A Poem/Os on the entry of Viplav into the ashram.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys my next attempt of poetic work is of today's scene,I loved the way our hero entered the Ashram,it was soo lovely hence I am hereby presenting my work following a lot of imaginations in order to structure it hope u guys enjoy it.
A DAY OF REMEMBERANCE
There was a cool breeze which was flowing by the stream,
A man who was dreaming caught up with that gleam,
He was sure that he wasn't the one he is,
Hence we wanted to clarify who actually he is,
But where could he get the treasure,
In order to make his life a measure,
He was jumbled in thoughts,
He crumbled because of his heart's that foughts,
He was wasn't in the wavelength,
That patched up with his eyeslength,
He asked to him several times,how could I get into the problematic will,
I must console her otherwise ,she will act per her will,
Apology is what my mother resists,
For which ,I am going to pay the credits,
Here u go ViDha Ashram,I do come,
In order to make u as my home,
Oh! no worries at all I won't try to spoil ur sanity,
I would control my mouth and gestures of naughty,
But please do give me an opportunity,
To forsake a princess of ur sanity,
I require a lot of power to make her better,
I will do it and u do watch me further,
As he enters the santified place of the city,
Which was more pure than the temple of the city,
Angels from heaven poured wishes on him,
They add their superblendid simile to him,
The birds of the sky made his voice so clear,
They gave him their art of screaming with fear,
He the one who was a mixture of them,
Ascertained the prince of the pleasant gem,
He used his powers,smiled hard on her,
He entered the house which was entirely due to her,
Life has something,life has a meaning,
It is clear through Viplav 's entry into the Ashram screening,
His eyes emitted the love of light,
He tried hard to make fer focus he made a fight,
Silence is what he couldn't bear,
When he is near her as a pair,
The small birds of this world are quite know,
His glow is actually because of her blow,
This entry marks a beginning,
Of an age of sensual love and romantic hearing,
Decadance is what we can't take it as of now,
Because it is our Viplav and Dhani's love owe.
Edited by rerose - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful poem my dear 😳😳
Wonderful lines Jenny dear 😳😳
The use of words brought out the True feelings of Viplav 😳😳
I just love it 😳😳

These likes are more lovely 😳

Here u go ViDha Ashram,I do come,
In order to make to make u as my home,
Oh no worries at all I won't try to spoil ur sanity,
I would control my mouth and gestures of naughty,
But please do give me an opportunity,
To forsake a princess of ur sanity,
I require a lot of power to make her better,
I will do it and u do watch me further,



The last likes were lovely too 😳

His eyes emitted the love of light,
He tried hard to make fer focus he made a fight,
Silence is what he couldn't bear,
When he is near her as a pair,


Edited by Guruvishva - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yipee after many days I'm the first to ResRes😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Wonderful poem my dear 😳😳

Wonderful lines Jenny dear 😳😳
The use of words brought out the True feelings of Viplav 😳😳
I just love it 😳😳

These likes are more lovely 😳

Here u go ViDha Ashram,I do come,
In order to make to make u as my home,
Oh no worries at all I won't try to spoil ur sanity,
I would control my mouth and gestures of naughty,
But please do give me an opportunity,
To forsake a princess of ur sanity,
I require a lot of power to make her better,
I will do it and u do watch me further,



The last likes were lovely too 😳

His eyes emitted the love of light,
He tried hard to make fer focus he made a fight,
Silence is what he couldn't bear,
When he is near her as a pair,


Thanks a lot my dear Radnes but why is ur like na u didn't hit the button for me😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Yipee after many days I'm the first to ResRes😆😆

Ya exactly after ages...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yay I knew u wud come up with a beautiful poem jenny
No words to describe coz each word has it's own significance loved every bit of the poem jenny
Ur posts seems to get better and better everyday 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AISHU183

Yay I knew u wud come up with a beautiful poem jenny
No words to describe coz each word has it's own significance loved every bit of the poem jenny
Ur posts seems to get better and better everyday 😛

Ohh thank u soo much di,u people are the driving force behind my talent,thanks a lot😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rerose

Thanks a lot my dear Radnes but why is ur like na u didn't hit the button for me😆

Oops sorry actually my net is horrible though I press it take hours😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey jenny ur poems are really making those scenes memorable for us..
awesome poem...no words for praising.ur just amazing...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely work from a great writer..haven't seen the episode .. i am wondering do i need to see it?your poem has set the scene.. i can visualize the new entrant into a women zone..
well done .. bravo!
love hammie

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