love you, Pearly! 🤗

What r u blushing😲😆😆...really😆 love u too dear🤗
I know so many Will be blushing hard with happiness after reading your chapters...☺️☺️🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kaanta lagaaa...Hai laga. .!!!🤪
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl82

It isn't a failure...I must say..
It's a great success👍🏼
I know it would have been a great challenge FOR u...u have emerged a winner DAZZ👏 after your immense hard work...😃...


You're too kind, Pearly dear! 😳 Thank you my sweet friend. 🤗
Edited by ~DaZZ|ing~ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl82

What r u blushing😲😆😆...really😆 love u too dear🤗
I know so many Will be blushing hard with happiness after reading your chapters...☺️☺️🤣


I'm blushing from all of the praise, Pearly! 😳 😳 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mehraan

Kaanta lagaaa...Hai laga. .!!!🤪

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Missy, I want an of OS of Vidha's first consummation. 😃 The scenes we were deprived from on the show. Bas, ab sehn nahi hotha ha mujhse. 😛 😆 Looking forward to your comment, Pyari Mehr! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

ATBJLH part 6

Hello dazzling.. first and foremost, hope you have fully recuperated from your bronchitis..secondly ,thanks for posting the update, and lastly for including Fawad's song Dholna.. it's my regional language ,such affinity I have within my blood when I hear the words.. Well described father feeding daughter session. Both Viplav and Dhani's, divide seems self imposed.. although I understand Dhani's withdrawal symptoms.. slowly ,the gap between Viplav and her is likely to be bridged. Good to see Viplav's assumptions regards Vidhaan Dhani relationship are clarified. Mind you, it leaves Viplav more under pressure of what not he never did! However I quite enjoyed how you give him the purpose of bringing his bro back to the family fold..Viplav sports a temper for reconciliation, now if only Dhani gives way... Erhh.. suggestive number.. looks like the ice thaws eventually.. inevitably.. now.. hopefully their oneness has washed away the distance between them. Great read Dazzling, the final intimate section in my opinion is welcoming, as Viplav and Dhani, although living apart since five years are still man and wife...hence, the script is emotionally charged. To me, It's a celebration of what was a part of the profound bond they shared five years ago.. with endearing side-effects I hasten to add.. Viplav I feel , has already borne the brunt of letting his wife walk out on him. This union in the end , simply confirms what they had yesterday , exists today, and hopefully will continue hereafter.. the union of the souls, which time too failed to stamp out between them! Once again, Dazzling ,thanks very much, for keeping the forum alive with your popular fan fiction ,written brilliantly .. regards hamlet53.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53


ATBJLH part 6

Hello dazzling.. first and foremost, hope you have fully recuperated from your bronchitis..secondly ,thanks for posting the update, and lastly for including Fawad's song Dholna.. it's my regional language ,such affinity I have within my blood when I hear the words.. Well described father feeding daughter session. Both Viplav and Dhani's, divide seems self imposed.. although I understand Dhani's withdrawal symptoms.. slowly ,the gap between Viplav and her is likely to be bridged. Good to see Viplav's assumptions regards Vidhaan Dhani relationship are clarified. Mind you, it leaves Viplav more under pressure of what not he never did! However I quite enjoyed how you give him the purpose of bringing his bro back to the family fold..Viplav sports a temper for reconciliation, now if only Dhani gives way... Erhh.. suggestive number.. looks like the ice thaws eventually.. inevitably.. now.. hopefully their oneness has washed away the distance between them. Great read Dazzling, the final intimate section in my opinion is welcoming, as Viplav and Dhani, although living apart since five years are still man and wife...hence, the script is emotionally charged. To me, It's a celebration of what was a part of the profound bond they shared five years ago.. with endearing side-effects I hasten to add.. Viplav I feel , has already borne the brunt of letting his wife walk out on him. This union in the end , simply confirms what they had yesterday , exists today, and hopefully will continue hereafter.. the union of the souls, which time too failed to stamp out between them! Once again, Dazzling ,thanks very much, for keeping the forum alive with your popular fan fiction ,written brilliantly .. regards hamlet53.



Thank you for your kindhearted inspiration, Hammie! 🤗 Punjabi's the language of love. 😊 I understand it quite well and I can manage a broken conversation. Twaddi zubaan vaddi changi lagdi ai mainu. ☺️ Viplav has kept his distance from Dhani comprehending very well that he did the unimaginable five years ago. He's imposed a distance out of respect and remorse for his actions. Dhani's allegation of his abandonment of his child has only added to the immense strain in their relationship. Dhani's preserved that same same distance in animosity for what she perceives as his rejection. Her attraction and desire for him is her weakness that she's attempted to overcome on many occasions. Her concupiscence for him eventually won. 😳 Dhani's infinite love for Viplav has compelled her into giving in to her desires, but has she moved on from her sorrow? You'll have to read the next chapter to find out. 😉 Thank you once again for the love, Hammie. It means the world! ❤️

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