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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
Nice OS Proteeti !👏 👏
Loved the way u started out and the way u described ! Interesting ! But only this much ?
I would have loved if u had continue more cause this seems really interesting , prince getting attracted by crystal . ... Unique concept.
Love
Sam

Thank you so much dear! But, I'm very sorry to say, but whatever you read, that was all.

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Maverick_me
The concept is nice and you should write more...this is a preface I believe
What does the prince want to do with the crystal?

Thank you so much Di! But, this not a preface or anything, this is just an OS, on the shorter side. But, I'm thinking of writing a similar story as soon as I get some time. 😊

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: .Enchantress.
Beautiful OS Pro! ❤️ Thanx fr pm. Keep Writing.

Thank you so much Di!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Sonatia
Awesome concept!infact quite interresting. Pls continue dis..the lines were amazing. Even i can fully imagine the scene..but i am nt sure who was the one and who were the queens...and what u properly want to mean.. If u add some more parts for developing the scene to a story,it wud be great...u are indeed a brilliant wr8er... vil be waiting for it.

Thank you so much Mou! (I hope I can call you this!) Sorry, but I'm not continuing this. But yes, I'll write an SS on the same lines.
The prince was Krishna, and queens were his wives, and what I meant by the crystal, was that Krishna, the prince, loses himself for sometime, and plays with the crystal. But the moment Devaki (crown princess) calls him, he has to leave the child behind, and get going with his royal duties. He throws away the crystal hoping that the person to pick it up would be a younger one, with lesser responsibilities in life.

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: --GOLD--
Nicely written Radhika 😊

Thanks Golddi!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: KURT15
Nice OS Proteeti. It is intriguing and quiite unique. May I add my voice to all the others and request you to make this a SS at least?😉

Thank you so much Geethadi! I won't continue this, but I'll soon try to write an SS on the same lines.

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Urmila11
First of all, thank you for such a poetic OS 👏
Let me try my hand on decoding 😆 this blue Prince is none but our Darling Lord. This ocean may have double significance. Firstly, Dwaraka's ocean, and secondly, the ocean of births and deaths having mortals on its other side. A noble soul (that crystal) had come to His side through that ocean. He picked it up and observed it lovingly. Then left it again for reaching the other end to take another new garment.
You have written so beautifully that one can extract one's own meaning from it 😉 Keep such things coming! Jai Shri Krishna!

Thank you so much Semadi! I'm glad you liked it! And OMG, you've come up with a completely different and a much more mature explanation to this OS! I just went till the playful child within the heart of Dwarkadheesh! 😆 Love you so much!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Avyakta
After reading Urmila's words , now I realised the real meaning of this OS .Thank you Radhika .Want to read more please ...

Thank you so much Di! I'm really sorry, but I'm not continuing this OS. I'll try to write something else on the same lines.