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Friends vidha love has inspired me to write some fiction on them . With the limited time that i get to spend on my beloved forum I have decided that I will make a series where I will rewrite scenes from the episodes which were good but make changes to them and give my personal touch
I start with the scene where Viplav leaves AN n goes to ashram ,All ashram ladies n Dhani try to pacify him n send him back to AN . But he does not budge. So dhani says theek hai tum Yahan raho Hum jaa Rahe hain!!! Hum jaa rahe hain !!!!
My take after that
Dhani leaves the ashram ,Badi amma follows her outside the ashram and asks dhani to stop.
BA : Dhani beta ,yeh kaisa faisla hai,viplav ghar chor ke aayen hain , aur hum maantey hain yeh galat hai , per beta uske bagair tum wahan kaise jaa sakti ho. Kya tum bhool gayi ki sirf wohi hai jiski wajah se tum wahan reh paa rahi ho ????
Dhani : Badi amma hum jaantey hain ,aur yakeen maniye hum viplav ke bagair uss ghar me kadam bhi nahi rakhna chahtey,kaatne ko daudega wo ghar humey.Per BA hum ye bhi jaantey hain ki iss waqt uss ghar ko viplav ki sabse zyaada zaroorat hai.nahi toh wo raja sab kuch barbaad kar dega.
Aur hum viplav ko bhi acche se jaantey hain.gussey me wo kisiki nahi sunega. usske dill tak agar koi pahunch payega toh sirf hamaara pyaar.Ek yehi tareeka hai usse wapas le jaane ka
Aur haan Ba humey dar bhi bohot lag raha hai jaatey hue. wo raja ki wajah se. per hum jayengey. viplav ke aur hamaare parivaar ke liye ye khatra humey uthaana hoga
Dhani leaves for AN.BA talks to viplav
BA: Beta kuch bhi ho uss ghar me dhani raja ke saath surashit nahi hai.
DL: Haan bachuaaji!! aap nahi jaantey wo raksas kitni gandi soch rakhta hai. aapne vachan diya tha ki aap hamaari buchiya ki raksha karengey . toh aapko uske liye jaana chahiye.
Viplav thinks for few seconds and leaves ashram
AN :Raja is trying to molest Dhani and she is scared.she has given a good fight but all the running around has drained her She has injured herself on the head when she fell down trying to escape.
She makes a last ditch effort n runs towards the door .She runs into viplav's arms. Tears flow down her eyes n she collapses.
Viplav looks at her face n then at Raja in disbeleif and Rage .
He lifts her n takes her to their room and puts her on bed.
Viplav's anger knows no bounds
He goes back n the episode scene with raja .
When viplav comes back to the room he sees dhani in a corner of the bed all scared and frightened.Her eyes are heavy with tears .She is in a shock.
He goes near her and takes her hands in his but she screams ."
Dhani : Chor do humey
Viplav : Dhani hum hain Viplav!!!!!
Dhani hugs him n starts crying profusely.
Dhani : viplav usne phir humey apne gande haathon se chuaa.
Tum nahi jaantey usne aarti ke waqt bhi humey chuaa tha .
Nahi bardasht hota humse.
Nahi bardasth hota uska wo gandi nazron se dekhana
nahi bardasht hota ki wo humey apni bhabhi kahe
Aur wo yeh karta rahega . humey bohot darr lag raha hai viplav .
.Nahi bardasth kar payengey agar usne humey phirse chuaa.
She is in distraught state.
Viplav tries to calm her down . he rubs her back , tenderly stroking her forehead.
He tucks her in blankets .He tries to get up but she catches his hand.
Dhani : Mat jaao . kahin mat jaoo viplav . Humey darr lag raha hai.
she is again starts loosing sense.
He sleeps with her with his arms tight around her, dhani clings to him
Dhani: VIp...Lav. Nahiii bardasth hota jab wo humey apni bhabi bolta hai . Naaahi hain huuum uski bhabiii/
she again looses conscience
Viplav is furious at the agony dhani has to go thru because of Raja
ViplAv : Dhani Tumne bohot bardaasth kar liya aur humne bohot sun liya .
Ab Raja yeh acche se jaan jayega ki Dhani uski Bhabhi nahi hai.
Dhani viplav Tripathi ki patni hai , ye usse jaanana aur manana padega
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