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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm not sure what is up with the writing and editing department of this show but they really need to consider how they are doing their jobs.


Today's last scene regarding Viplav's guilt conscience and defensiveness came almost out of nowhere😕...It's like one second before they were showing him goofing around with his family and then they suddenly cut to him being all brooding sitting with his friends...where is the build up?😕


The scene was good otherwise but the fact that it wasn't given build up or basis made it seem disjointed for me...his friend told him all home truths but even now their relationship seems half-baked and not so well built up...it's as if the characters are put in simply to project a moral or lesson per convenience without really building them up.

This scene needed bit by bit build up and connections over the epi to show that this was on Viplav's mind and he just burst out in the end...but no, they just didn't bother with that😕


When they don't weave the scenes together, it will undermine the story.


Yes, Viplav needed a reality check about his spoilt brat ways and the hollowness inside but I wish it could have been done in a more credible fashion.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Totally agree. This is the second time I felt... Huh... What... How... When... Emotions r from one extreme to the other.
It got me thinking that maybe his happy and fun mood in the hse is a facade and with his friends he is himself...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Agree Anu. Not sure why Viplav didn't want to drink and why was he in a bad mood.😕 The jeep scene with the campfire reminded me so much of Dutta and Baji's scenes. 😆 Dutta got enlightened so many times like this. So did Viplav.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks, guys...good to know it's not just me feeling that...lol like I just browsed the spoiler bts pics thread and look at all these scenes that seems like they've been shot way back but are yet to air in the show😕...even the recent on location videos which had Viplav, Dadaji and Dhaani in some scene haven't been shown...they are randomly jumping around in the story and it seems like some scenes have been edited out😕



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AreYaar

I'm not sure what is up with the writing and editing department of this show but they really need to consider how they are doing their jobs.


Today's last scene regarding Viplav's guilt conscience and defensiveness came almost out of nowhere😕...It's like one second before they were showing him goofing around with his family and then they suddenly cut to him being all brooding sitting with his friends...where is the build up?😕


The scene was good otherwise but the fact that it wasn't given build up or basis made it seem disjointed for me...his friend told him all home truths but even now their relationship seems half-baked and not so well built up...it's as if the characters are put in simply to project a moral or lesson per convenience without really building them up.

This scene needed bit by bit build up and connections over the epi to show that this was on Viplav's mind and he just burst out in the end...but no, they just didn't bother with that😕


When they don't weave the scenes together, it will undermine the story.


Yes, Viplav needed a reality check about his spoilt brat ways and the hollowness inside but I wish it could have been done in a more credible fashion.



yes, me too felt the same; but 4 different reasons.the scene could have started like viplav thinking about the tickets of delhi and then dhaani, her forgiveness. like her closing of doors on his face. or a scene were vips see people taunting dhaani and even the scene where she was about to get beaten -up and vipls arrived & saved her. OH GOSH !! WHAT AN INTENSITY, WHATA N CHEMISTERY WAS THERE between the 2. and the intensity ion the eyes of vips after seeing dhaani's face WAS TOO GOOD; TOO GOOD. 👏

HAILA !! found the missing base,😛 yes, this scene must have shown TO PORTRAY THE REASON THAT WHY VIPS IS SAD and as a task is remaining, unaccomplished ; he is not happy to go Delhi. yes, this was missing. 😊

but dear, i think this is come out in open in the coming episodes. i think we should hook to FIND THE REASON.

and how dare his frined to utter this nonsence, 😡

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dixie123

Agree Anu. Not sure why Viplav didn't want to drink and why was he in a bad mood.😕 The jeep scene with the campfire reminded me so much of Dutta and Baji's scenes. 😆 Dutta got enlightened so many times like this. So did Viplav.




LOL yes the jeep and campfire gives obvious Dutta deja vu but these friends are so random😕😆...DuJi scenes were always well written and had genuine camaraderie.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i understand that viplav didn't want to drink alcohol beacuse it was sharab that started all the mess but yes it looks like the editors have cut some scenes. i hope it does not bother trp and the channel runs the show properly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was good to see that the hero's friends are not just a chamcha. they can shout at him and show him when he is wrong. hopefully they will always be equal friends and not just there to make viplav into a god 🤪
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Whatever viplav's friend was drinking really had something in it. He started from nowhere 😆 Yeah it was due but like this from this one?? The writers need to gather themselves before it's too late. So disappointing to see this haphazard sequence of scenes . What a waste of a different story line. And what is dhani's plan?? After all this she still thinks he is a monster?😡 The precap 😡😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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actually ..whole show has so many loopholes..they had cut and joint so many different pieces together ..just have a one question ..if you have marvelous actor like mishal ..then you just need to drive story better and do execute scenes well ..but they are failing to do justice with mishal ..
I daily get something to yell but I calm myself coz we are the who are watching show for our hero..they hadn't compelled us either..

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