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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: simple2joy



Yeah, that too with so much care n love for d show, she writes each n e every word from her heart.yes it is long, cz it is not an update basically, this is how she has seen each and every scene, her own point of view. Not a mere description of what happened in d episode.u will find this extra long cz u r not a fan of this show, n as u r not u dont need to take d pain to go through this.u will only find some words typed in black color n some average sized font...but to us it is like watching our fav show alive...once again,in a different way.
Hammie does this on a daily basis, cz she is a fan of d show, one of d most loyal fans.no matter how much bz she is in real life she manages to finish it everyday.and we r d fans of both d show n her writing.welcome to this thread and our show.

😆 kya baat hai safed coat aaj tu out patients mein bhaut rush hai! you doing a great job doc sahiba... hammie in such good spirits thanks for loving my takes and our Ishq ka rang safed! much love ,yours hammie



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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: pearl100


swathi... head ache kaise... drink water at least 2 litre... thura thura,,, i get like that dehydration se... waise bhi pani is good for you
So sorry for the delay Hammie...had bad headache...very neatly written 😊 ...full action packed episode...Viplav was right in saying rakshak becomes a bhakshak then matter is to be taken to the court...here in this episode the society's thoughts are displayed...the so called prestigious society din't fail to stun me...the blame as usual goes on the victim...this is the second or third time where the public fail to see the guilty and blame the victim.

paisa... shuts people up and also the gender issue swathi
The ones present there in the party have they never for once thought what if the women in their household become a prey to a beast like Asthana?? This incident can happen to anyone ...they were just mute and deaf spectators never did they raise questions and point fingers at the judge...such hypocrisy...had the incident happened to one of them would they keep quite?? This Pc and his questions 😆 this guy is ever ready to instigate public that day was nothing less.
mind you when PC spoke i nearly fell off my settee yes shallow... people
And what prestige is this DT speaking of ?? his dil was attempted to be molested isn't her honor the household's honor ...wasn't this a crime...all the attention goes to the school where people are given education...people are taught to be self reliant ...this judge has been educated very well then which law permits him to commit such heinous crimes?? This is a social message about anti social elements that go Scott free.
such a power ful ending... mind you swathi.. class snobbery wa being touched upon ..
Loved the way Viplav stood out for dhani ...if only people learn a thing or two from him...it is not just related to his wife but it can happen to any women ...so in which way a woman is safe and secondly the judge is supposed to punish the criminals not become one of them ...what example are such highly positioned people trying to set in the society and thirdly when ever such crimes are committed then it is better to punish such offenders so that others don't dare to commit.
its terrible if the legal system is diseased... lets see judge ka kiya hota hai! ?
Loved you take ...very well written...waiting for the next part...till then take care. swathi drink water regardless head or not.. thanks so much for a superb comment... much love hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: simple2joy

Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie, hain... heard you first time taz... ah yes recall umpteen times you really liked it...😛
Lol u know now how much I have liked it. humm...
Must say one of ur best takes. it had weight in it... packed
Each n every bit of it is just sooo perfect.
Ur title is dramatic,.so was d episode. it was the first bit that came into my head
I was thinking what u wouldhave done with d first part of d episode.
Cz its not a easy task to portray such a scene. well I COULDN'T bear to take dhani's name not with that fility old man
So cleverly u have worked with ur words, didnt even feel discomfort for a moment.
I know how good u r in writing action scenes.so as expected u were good in describing ur sher.
Whenever I love any of ur line I quote it. 😆 .. my favrite one is bas!
But aj ka to I cant put d whole take in my comment it will get clumsy. so happy you loved it
As u said it was a zabardast episode , I thought if watching it first.thats what landed me here so late.loadshedding plus incredibly slow internet it took me sooo long to finally finish watching d episode. watch the last scene again... jab judge ka band baja
What n episode really cvs have done a fav job. yes it was great
Women empowerment plus issues related to it was there, how wives should b protected n supported by husbands, how d keeper of law falls prey to his own lust, old society vs todays viplab, finally dhani speaking for her right...beautiful.plus felt so pity for DT, what greed has turned him into,stealing in his own house, hiding from his own blood. great summing up taz... well put
Jitna bolu utna hi kam hain. thanks taz
Thanks for this amazing take hammie.
loved your comment... its readers encouragement ,.. and episode content that give the take its worth taz... much love, .hammie
Take care.

