The Fateful Evening..Arjun Draupadi OS .Thread 4

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 6 years ago

#151

It was a pathetic moment witnessed by the wheel of time at Hastinapur that evening.

The emperor is sobbing uncontrollably wailing for his mother.

Bhimsen is crying like a baby keeping his head on Nakul's shoulder Who in turn is trying to suppress his sorrow to offer his strength to his dear brother.

A little away Arjun is standing like a rock without tears in his eyes.with Sahadev shaking him up rigorously and asking him in between his sobs...Why did she leave me Bharata...

Narada told how the forest fire broke within minutes without letting Old king,Gandhari and Kunti to move away to safety..

Sanjaya was literally driven away from that place in time by the king who did not want him to sacrifice his life in that disaster..

Womenfolk can not control themselves from crying ..and blaming the supreme god for causing such death to Kunti Who was an epitome of affection and motherly love.

Dharmaraj Yudhishtir furiously asked Narad..' Arjun helped Agnidev to satisfy his hunger during Khandav dahan..is this the way he return the favour?

Next moment he stretched his hands up and wailed..Mata must have thought Bhim will come and save her. I will protect her from fire...or her dearest Sahadev will

Draupadi raised her eyes filled with tears ,surprised...

Subhadra shouted..Where are you bua? You love me so much don't you feel the need to tell me once? How could I bear this pain?

The city of Hastinapur mourned for the king,Gandhari and mostly for Kunti..

People felt so bad for noble Kunti who never lived a happy life except for the years she lived 8n Indraprasth.

Draupadi searched everywhere but did not find Pragati..She Shivered with fear..She ran towards the lake where Arjun always goes in the evening...She could see her Pragati sitting with head on her knees

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paartha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#152

Nice update after a long time!

Please post the continuation soon, would love to have the story moved forward soon.

Thank you.

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Jaishnavi Krishnaa

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Posted: 6 years ago

#153

Happy Vijaya Dashami everyone...

Sorry for being so late..

Umm...the update was really emotional...and indeed beautiful...

Loved it , I may not comment here regular like before because I have exams

But still update SOON di as I'll definitely read if can't do comment...

Thank you

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 6 years ago

#154

Pragati did not raise her head. Draupadi sat down and took her on her lap. She knew how much Pragati love Kunti..More than her Kunti nourished her.. It is too difficult to console Pragati..If Arjun is There he would have done that..but he was with Sahadev who could not be pacified ...he is crying like a baby and Arjun is trying his best..

Pragati's sobs are also not coming out as she suppressed her sorrow in her throat.

Pragati..don't do that..,let your tears flow...your grandmother is watching you dear.,,she will feel bad for you...

Pragati looked at her mother and stammered..Maa..Why did firegod burn my dadi Mata? Pitasri helped him...cured him from his sickness...

Panchali wiped her tears with her Lallu end..Yes Pragati..Agnidev should not have done that..but what can we do Putri? No one can predict future..Control your self..,we lost Abhi..your brothers,Kirti your mamasri...now your dadi Mata.. We still are surviving.. Pray for her..Pragati..that she should reach your Pitamah Pandu Maharaj.

Panchali forcibly took Pragati to her mansion and made her sleep..She sat beside her looking at her face..

How could she forget the day she gave birth to Pragati! Her cute little baby instantly won the heart of her grandmother..Kunti stayed in her chamber all those days looking after Pragati.

And the day she left her with Kunti while leaving for forest..Kunti wept uncontrollably and took the baby on her heart..The way she was insulted in Dice hall shattered her to a great extent..

Without saying anything she asked for forgiveness by hugging Arjun..she sensed why she did so..

Suddenly Panchali felt his touch on her waist.

Arjun sat on the floor placing his head on her lap,clasping her waist.

She did not light up the chamber as usual fearing Pragati may get up ..

Arjun's tears have made her saree wet...he is letting out his tears like never before..

I could not save her..I failed Krishnaa..his voice broke and he rolled his head vigorously..This Arjun did not save Abhi,Kirti and now Mata,,

Panchali melted at heart..she knew how attached Arjun was with Kunti..She bent over him and took him closer ..he needs her warmth...to come out of his sorrow..

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paartha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#155

Very nice and emotional update. Please post the continuation soon. Thank you.

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bubulswt

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Posted: 6 years ago

#156

amazing update loved it

happy diwali every one in advance

see you all after diwali

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 6 years ago

#157

It has been one month since Pandavas lost their mother in an unfortunate forest fire accident.

Hastinapur paid tribute to the departed souls,Dhritarashtra,Gandhari and Kunti. The rituals were performed under the guidance of Dhaumya ..

Royal Palace is getting back to normalcy with great effort since the administration should not be neglected.

Parikshit is the saving grace for the brothers..the boy tried his best to bring back prasannata on Arjun's face and smile on others' face.

Pragati stopped interacting. causing anxiety to Panchali. The girl looked detached and disconnected.

Arjun did not try to disturb her despite Panchali's protests. He knew his daughter needs more time to recover..

On a sunny afternoon Arjuna got a surprise visitor who just rushed to him when he is with his commanders of Hastinapur on the outskirts of Hastinapur.

The stranger covered his face with head guard and hastily touched Arjun's feet without removing it. Arjuna looked down and identified ...Satyaki...he uttered his name with delight. Satyaki took away his head guard and stood with folded hands..

Arjuna hugged him close...Why did you not send me message? And where is Madhav? Surely he should be here to console us..his last duty towards his bua..Arjun has tears in his eyes.

Satyaki said in an apologetic tone..He really wanted to come but His father is seriously ill after knowing about Kunti Bua..He asked you to be bold and face the situation. Here he gave this letter..

Arjun could not wait to read it. Satyaki walked towards the chief commander and enquirer his welfare..he knew him too well.

Arjun's vision blurred with tears..he wiped them and..

Parth

Don't shed tears for Bua..She faced so much in life...she deserves to be with Maharaj Pandu.

Parth..believe me..she united with him finally..I could see them happily together atlast..People think Maharaj Pandu loved Madri the most..but I know..he loved your mother so much..and it is the truth.

Parth..did you remember our conversation at Indraprasth? About first wives? That is true..We love our first wives more than others though we dont express it openly.

Your father also did the same..he never admitted it..but he held bua close to his heart. Now they both are having fulfilment by being with each other.

I will try to come over there..even if I won't feel me with you as always.

Tell Krishnaa to look after you and help you in overcoming the pain.

Tell Subhadra not to feel sad for bua..

Be strong and complete the responsibilities entrusted to you. I promise we will unite again and it is for eternity..

Arjun sighed with relief..he needed his Madhav's words ..and he got them..

Edited by ltelidevara - 6 years ago