3poems on the kheer scene,Dhani's avatar,soap bubble scene. - Page 3

Originally posted by: AISHU183

Hey Jenny superb post yaar though read it in hurry even then I liked it dear will give detailed insight into it once I am back yaar

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Rerose.. jenni.. poems

First one on the kheer is a delectable poem , that brought out the flavour of the sweet dish as it becomes a sweet connection between Viplav and Dhani.. I loved the use of words and emotions where a dish prepared by a beloved is brought out in the form of verse..

In the second poem Dhani's stoic , tough determined woman.. as you and Viplav call her the Dhani of Benaras.. loved how you summed up her life and then pronounced her as Viplav's wife in the end..

The last bubble poem is featherweight and iridescent.. so was there connection.. still unnamed ..but subtly defined.. beautifully penned.. gave an ethereal feeling..

Thanks jenni for your wonderful poetic efforts in celebrating some endearing events that bring out the best in Viplav and Dhani.. ..

keep up the grand work of bringing much joy for IKRS members.. much love hammie

Originally posted by: samanthana

Wow Rerose.. Iam mezmerized with your poetrical words

CAPTIONS are very apt for each poems "DELICOUS MEDICINE APPLICABLE FOR LOVE MEDICINE " AND BUBBLES OF EXTREME DELIGHT " . and not but not least

But Viplav tripathi's eyes will save my words from u folks,

It can sense those magical effects of mesmerization,


Wow Good going dear .. ROCK IT

Originally posted by: sreelovesindia

jenni...i am sure mishal will be happy to read your dish...

It was so sweet that i could have diabetes so soon...

And, in the world of IKRS, you are a full moon...

A moon which will give peace and happiness to the viewers..

And you make people infected with vidhaani fevers.

Originally posted by: _zari_

So beautifully described all 3 scenes with ur poems 👏, hats off to u girl 😛

Originally posted by: abshcool

Omg di it was fantabulous...the way u shaped up the poem 👏

The phrases n the comparisons used were dn wid so perfection 👏

The most imp thing di:

The topics u chose fr the poem was interesting n made me hooked to it...😳

I wud hv never imagined to write a poem on these scenes.

Di u r a gem...😳😳😳

Title of the second poem was fab...n the i loved the kheer wala the most...,,oxymoron to the medicine...,,,yup di u did a gr8 job...,,👏

Waiting eagerly fr the next poems...,.