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Posted: 8 years ago
When are you going to update next
Eagerly waiting
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Eagerly awaiting for the update. Please post it soon.
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If possible, please try to update today, all of us are eagerly awaiting:)...Thank you.
The reading of the thread makes me feel good ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Update!update! Update!!! Please didi...I can't wait...😛
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Hopefully, we will have two stories now because of the long wait...
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The very next day a Homa organised by Ved Vyasa for Dhritarashtra made the whole Gangateer wear festive look. Since the royal family is there the preparations were done in a lavish manner despite The Sage protesting against it.
The surrounding villagers attended the place with their families making Bheem and Draupadi's task difficult. Bheem scolded Arjun" why did you not inform us that we have to feed such large numbers?The groceries we brought will not last if we use them today. Still we are staying ten more days. "

Arjun assured Bheem." Bhrata Bheem you utilise whatever you have completely. By tomorrow you will have your store full again.

Nakul teased Bheem." You are worried about tomorrow's meals I know.What if you won't get your daily dose tomorrow...a matter of concern.

Panchali smiled and Sahadev just entered with the message." Bhrata Arjun, your commanders will reach tonite with all th things needed. They already covered half the distance."

Bheem slapped Arjun on his back and exclaimed." Yesterday only we got to know of the Homa.When did you arrange all this?

Arjun replied." Yesterday I sent message to King Sumedha who is nearer to Kurukshetr. I told him we need the food materials,groceries etc by today. Then my commanders are sent on duty. You know they ride the horses fast. As per my calculation they will reach here in three hours from now."

Nakul clapped his hands." Bhrata Arjun,how could your mind work so fast?Now Bhrata Bheem could let the cooks utilise the things without restrictions. "

The Homa happened as planned. The feast was much appreciated. Every one relaxed and became tension free.


That night Subhadra,Chitra and Ulupi pulled Panchali on to the mango grove as her work was done earlier. Let us sit together. We may not be able to enjoy this ambience again. Subhadra said.

Arya came and sat beside Panchali" Mothers are taking rest with Uttara and Pragati.Parikshit is with his grandfather."


Suddenly Chitra asked Subhadra." I heard that a great dual fight happened between Keshav and Arjun once. I am always curious to know it in detail. What lead to that fight between the bosom friends? Please narrate the story."

Subhadra's face turned pale while Draupadi wiped her forehead with her Pallu. How could she forget that dreadful night?


Years back ...Indraprastha is shining with glory due to the third Pandav's victories over all the kings of Aryavarth making way for Rajasuya which is months away ..Krishna Vasudev took leave of Pandavas and went to Dwaraka with a promise." I will return at the earliest. Maximum one month.

He hugged Arjun and said." Parth,here I go and here I come..don't be sad.


Arjun pleaded with him." Please return within ten days..More than that I can not stay without you."

Krishna sighed." I don't want to go but I have to convince Pitasri and bring him here. He fears to travel due to his ill health.

Ten days passed. Arjun is getting desparate. He should return by now he thought.


Panchali ruffled his hair and teased." Already missing Govind? You should have gone with him." The cool night breeze mixed with blue lotus fragrance enveloped Arjun and for that moment he came out of his pain of Madhav's separation. He pulled her closer and asked." Why did you make my Pragati sleep today? Ofcourse your son must have slept today earlier . Did he leave your pallu? He taunted.

Kirti is blissfully sleeping on the couch while Pragati is in jhoola.


Panchali pushed him away and resisted." Again making fun of my Kirti? Your son took after you only. Tell me if you can leave your Kunti maata even now. I know how you runs to her chamber after your archery practice. You will get your daily dose of pampering and then attend on your duties.


Arjun laughed heartfully. He again pulled her closer despite her protest. He threw her curls back and started loosening her hair. The jasmines in her plait intoxicated him and he inhaled the fragrance. Arjun then wiped off the sweat drops from her forehead with his lips.

Panchali closed her eyes in anticipation. She knew he will make her drown deeper into the depths of his passion and love.


Malini's knock on the door brought the couple out of their trance. Panchali wondered why Malini is disturbing them at that hour of night.

Arjun has an annoying expression on his face. He pulled her nearer and stammered." Ask her to wait till tomorrow.


Malini again knocked on the door with a call..Rani Subhadra's maid jaya is here.. She has a message for Rajkumar Arjun.


Arjun and Draupadi looked at each other surprised. There is a norm. When he is with any of his wives others wont disturb. Then why did Subhadra sent the message. Is Abhi well"

Subhadra's maid Jaya said." Princess Subhadra wishes to see you immediately. Abhimanyu is well. He is sleeping."

Arjun and Draupadi sighed with relief. Arjun touched her cheek smoothly and warned." I will just come back. Don't sleep ...


