*PARLEEN H0USE* [check pg1 plz] - Page 7

Originally posted by: craZEEinlove

aw kewll..
so i guess we'll ask the otherz and see wat the feel bout dat =)

so far gr888 peom....i luvd ur poem zee...nd d title idea gr8 too...so is d end line gonna b "bring him back with the rest"???

Originally posted by: craZEEinlove

i like what you did to her line
makez it much better =]
but the titles i think itz good but not that great
cuz Parleeen is suppose to belong to alll of india
and not only refer to as Punjab's
cuz that doesn't relate to like his other fans that might be from like Gujurat or bengali or sumthing
so maybe like...
India's Dil : Parleen Gill

how does that sound ?
sorry im soundin so annoying with my suggestionss
idon't wanna hurt newunz feelings
jst sayin my opinionz
hope yu guyz dont mind !

k i change my mind, and i m voting 4 urs!! its rhymes 2, gill and dil! lol

Originally posted by: karan neha4ever

i dont know how to wite poems or stuff

hmm...i will try for sure..i m good at poems😆

Originally posted by: sinzz

though i m not a house member ..but i wud really like to say one thng .. plzz change the title pf the poem from India's Dil ..Parleen Gill to Sab ka Dil Parleen Gill !!!!!!!! because he has many fans out of india .. if u check his personal website u can find thngs wat fans from pakistan have done ..nd ppl in many countries really like him ..............

Originally posted by: craZEEinlove

heres what i got so farr!
it's not finished yett..
tell me if you guys like it..
and yu guys can see what can be changed
and add your own lines


charming, cute, and super sweet
he makes our heart skip a beat.
nice, humble, and never mean
that's our dear Parleen.
he zoomed in our hearts in his bike
then he mesmerized us when he's on the mic
his performances make everyone dance
when he's on stage, no one's got a chance.
his smile lights up a gloomy day
it's just so cute- what can i say!
his innocence, his style, his personality
he's everything an indian idol could be.
his elimination gave everyone a shock
he made everybody cry, even the toughest rock

thats just so super awsum zee!!👏i think we cud foll0w his pattern , what say girls😛