playing gooseberry! - Page 2

Originally posted by: premparbat

hi prem ratan... good to see you pal

Hammie , I have kind of stopped praising your writing as words seem short . Its like reading a chapter of a story book and recently the timing of your post is such that it is right before bedtime . A perfect way to end the day . Thanks again .
dont you think the stories recently ,distinctly have a witch flying on a broom ..
You have extensively elaborated on the Vegetable-wedding card scene and your description gave me a side that I had not considered. It is very important for Viplav to get a wedding date from Dhani . It is because he fears that he may loose her and with the happenings in recent times I can understand his impatience . What is not standing out clearly is What is Dhani's hesitancy ? Yes she wants everyone's blessings but so far she has not once shown any inclination or reason for her not to commit openly. Viplav's declaration that he loves her the most in this world and will wait for her till eternity according to me warranted an emphatic response from Dhani . She merely looked coy and and kept the card away . YOu write ' shows Viplavs sensitivity towards the fact that the idea of remarriage can be daunting..' I wish this was shown more or talked about clearly coz it just seemed very incomplete and one sided.
actually ratna I did want to say.. showed insecurity.. clearly due to her track record of pulling out at thelast minute.. ratna even her mum is aware of dhani's dithering.. but yes the underlying reason neither we nor viplav knows..funny vidha are so much in love.. huh? and he knows nothing
Playing Gooseberry. Such an important point that is being raised as to when a couple need to find time for themslevs versus other priorities and people who are important . Well ofcourse KT wishes to force herself between the two to create distance but also for Dhani to understand the importance of spending time to understand her partner. so far it has been Viplav who has spent time knowing her world and it was her simplicity that attracted him. Dhani has not had the opportunity to understand his background and his upbringing. Its her nature to put others first even if it means putting herself to inconvenience. Viplav understands that but when it comes to priorities Dhani will have to learn what is a priority.
very well expressed...actually switched off in the end but can see where you are coming from
KT continues to rule everyone with her high handedness . Ashram ladies are her personal assistants and is good at reading people to be able to twist their arms. Be it Viplav, Dhano or RL who is her latest target . Will she get to her ? Rl is very enamored by fact that she too may have a love story like Vip&Dhani or does she still dream of Vip as a possible beau ? She does light up when she sees him . So far she has been a good friend to both ..future cannot be told.
basically its the strong willed ,exploiting the weak..and meek..
That's all for me for now. Take care and talk to you soon. thanks for such a lovely comment 😃 ratna.. made me cheer up... you are so gracious..😛.. keep the praise coming on yours brash hammie😛

Originally posted by: Dolly-heart

helooo dolly
Once again I search for words to describe your talent in making this show come alive all over again in reading your descriptive analysis...

thanks doll... me smiling..😃

True enough lovers hate "Buttinskies" like KT that love to make a tryst between lovers to spend sometime alone by their "Butting" in their alone time.

haaahaaa.. buttinskies! great phrase.. want to head butt her in!

Kanak seriously needs to find something other than spoiling Dhaani's life and get on with trying to kill Trip or DT...or CV's please introduce and strong and mean man that will jump into the fire to woo Kanak and keep her otherwise occupied. 😉

she is what one calls are bored housewife.. ummm widow and yes needs to pair up with tripurari tweedle de and tweedle dum!

Ahhh !! who knew helping to cut vegetables would make many a heart flutter with Dhaani sucking Viplav's finger to stop the bleeding and Viplav transported to paradise on Cupid's wings imagining an even more intimate coming together ...😳

I looked away...😆 tooo hot to handle..😆

Of course seeing such a tender scene, the only one that would burn to see it was our resident "Queen Witch" that has invaded the Ashram... When are these seven days of her stay be over and she can go back to the black hole and plan more murders of the rest of her family...

whether she murders dhani or not.. but premeditated murder she has comitted .. every time she conspires to harm dhani

Kanak's next target could be the cook that has made her daughter eat everything in sight and gain weight that has been her bone of contention for a long time......Nobody is safe around our killer Kanak...

yes that is the biggest example , a woman who emtionally abuses her daughter

If Kanak is not planning Dhaani's killing then she is busy brainwashing Raj Laxmi against Dhaani to remove all support from her sons love that she cannot see being happy for even a moment.

its in such moments we find the standing and moral courage of characters like Rajlaxmi..

Viplav and Dhaani both are lost in their need to be together... Dhaani with her gift of the Globe and Viplav in front of a collage of Dhaani's pictures trying to get over their meeting spoiled by "Buttinsky" Kanak...

yes true.. but she couldn't disconnect them from thinking about each other

The Black Cat has moved on to Cat Heaven but the one left behind in K T is still around to ruin the duo from getting together.

one of these days some one is going to step on her tail..better still viplav will bell the cat... give it time!

Well Hammie.. your gift of pleasing everyone with your writing is making us all look for words to applaud your effort...

yes lets share the applaud doll.. my take and readers comments... 😃

Till tomorrow Hammie ... take care and stay away from "Gooseberries"...

I wont dolly

My girls send you their warmest regards...🤗

😃 chin up and much love and thanks for a delightful comment.. yours hammie