The Fateful Evening..Arjun Draupadi OS .Thread 4

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Jaishnavi Krishnaa

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Posted: 6 years ago

#171

Very beautiful update... Love their conversation...

Update soon di

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 6 years ago

#172

Arjuna knitted his eyebrows. Satyaki went off but influenced Pari with his anecdotes on the past events. Suka was away from Hastinapur so Pari missed his narration's.

Satyaki described Gurukul of Dronacharya in such a way that Pari is adamant to go there. Previously when Pari was a two year old all the family members visited Gurukul. After that only he is going there to look after guru Mata.

Pitamah I will come with you... Pari insisted ..he knew Arjun goes there every month.

Arjun chided him...Pari what will you do there? Gurumata is not well. She is sick. If you come she will exert herself to cook by herself for you..

Subhadra who just entered supported Pari...Let him come...I would say we also will come..After Bua passed away everywhere gloom only I am feeling..Gurumata is close to Bua..She must be shattered. She will feel happy seeing Pari..specially ask your queen to accompany...

Arjun looked at her hearing her last words. Subhadra smiled and said...Don't look like that. I mean it. I observed how much gurumata loves her..

Draupadi did not feel like going there..Gurumata will get stressed up..on seeing us. It is not goid for her health.. You told me she is almost bed ridden.

Arjun has moisture in his eyes..he knew it was the last phase for his gurumata.But atleast for the last time if she sees them both she will feel happy..

Arjun took Panchali closer and said.the same..Panchali gazed into his hazel eyes...so many memories they both have of that special place.. Who knows when their journey come to an end? Better to live the moments by revisiting Gurukul..

Arjun observed her thoughts and smiled...Now you understood why I want to go there..

Arjun walked out and found the brahmin boy from Gurukul..Why did he come? Is gurumata well! He is sceptical as he opened the letter handed over by him.

Arjun

Bring Draupadi with you this time. I am going to meet your Gurudev very soon. For the last time I want to spend with you and peacefully close my eyes.

Day after tomorrow is your Gurudev birthday..I want you both to light up Diya at his idol Bring others also..specially Pragati and Pari.

Arjun nodded his head and asked the brahmin boy to stay ..Tomorrow we will come with you..he informed.

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paartha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#173

Nice update, please post the continuation soon. Would be good to have the story updated quickly now, like previously. Thank you.

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Jaishnavi Krishnaa

@Arjunmesha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#174

Such emotional parts are going on !!!😭

I loved your Gurumata... She was my favorite after Mata Gandhari...

I loved their all Gurukul moments...

Romantic... Those moments were

But this one probably will be emotional

Thank you :-)

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paartha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#175

Could you please post updates to the story. It has been a long time, please move the story forward.

Thank you very much.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 6 years ago

#176

Gurukul invited Arjuna with open arms. He was coming after two months. Kunti's demise did not allow him leave Hastinapur..for a long time.

Pari was So charged up and could not control his excitement. He was beaming in his face for walking on the land ..where his grandfather created history by his excellence.

Arjun made Pari prostrat before Drona's statue..with moisture in his eyes. Arjun..focus on it son..his voice sounded in his ears.

Gurumata could not even get up to greet them.Draupadi hugged her and made her sit with the support of pillows.

Arjun who sat in the floor near her feet...she shed tears.. He felt Kunti's voice in his ears. Phalgun...

To be continued

Edited by ltelidevara - 6 years ago

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 6 years ago

#177

It took great effort from Arjuna and Draupadi to console Gurumata who could not come out of her grief for Kunti's demise.

The next day being Drona's birth day Arjuna did arrangements to celebrate the occasion. The students of Gurukul decorated the Gurukul with flowers and collected fruits.

Arjuna started the day with a prayer at Drona's statue. Gurur Brahma gurur Vishnu..resounded every where filling even the space.

Arjuna conducted competitions in which Pari also participated.Kripacharya judged the participants.

Parikshit excelled in archery but came second in sword fight.

Nakul teased him feigning anger..,You take Bhrata Arjun seriously but won't pay attention in sword fight.

Pari bent his head and said.,Please forgive..I will improve my skills.

Bhima lifted him up and grumbled..,Nakul..don't question him. Don't you know he is still a kid?

Arjuna nodded his head in desperation and praised Gurukul students..He gifted them with good bows arrows and other weapons.

And then he let them play games..Pari joined and enjoyed so much.

Gurumata Who came out of the hermitage after many months smiled on seeing celebrations around.

She addressed Drona as if he is before her.

Gurudev..Your Arjun will make you immortal. His legacy continues with Pari.

Draupadi and Subhadra served delicious food to all the students after sunset. Gurukul students enjoyed the feast so much..

Every one slept due to a busy day.. Panchali and Parth walked in the moonlight..they did not want to break the silence...the musical sound of the waves of Ganga,the moonlight showering nectar made them feel contented..

Panchali looked up in his hazel eyes..Is their journey coming to an end?

Parth smiled reading it in her eyes.

What is end by the way! He questioned...

Panchali did not answer. She kept her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes.. She wanted to feel the moments..that stayed in her memory concerning Gurukul. Arjun took her close and kissed her eyes.

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paartha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#178

Lovely update, Arjun's dedication and love for his teacher was unique. If possible, please do post it regularly.

Thank you very much.

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Pari

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Posted: 6 years ago

#179

It's been long please update soon

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 6 years ago

#180

Arjun looked into her eyes longingly..He said with a smile...You think so? I don't. Our journey is eternal..Krishnaa we are together since ages..we will be so...

Panchali smiled back...She doesn't know if they are together before..and she has no idea about the future.But...this journey in this life with him is worth all the pain and struggles..they went through..In one birth they endured the pain as well as bliss..

Arjun took her. close..She did not change. She still looked young,beautiful and she loves him like she did years back.. Her heartbeat chants his name and he could still hear it. Draupadi ruffled his hair and asked...What are you thinking?

Arjuna became serious...Thinking about how you stopped aging but we all aged fast.

Now I seriously need to take care not to stand beside you..

Panchali laughed and taunted...Enough Of your lies..,Even now when we are coming towards Gurukul...Hastinapur female population could not stay back but to see you 9n horseback..You waved at them and smiled back..

Arjuna had a mischievous glint in his eyes...Kerping track of me always...queen...You are too insecure..he teased.

Panchali is defiant...Ofcourse I should do so...when my husband could have besotted admirers even when he became a grandfather..she said.

Arjun raised his eyebrows..You think I became a grandfather so I would not be as effective as I was before? Let me prove it...He bent down,lifted her and started walking..

Panchali clasped his neck and closed her eyes..She went back to the golden past..her first visit to Gurukul when he carried her just like he did now

Years back

Panchali could not help but stare into his beautiful face..She is irritated that her long curls are obstructing her vision by falling over her eyes..Her one hand is at his back and another she can't lift lest he would understand her intention.

Suddenly she felt his hit breath on her face..,he is blowing off her curls..bending closer to her face..

He then looked down and said ..Now you can fulfill your wish..I will take care of your curls...Panchali profusely blushed..He understood her passionate gaze..at his face...she closed her eyes feeling shy.

Arjun bent down and kissed her eyes...

Panchali pulled herself from her past ..she felt the warmth of his lips on her eyes. They are reliving the moments..blissfully.

Edited by ltelidevara - 6 years ago