FF: I Love You With All My Heart # New Chapter 10 Updated on Pg 26 # - Page 19

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Posted: 8 years ago
Ress.. 😆
meko kum mut samjh..reservations main..🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

FF:ILYWAMH..chapter 9

Hello barbji

It's interesting how nothing stands confirmed between them in terms of emotional attachments.. friend he had put it to her. Yet Dhani in her simplicity reads more into their bond, or is it just overly concern for a dear friend? But then nothing is hidden from a protective mothers eyes! Dulari sets her daughter right, nearly laughed at dulari's accusation "dirty mind".. barbji ,enjoyed the scene between Viplav and Dhani .She needs to learn ,sometimes easing off pays rather than heavy going, as she can see Viplav reacts and demands to be left alone. "ocean of addiction"? strong words, ohhh booze/drugs?.. should have known ,a no no ! have to admit Dhani is correct.. he acts out of order, coming to work in this state. Right! So a rejected Viplav slipping down the emotional slope and Dhani ready to shower her womanly care and affection upon him. So once the effect of harmful agents dies down ,Viplav comes to his senses and finds out, he now his more than he can chew! Evaluate his previous behavior.. but still things look positive. I like the way you make Dhani act positively and involve Viplav's friends into providing him consolidated support systems. So one thing leads to another.. we can see a precedence repeats in Dhani's life..something tells me she will be able to support Viplav more. Barbs thanks very much for the popular saga.. glad to see you are continuing. Regards hamlet53.

Also thanks for your enjoyable annotations..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally I am here...sorry for being so late...I enjoyed the chapter as usual...ALL the best for your exams...heart felt THANKS for writing us amidst your busy schedule DEAR...dhani's inner turmoils were wonderfully brought out by u...again dulari is a strict mother trying to control her daughter's dirty😕 mind...actually that reaction of hers really shows the motherly affection and her fear of her daughter getting hurt once again...dhani behaves in a matured way...her love for her doctor babu is immense that will make her cross all her inhibitions and hurdles...today VIP has clearly understood her deep love for HIM...but y did VIP act like that in hospital...was he in his senses...did he act...I was bit confused...hmmm again u have a suspense regarding his vulnerability...good going titli😃 ..I liked dhani's past...so dhani s husband was similar to VIP...it LOOks good...I pity this poor girl...I am waiting for my sher to finally get courage to face the devils with his sherni...but I Must admit I loved the scene in the doctor's cabin😆 I am sure u can write the ROMANTIC scenes too very perfectly...u r a talented person...waiting for the next chapter...once again👏👏👏 for your efforts...
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Posted: 8 years ago
T I T L I, L O V E S A R A.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

A big hug for the sweetheart of our forum! 🤗 And a bigger hug for my sweet talented friend🤗 Barb, I've enjoyed your story from its inception, but this chapter left me speechless. 👏 I'm amazed by the maturity you've shown in your writing throughout this story. My heart went out to Dhani and her feelings of worthlessness. I'm nobody to comment on anyone's religious beliefs, but being an advocate of women empowerment I could never understand the ill treatment towards widows. Life and death are both up to the Almighty, then why blame a helpless woman for her husband's demise. How is it her fault that he died? the initialpromos of the show were really much promising and interesting.. They were supposed to show how women are ill treated even today in some parts of our country.. and Viplav was supposed to come as a ray of light and then turn turn out to be a sunshine in their dark lives.. You've highlighted Dhani's inner conflict very well. Her need for her love and her constraints as a widow have led her through a roller coaster of torment. Her willingness to break the rules for the charming Doctor Babu and her constant reminders that she must remain within her limits were beautifully detailed, Barb! In my personal opinion, humanity trumps over all. I also liked that you've given us a glimpse into Dhani's past, but you've also highlighted the key issue in her unhappy marriage. Although what you've described sounds more like bipolar disorder with the rapid fluctuations in mood, I'll go with the flow and accept your prognosis on drug addiction. 😆 oh how stupid of me! 🤪 actually i should have done some more research on these drug addictions.. But I did not do.. Lazy me😆😆 This is the first forum for which i have started to write and this is my very first FF.. experience se hi toh log sikhte hai😆 But Dazz I must say your first story is a super duper hit one.. 👏👏 On a serious note, kudos for handling a controversial topic like drug addiction with such sensitivity. 👏 he he thank you😳