Edited by Hamlet53 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Hi Hammie,
It was just fantastic how you used metaphors of the wild beast and the frightened gazelle with apt precision that took place between Asthana and Dhani. I just loved it! Made me think of the animals who fall prey to their predators especially to us humans who have without any sense of justice taken the natural law into our hand destroying the wild life! That's how powerful your metaphorical writings are! Transports me into a complete different world! Having a laugh myself! Also it was indeed an episode highlighting the disparity in thoughts and deeds between the people who are considered as upholder of the law and morality in the society yet acts contrary to their held position in every possible way and there are these other kinds of people who just give their service without asking much in return to enrich other people' lives yet shunned and constantly victimised by the society because they don't have the coveted position or recognition in the society. How those in power are shameless beyond recognition in their baseless accusations against those who are actually doing something beyond their call of duty, in order to hide themselves of their naked truth that they themselves are afraid to look into because their own truth is a hard pill to swallow so instead let other people suffer and make up for their own sins, such is the short sightedness with which these fools operate. These fools have lost the power to assess the reality of the situation and what the situation demands yet hold the position of power in society when it is plain simple and obvious to the law abiding citizens who may not have positions of power yet are in touch with reality and what needs to be done. Such is the irony that the world is facing on a global scale and this show in its own unique ways encourages these dialogues in a bigger picture. Thank you so much for expanding our thoughts and being in touch with our own inner dialogues that tries to express itself in its own unique ways. Looking forward to your next post. Until then, take care and God bless
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Damn the law ! Roars the vigilante.

First and foremost a big applause to the CVS for raising the one topic that we all wanted - Dhani's education and why just hers , in fact , anyone who lacks the means but not the will to make a change and address the darkness of illiteracy . Be it Benaras and its vidhwas or sex workers or just any human who has the guts to address this change . kudos.

What is further interesting is the how the cvs have used the two pillars of society - Religion and Law - and built a track around the so called keepers of their domain , who lead by example, as the main perpetrators of their profession and society. When a Mahant & a Judge loose their moral bearings what is to be said to the people who look up to them . A well laid out story board as of now.

Today rather than go into dissceting each scene and what i saw i thought of pointing out what I liked and the highlights . So here goes.

- DT and him stealing in his own house. Such is his desperation to be rich, powerful and revered that he would stoop so low as to steal and hide from his grandson is a dark corner as a common thief. What is he after that he does not have already ? Is his dignity worth a few bars of gold . Does the thought of disgrace in front of his family and the benaras society in his golden years not scare him. He is upto something for sure.

- The Molestation scene . A judge when taken over by lust if did get his wish of disgracing a young girl in his house at a party , expected to walk out with his head held high ? As Viplav later said it is this "ghatiya soch" that is always there and not something that just pops up. Dhani in her struggle is able to find strength seeing the durga locket to strangle the man with her might . Thought Eisha did a great job there .

- Viplav thrashing the hell out of the judge . The judge did not even resist and went into apology mode at once. Maybe he knew that was his only option.

- Judge calling Dhani a loose women and Dashrath Tripathi raisng his voice at him. Found that reassuring at least for Viplavs sake.

- Viplav revealing that Dhani goes to school. Here i thought Dhani's reaction was a bit lame coz i would have expected some response of surprise or emotion from her .

- Phool Chand. He is bad but I like him ..maybe because he reminds me of IKRS in the early days.

- Dhani responding to PC about the school and its students . The same earth houses good and bad people ..will you stop stepping on it ?

- Viplavs Dhasu response to the crowd ..that the issue here is the wrong intentions of the judge and not his wife and where she goes to school . How easy it is to find fault with people who are trying to make a change.

- Mishal and his roar ...have seen him do this so many times in this show itself and can not get enough of the energy he eludes in these scenes. He seems consumed.

I loved the full on drama and both the leads did a fantastic job. Viplav as a faithful loving husband who fights for his wife is a novelty for me in desi telly . Dhani on the other hand a sweet , nave and lost in the woods character is very endearing . Both together is the reason I watch the show ...and hope to do much more in the future.

thanks Hammie Late again but always there .

hugs

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Better late than never, dear Hammie. What an outstanding take. I did not watch the epi in question, but it appears that it was wonderful. Take care and be well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear, Hammie,
Loved, loved, loved the episode.
Love, love, love, love ...just love your take, title, & all.
I will be brief.
Substituting the character names with more symbolic ones made the reading lot more dramatic & effective.
This epi... was a full on drama
Eisha's acting was real good here.
The scene , when he thinks of her honor first & covers her with his coat was beautiful.
As always, Mishal nailed it thru'out the drama scene.

Oh! I had fun watching DT hiding from Vip & jumping out the window...OMG!
What a scene...The eldest family member stealing from his home & hiding from his pota...chee chee... DT has stooped way too low today. The mystery behind who locked the front door will keep me awake.
Can imagine Viplav's reaction when DT's evil acts are revealed. But wonder how will Dadi react to her husband's greedy behavior Or does she have a clue already??

Thanks again Hammie for a beautiful take. I'm in awe of ur writing.

Bear with me here, I am going off track... Hammie, please don't say Sorry in your reply to me...
Honestly, you (& Swathi) are so passionate & religiously write everyday. You are not obligated to reply to us ( sorry for speaking on everyone's behalf ) at all, but you do. THANK YOU , that's your grateful nature. But please don't apologize just becoz you are late...will not mind if you don't or can't.
Having said this, I enjoy reading anything & everything you write. You are truly gifted.

Until ur next...TC


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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: premparbat

Damn the law ! Roars the vigilante. hi premratan! got you at last!

First and foremost a big applause to the CVS for raising the one topic that we all wanted - Dhani's education and why just hers , in fact , anyone who lacks the means but not the will to make a change and address the darkness of illiteracy . Be it Benaras and its vidhwas or sex workers or just any human who has the guts to address this change . kudos.

lovely comment... especially the education for all!

