3poems on the kheer scene,Dhani's avatar,soap bubble scene.

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Poem 1
What a wonderful description of kheer. I want to eat kheer now right now but I cant because I'm fasting. Not fair jenni.

Wow Rose dr,I tempted u ,u want to taste Kheer,don't worry after u finish ur fast we will drink Kheer by Viplav's hands,how it is??
Poem2
I loved how you described the effect of dhani's outburst on nature. Not only viplav but even nature was awestruck. And I agree viplav's words whether in a speech or otherwise can never be ineffective they touch your heart. So dhani bani sherni

Dhani the Sherni ,ur comments,I loved it a lot Rosey.

Poem 3
What a cute one. Seemed like two innocent kids were playing with the bubbles. Of course their friendship is pure and surely one day it will change into divine love.

ROSE DEAR U MADE ME BLUSH HERE BY UR COMMENTS,SO LOVELY ,U PEOPLE ARE KIND ENOUGH IN GIVING ME COMMENTS MY DEARS.
Amazing work jenni enjoyed all the three poems.

THANKS A LOT ROSEY DEAR😳😃

Now next that hand holding scene?

SURE I WILL WRITE A POEM ON THAT .

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Jenny⭐️...these poems are just mind blowing..you never fail to amaze me🤗...whole time reading your poem just make me wonder " WHAT IF SOAP, KHEER REALLY HAVE FEELINGS😳" ...

wow rukiaa I am so glad u loved my poems and that made u think whether Kheer and Soap bubbles had feelings really made my day dear.

"Was that milk which was added to it,

No ,it was snow melted by God poured from heaven was mixed in it,

I can't ever believe if it comprises of Kaju or pista,

But it is a cuisine of her purity's holy manifesta,

Is she do it by adding sugar ,

Or just crushed loads of honey and creams to prepare a exotic variety of sugar,

That even the tasteless buds in my mouth ever discovered ,..."

this is just

EVEN I AM JUST DREAMING FOR THIS...

" Her performance's needs a applause ,as it was the extreme avatar that made each and every one happy,

Which was fullfilled by the claps of our Vakil,Viplav tripathi,

Dhani u girl u r so bold and one day u will overtake Viplav Tripathi,

That is after u join in his life as Mrs.Viplav Tripathi..."
these lines, really a awesome avatar of dhani👏👏 as for bold lines "☺️"
FOR BOLD LINES,EVEN I GIVE A BLUSH,I LOVED WHILE WRITING THAT LINE.
and no words to describe beauty of soap bubbles scene and the way you put this in poem❤️❤️

THANK U SOO MUCH RUKIAA DEAR,FOR UR VALUABLE COMMENTS...

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: --SudhaS--
Wow Jenny, your poems are simply beautiful. My personal fav is the first poem on the kheer scene, you've described Viplav's emotions so well in your poetic verses! You're getting better and better! Great job, keep writing👏

thanks a lot Sudha dear,for ur wonderful comments😳😳 I am glad that u liked my poems😳😃

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: pressu
Awesom yaar. So good.👏
Each and every line is so nice.😳

Thank u soo much Pressu di😳😳

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: chocobrownies
Wow..! Jenny 👍🏼
All these poems are so meant for ViDha..! Loved all 3 but bubble part was simply terrific ..! ❤️

Thank u soo much Archana dr for ur awesome comments dearo😳😳

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tahera57

@tahera57

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

all three poems so nice Jenny loved the Last one Bubbles was so cute.

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tahera57
all three poems so nice Jenny loved the Last one Bubbles was so cute.

thank u soo much tahera dear for ur comments😳😳

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AISHWARYA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hey Jenny superb post yaar though read it in hurry even then I liked it dear will give detailed insight into it once I am back yaar

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Rerose.. jenni.. poems

First one on the kheer is a delectable poem , that brought out the flavour of the sweet dish as it becomes a sweet connection between Viplav and Dhani.. I loved the use of words and emotions where a dish prepared by a beloved is brought out in the form of verse..

In the second poem Dhani's stoic , tough determined woman.. as you and Viplav call her the Dhani of Benaras.. loved how you summed up her life and then pronounced her as Viplav's wife in the end..

The last bubble poem is featherweight and iridescent.. so was there connection.. still unnamed ..but subtly defined.. beautifully penned.. gave an ethereal feeling..

Thanks jenni for your wonderful poetic efforts in celebrating some endearing events that bring out the best in Viplav and Dhani.. ..

keep up the grand work of bringing much joy for IKRS members.. much love hammie

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samanthana

@samanthana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Wow Rerose.. Iam mezmerized with your poetrical words

CAPTIONS are very apt for each poems "DELICOUS MEDICINE APPLICABLE FOR LOVE MEDICINE " AND BUBBLES OF EXTREME DELIGHT " . and not but not least

But Viplav tripathi's eyes will save my words from u folks,

It can sense those magical effects of mesmerization,

Wow Good going dear .. ROCK IT

Edited by samanthana - 9 years ago