Not an uncommon sight in medical practice. 😔 What's his addiction? Cocaine? how will I know..? I will later think of it 🤣 It's an extremely potent stimulant often responsible for elevated temper and agitation. Dhani must've recognized his dilated pupils and deduced that he must be addicted to drugs. 😭 Or, she must've sensed the palpitations when his chest was pressed firm against hers. 😛 I'm actually surprised by this subplot, certainly didn't see it coming. I know you're leaning towards a scenario in which VIplav is dependent on Dhani and her love. yeah the love birds will be dependent upon each other, i too think so I'm excited to see how this is all going to unfold. 😃 Wonderful storytelling, Barb! I know you're busy with exams, but I hope you post the next part very soon. I'll be waiting anxiously in anticipation. Good luck, sweetheart! ❤️

yaa fortunately i will be updating the next part within this year only..😆 Once i am done with my exams I will make sure to update regularly
and thank you so much dazz for your continuous support.. I am glad to have such wonderful readers.. and thanks for your interesting comment too😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

FF:ILYWAMH..chapter 9

Hello barbji Hey hammie.. one of My greatest sweetest bestestestestest mate.. love you and missing you badly🤗

It's interesting how nothing stands confirmed between them in terms of emotional attachments.. friend he had put it to her. Yet Dhani in her simplicity reads more into their bond, or is it just overly concern for a dear friend? Only time will tell her how sincere Viplav's love is for his dear friend But then nothing is hidden from a protective mothers eyes! Dulari sets her daughter right, nearly laughed at dulari's accusation "dirty mind".. 😆😆 Yeah Dulari used to speak like that.. tongue of a scorpion which hit others badly😆 barbji ,enjoyed the scene between Viplav and Dhani .She needs to learn ,sometimes easing off pays rather than heavy going, as she can see Viplav reacts and demands to be left alone. "ocean of addiction"? strong words, ohhh booze/drugs?.. should have known ,a no no ! have to admit Dhani is correct.. he acts out of order, coming to work in this state. Right! So a rejected Viplav slipping down the emotional slope and Dhani ready to shower her womanly care and affection upon him. and guess from where did I get this idea.. of making the hero slip into addiction and then the heroine will help him get out of them..?? he he you are right.. "Mein nahin peene degi" "aap aaj bhi peeyoge?".. yaad hai nah?? 😆 So once the effect of harmful agents dies down ,Viplav comes to his senses and finds out, he now his more than he can chew! Evaluate his previous behavior.. but still things look positive. I like the way you make Dhani act positively and involve Viplav's friends into providing him consolidated support systems. So one thing leads to another.. we can see a precedence repeats in Dhani's life..something tells me she will be able to support Viplav more. Barbs thanks very much for the popular saga.. glad to see you are continuing. Regards hamlet53.

yaa I am going to finish it no matter how long it takes.. and thanks for suppporting me.. your presence means a lot and your reviews are interesting as well as important for me..

take care hammie.. this IF friend of yours will always be there in support of you..

lot of love for you ❤️❤️


Also thanks for your enjoyable annotations..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl82

Finally I am here...sorry for being so late...and I am the master of being late 😆 so no need to be sorry.. I am glad that you read and commented😳 I enjoyed the chapter as usual...ALL the best for your exams...heart felt THANKS for writing us amidst your busy schedule DEAR...dhani's inner turmoils were wonderfully brought out by u...again dulari is a strict mother trying to control her daughter's dirty😕 mind...actually that reaction of hers really shows the motherly affection and her fear of her daughter getting hurt once again... yeah Dulari, as usual, behaves like a typical widow afraid of the cruel society around her and wants to keep her daughter away from all kinds of tortures dhani behaves in a matured way...her love for her doctor babu is immense that will make her cross all her inhibitions and hurdles...in fact she had already started crossing her limits out of immense concern for Viplav but is still unaware of her feelings today VIP has clearly understood her deep love for HIM...but y did VIP act like that in hospital...was he in his senses...did he act...I was bit confused...hmmm again u have a suspense regarding his vulnerability...good going titli😃 ..aww thank you tulsi di.. I liked dhani's past...so dhani s husband was similar to VIP...yaa dhani fears that viplav may become like her late husband if he did not stop taking drugs and alcohol it LOOks good...I pity this poor girl...I am waiting for my sher to finally get courage to face the devils with his sherni...but I Must admit I loved the scene in the doctor's cabin😆 I am sure u can write the ROMANTIC scenes too very perfectly...u r a talented person...waiting for the next chapter...once again👏👏👏 for your efforts...

and thanks for your reviews.. love to read your comments..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zajedno

T I T L I, L O V E S A R A.

awww.. love and hugs for you too sara🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
@joya didi and @nus.. let your reserved comments rest in peace for eternity🤣🤣🤣
love you my darlings.. padhne ki koi zaroorat nahin agar time nahin hai toh.. 😳
i know how busy you both have become recently.. concentrate on your work which is more important..
hugs sweethearts🤗🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res 🤣
LO maine bhi kia hain 😆

Chal agla saal aungi padhne...beech mai reh gaya 😆

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