What is further interesting is the how the cvs have used the two pillars of society - Religion and Law - and built a track around the so called keepers of their domain , who lead by example, as the main perpetrators of their profession and society. When a Mahant & a Judge loose their moral bearings what is to be said to the people who look up to them . A well laid out story board as of now.

yes... both areas shaky... cvs indeed have injected substance unseen in other currenttly shows

Today rather than go into dissceting each scene and what i saw i thought of pointing out what I liked and the highlights . So here goes.

- DT and him stealing in his own house. Such is his desperation to be rich, powerful and revered that he would stoop so low as to steal and hide from his grandson is a dark corner as a common thief. What is he after that he does not have already ? Is his dignity worth a few bars of gold . Does the thought of disgrace in front of his family and the benaras society in his golden years not scare him. He is upto something for sure.

how long can dashrant blow dust in others eyes,hide behind his good man title

- The Molestation scene . A judge when taken over by lust if did get his wish of disgracing a young girl in his house at a party , expected to walk out with his head held high ? As Viplav later said it is this "ghatiya soch" that is always there and not something that just pops up. Dhani in her struggle is able to find strength seeing the durga locket to strangle the man with her might . Thought Eisha did a great job there

erhh.. dirty old man... the Durga locket in his neck was blasphemous his attitude to women...

- Viplav thrashing the hell out of the judge . The judge did not even resist and went into apology mode at once. Maybe he knew that was his only option.

he knew he was quilty as hell... the evidence was all there he was part of it

- Judge calling Dhani a loose women and Dashrath Tripathi raisng his voice at him. Found that reassuring at least for Viplavs sake.

dashrant..if he had his way would go along with it and so goes kanak

- Viplav revealing that Dhani goes to school. Here i thought Dhani's reaction was a bit lame coz i would have expected some response of surprise or emotion from her .

he will say a bit more in sunday episode

- Phool Chand. He is bad but I like him ..maybe because he reminds me of IKRS in the early days.

yes me too ... still he will continue to be a unlikable question

- Dhani responding to PC about the school and its students . The same earth houses good and bad people ..will you stop stepping on it ?

good point.. assertive

- Viplavs Dhasu response to the crowd ..that the issue here is the wrong intentions of the judge and not his wife and where she goes to school . How easy it is to find fault with people who are trying to make a change.

viplav name means stirring a change

- Mishal and his roar ...have seen him do this so many times in this show itself and can not get enough of the energy he eludes in these scenes. He seems consumed.

you ain't seen nothing lady...🤣 you know what this lion fan is thinking?

I loved the full on drama and both the leads did a fantastic job. Viplav as a faithful loving husband who fights for his wife is a novelty for me in desi telly . Dhani on the other hand a sweet , nave and lost in the woods character is very endearing . Both together is the reason I watch the show ...and hope to do much more in the future.

yes...both ! were just great

thanks Hammie Late again but always there . hey what a line! bravo! and me never gives up on you cheer ratna much love and many thanks hammie

hugs

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishfan

Dear, Hammie, hi mish! great to see you

Loved, loved, loved the episode. thank thanku thanku
Love, love, love, love ...just love your take, title, & all. erhhh mish... action gets me going... that's what hammie is like.. lousy at love expression .mushy stuff
I will be brief.
Substituting the character names with more symbolic ones made the reading lot more dramatic & effective. that's how I saw... it was attempted rape... a grave topic felt I could cope with animal images...
This epi... was a full on drama
Eisha's acting was real good here. she was terribly convincing
The scene , when he thinks of her honor first & covers her with his coat was beautiful.
As always, Mishal nailed it thru'out the drama scene.
yes... his honour which asthana tried to tamper with
Oh! I had fun watching DT hiding from Vip & jumping out the window...OMG!
What a scene...The eldest family member stealing from his home & hiding from his pota...chee chee... DT has stooped way too low today. The mystery behind who locked the front door will keep me awake.
he will get his due mish... this scene will turn out to be true...
Can imagine Viplav's reaction when DT's evil acts are revealed. But wonder how will Dadi react to her husband's greedy behavior Or does she have a clue already??
did dadi lock the door? who did? bua? phool chand?
Thanks again Hammie for a beautiful take. I'm in awe of ur writing.
yes mish... you readers are the ones who bring the awe element ..itswhat gives me the drive
Bear with me here, I am going off track... Hammie, please don't say Sorry in your reply to me...
Honestly, you (& Swathi) are so passionate & religiously write everyday. You are not obligated to reply to us ( sorry for speaking on everyone's behalf ) at all, but you do. THANK YOU , that's your grateful nature. But please don't apologize just becoz you are late...will not mind if you don't or can't.
Having said this, I enjoy reading anything & everything you write. You are truly gifted.
look.. mish... readers have expectations... i move military style if I post late makes me feel awful
Until ur next...TC
mish thanks so much,for commenting .hammie was waiting for your feedback... i knew you will.. when you can... so looked forward to it😃... much love and many thanks hammie


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