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Posted: 7 years ago
Woww!!!awsome update & little emotional... How good it would be if Draupadi stay at Arjun's mansion with him...but..😭...please update the next part soon...I always wait for your update😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Brilliant update...whenever i read about draupadics pain i feel like as if i am witnessing that pain in front of my eyes... Her waiting her dreams her love her desperation her heart break her dilemma everything... U really r expwrt in penning her condition n i always feel like cry n the line where she thought of her dream which is no shattered that is being with arjun in his chamber as his queen n now subhadra is the queen of his chamber n his heart ufff😭 that just killed me...
I dunno how could u write it so brilliantly... Ur every word bears that emotion n beauty[BTY I M NOT FLATTERING ITS A TRUTH😆]

Waiting for another piece n want to see how panchali is gonna kneel down before her heart...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Panchali woke up a little late and is in hurry to attend on worship.. Last night she slept so late immersed in her confusing thoughts.. She deliberated whether to wear the special garments or not and slept undecided..She now has to make it up by being in the worship room atleast in half an hour time.

Suddenly she saw Priyamvada enter with Malini . They are holding a tray in which so many fragrant scents and herbal oils are there mixed up with rose petals.

Panchali looked surprised and said" maasi.. Why did you bring all these? I have to go in time for worship. Already I am late."

Priyamvada started loosening her hair while Malini applied herbal oil to her hair. Priyamvada assured." Don't worry princess..Kunti said today worship will commence after an hour. She asked me to inform you." Panchali wondered what must be the reason to do so.


Despite her resistance.. Priyamvada made her take herbal bath in scented rose waters with the help of Malini and other maids. She personally held her hair while Malini made the sambrani dhup that made Panchali relax from her tiresome thoughts.


When the red sari is picked for her Draupadi protested." It looks special. I don't want to wear..


Priyamvada did not agree . She just proceeded in her own way..and the end result is unbelievable. Priyamvada hugged her and declared." I don't think any one as beautiful as you are born in the past. You are simply extraordinary. Princess.. Whoever gave you this will swoon over your beauty today"
Priyamvada smiled with pleasure while Panchali's face turned red.


Priyamvada then opened the door for Maharaj Drupad who looked waiting since a while. Panchali got surprised and asked" Are you fine? Pitasri why did you wake up this early? You need something?


Drupad looked at her with affection and placed his hand on her head." You wore new dress..don't you take my blessing? "

Panchali bent down and touched his feet. Drupad blessed heartfully." May you live with peace and happiness. May you reign supreme in the heart of your husband... He has tears in his eyes.


How did you like your attire selected by Parth?" Panchali turned back and saw Krishna smiling with mischief. Before she could say anything he answered his question himself." Extraordinary. Nothing less than that. You must appreciate Parth..for his taste.

Panchali asked him with suspicion." Govind..you are here at such an early hour? Why? To invite your friend's special guest?

Drupad and Krishna looked at each other meaningfully hiding their smiles.lkrishna approached Panchali and touched her elbow." Let us go Kalyani.. Bua must be waiting for you.he started walking with her who desparately wanted answers for her questions.


The early morning breeze is so soothing and the birds are twittering coming out of their nests.they .sounded sweet.. Panchali felt a strange feeling of contentment that particular moment. What could be the reason she can not fathom.


Krishna looked at her and said tongue in cheek. " Ofcourse your feeling of happiness and relief is the result of someone else's hard work. Don't forget to reward him be fittingly.


Panchali raised her eyebrows." What is the connection between my happiness and your friend? You are too much Govind..she sulked.

Krishna stopped her and questioned looking straight in her eyes. " Say it honestly. No connection at all? Don't I know how you suffered when he was away from you? Now he returned. You continue your angry mode. Still you love him so much. You have only one competitor for you...and that is me.


Panchali smiled at his last words.Knowing all this you made Subhadra live with him before my eyes. And you swear on your concern for me..she did not say it. But her Govind heard it.

He placed his hand on her head and said." It is inevitable. Kuru clan needed that. But I confess.. Your position in his life remain unchanged.. Kalyani..make peace with yourself. Honour your love. Accept his love. You both are made for each other..


Suddenly the musicians started blowing the instruments.. The welcome music that is rendered when she enters the assembly.


Panchali raised her eyes and saw the bards sing songs..not on the Pandavas but...herself.
Suddenly the main priest faced her and blessed her raising his hand. Dhaumya and his desciples started chanting Vedic hymns..


Krishna took Panchali by her hand and made her touch Kunti's feet. Kunti smiled at Krishna and said" Kanha your Sakhi is looking Devine today.. Reason?


Panchali got embarrassed and held the thali to do Aarti to Durga.



Just then she found someone else also hold the thali by placing his hands under hers. Panchali sensed the touch and turned sideways. Arjun smiled at her and turned towards the goddess.



Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update, please continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wowww!!!!!!!awsome...what to say...just...awsome... I just can't imagine how beautiful Panchali really was!! The last part..wow...Parth Panchali together did Mata durga's arti...wow...thank you soo much for this lovely update... Now eagerly awaiting for your update... Please update soon
Edited by UnmeshaAcharya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Panchali felt intrigued. Never did Arjun do puja or Aarti with her..especially before his mother. Why is he so forthcoming,she could not comprehend. And there he is her father..who attended the early morning puja for the first time. She could understand the glow on his face..he is relishing his dream that came true before his eyes. He is finally seeing her as Arjun's wife.

Just as she is in her own thoughts she lost her grip on the thali and Arjun who already took off his hands managed to catch that with his left hand.Nakul who just entered with Karenu applauded Arjun.." Perfect catch Bhrata ..he said.

Kunti who is observing Panchali's state of trance wondered ..the effect her third son has on her Bahu is unmistakable. She could sense her innermost feelings..but only thing she wishes is a little bit control on her feelings...but her Bahu is too transparent,,

Krishna laughed at Panchali and remarked in a low voice." Don't worry. He will take care of everything related to you..
Panchali turned red in face and distributed Prasad to every one.

She left on the pretext of looking after the arrangements for breakfast.

Bheem greeted her and exclaimed." Draupadi you look extraordinary..How nice are the garments. Arjun's taste is too good.

Panchali acknowledged his praise with a smile and asked." Did your brother reveal who is that person for whom this much hungama is happening?
Satya commented from behind." Panchali..Don't you know Arjun.. How stubborn he is! He said within one hour everything will be cleared..

Satya could not stop herself from praising Draupadi.. I am confused..I have to praise your beauty or your husband's selection..

Panchali stopped her from saying more.She is more anxious to find out Arjun's special guest who is not seen anywhere.Bheem asked her to bring the Annapurna thali to take out parts of dishes cooked for the sake of goddess. No one is allowed to go to the private chamber except Kunti and Draupadi.

Panchali went to the small chamber and took the golden thali in her hand..just then she heard Arjun's husky voice so nearer..he is standing almost blocking her from moving any way.

Panchali remained silent observing him.. He said he wanted to look smart on that day...and he is looking too handsome...but for whom? That is her confusion.

Arjun bent over her and appreciated her beauty without any inhibition..his hazel eyes swallowed her every feature,every curve,...You look too beautiful than I ever imagined..he stammered

Panchali felt on top of the world..years back when they were newly married she desparately waited to hear such words from him...but he always looked inhibited even to look at her freely. But now he is so open about his feelings...may be the fact that she belonged to him for three years made him relaxed or may be his experiences with his wives made him open up..confidently..
Suddenly Panchali remembered the special guest..


She looked straight into his eyes and asked." Will you reveal who that special person is?
Arjun laughed throwing his head back.. Then he became serious and said." You will become envious on seeing her. She is unparalleled. No one can stand on par with her.in beauty and grace..


Panchali got angry and confronted." So finally you admit she is another woman in your life. And you want me to do every thing for her sake..or for both of you.. How cruel you are.. Arjun..I hate you.

Arjun enjoyed the change of colours in her face and also the words shot in quick succession..
He took her hand and pressed it against his cheek.. Your words are sharper than my arrows. And your anger? Did you ever look in mirror when you get angry? Your beauty enhances and you look awesome. Please don't stop getting angry with me... If you want I will bring as many co wives to Indraprasth to see your expression..he continued..

Panchali ordered him." Leave my way Arjun.. I have work..she is so distraught on hearing about the special person in his life.


Arjun took her closer and kissed on her forehead..he whispered in low voice..I promise..now in this dining chamber only you will know my special guest.. But I must confess..staying closer to you is so tempting Yajnaseni..you test my control..and I fear I may face defeat.. But Arjun never knows the taste of defeat.. So the only way to save my reputation is ..your forgiveness..
Why can't you offer me solace for all my wrongs done?


Let us enjoy life as never before.. Don't you love me as before? The answer is hidden in your lotus eyes..once you raise them I will win..look at me Krishnaa.. Arjun's manly voice spelt magic on her..the princess of Panchal raised her eyes to look at her Arjun..as if in trance.







Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you every one for your Diwali wishes.

Thank you Divu.. for expressing your feelings for Drau in a beautiful way.

Thank you Sweetika,nityayuvani,Unmesha ,Partha , for liking the story.

Thanks a lot.





Lakshmi
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the nice update, please continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woww!!!Drau become impatiens... Hahahaha... Arjun is really soo naughty(cute)...and our yajna se Nikli yajnaseni as usual got angry at him...hahahaha...😆 awsome update... Please continue soon...as usual I eagerly waiting for it...😳
Edited by UnmeshaAcharya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved both the updatse cordially...magic lies in feelings
I can imagine how the whole palace must have had been excited for panchali's bday...
Awww... Arjun is such a sweet n naughty husband whonis doing so much for his fireborn...
Everthing is just so magnificent n heartwarming...

Eagerly waiting for another awesome piece... Update soon n made fireborn's bday an unforgettable memory...for all ardi admirers...

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