After he left Draupadi wondered What urgency made Subhadra send such a message? Her right eye throbbed indicating something that is not good...going to happen.but what is that?


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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful piece of writing... 😊
Whole enivornment is so calm n serene giving mental peace...
Arjun's intelligence is something... I dunno how to say it but i hope u understand...

N yes... The Arjun Krishna dual that u r gonna mention i have read it somewhere... Weired story i must say.😕 ... All I want to know that is it mentioned in vyas's mahabharata or what??? I ll surely like to know about it n enjoy reading it...

N our ardi moments were just😳 n really arjun cant live without his madhav n nor can arjun's madhav... 😆 n in between this it will be interesting to read about their dual...

Thnx for such a stunning update n plz if possible update soon...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Arjun saw Subhadra in her private chamber with a confused expression. Before he could approach her she alerted him." Ratnavali and Sobhavali are here Arjun...
He then looked at the two ladies whom he saw in Dwaraka during their marriage.
They have a strange expression on their faces ...is it detachment or obstinence? Arjun could not fathom.

Subhadra started ." Their husband fell in danger. Someone took offence to him and vowed to kill him. Now who would want to live without husband? They want to sacrifice their lives...they already prepared fire pits in our garden.
Arjun knitted his eyebrows, Self immolation! In their place? Without their knowledge? What will Eldest say? He is irritated and outrightly questioned." What offence did he commit?

Subhadra answered." He is flying in his viman you know he is a Gandharv by mistake he ate fruits and spit the seeds down to the earth. They fell in the hands of a sage Galav who is doing Surya Namaskar. He got angry and sought the protection of a very powerful person to slay him.

Arjun..these are my friends asking for help. Please save their husband. For me you should do this.Subhadra looked into his eyes with all her love oozing from them.

Arjun got absorbed in her loving eyes but his smart mind could not help but think that something wrong is going to happen.
Arjun asked Subhadra." Why can't he go and beg pardon? Sages always will forgive if you accept your fault. That powerful person also may oblige. But who is he? Arjun repeated his question.

Ratnavali spoke reluctantly." Whoever he is,now my husband is the target for him. You are the best of Aryavarth. If you stand on our side we can rest assured. Right now we heard that the sage is in no mood to relent. We beg you .please help us.

Sobhavali looked sharp into Arjun's eyes and retorted." We heard that you broke the rule to save a brahmin's cows and went on exile? Is it true? Or like rumours say you fled away from your first wife? Are you that committed to help seekers like you are praised in songs?

Arjun's jaw tightened while Subhadra's face turned pale. But it is Bheem who came with Draupadi ( Panchali sent for Bheem and brought him there sensing danger for Arjun)

Bheem thundered on Sobhavali" You came to seek his help and you have the guts to taunt him or doubt his integrity? I warn you against saying anything more or you have to pay for the consequences

Draupadi 's face lost colour. What is happening she can not understand.

Ratnavali folded her hands and said." Please forgive my sister. We don't mean to hurt Arjun. We know he is the best. Hence we came here. But...looks like it won't happen. Subhadra..we will go on our last journey.

Subhadra felt agitated. She cried." Arjun stop them. It is not good for us if we let them die. Please.for my sake...for your love for Abhi...do something.

Arjun felt bad. Why should he let two innocent girls die? He should try his best to save...their husband.

He looked at Bheem who nodded his head.. Arjun I will stand by you..he said.

But from whom their husband should be saved? Draupadi's voice was suppressed by Arjun's firm tone" I assure you I won't let anything happen to your husband. Now rest assured.

Draupadi rushed forward and faced Ratnavali." Who is bent upon punishing your husband?


Ratnavali's husband Chitrasen entered and admitted." Krishna Vaasudev. Sage Galav took promise from him that He will punish me for sure.and the punishment will be death sentence."

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Thank you for the nice update. It is very compelling writing to have some many stories interweave. Salute to your amazing story telling skills.
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Originally posted by: Divu55

Beautiful piece of writing... 😊

Whole enivornment is so calm n serene giving mental peace...
Arjun's intelligence is something... I dunno how to say it but i hope u understand...

N yes... The Arjun Krishna dual that u r gonna mention i have read it somewhere... Weired story i must say.😕 ... All I want to know that is it mentioned in vyas's mahabharata or what??? I ll surely like to know about it n enjoy reading it...

N our ardi moments were just😳 n really arjun cant live without his madhav n nor can arjun's madhav... 😆 n in between this it will be interesting to read about their dual...

Thnx for such a stunning update n plz if possible update soon...😊

Divu
You read only one part. Read the next part. By the way this story is from Padmapuran by Vyasa only.


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