my last n final task 'POEM'

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Anisha

@Cuhrazy.Anisha

Dazzler

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Posted: 18 years ago

IF hi to hai dosra ghar humara,
jisko humnay milkay sanwara.
Contestz,b'days aur parties tammam,
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tania shefu suvi praju heena hetu

and teh most latest saniya and dhvani

aur baaki sabhi

yeh sab hain mere all time yaar

okay its not completely original most if d credit goes to Ahtika winer of the I-F ka lyricist contest

ok saniyuuuuuuuuuu u wanted me to write on if my second family here it is and u didnt say nething abt originality so i think i caught u technicaly😉

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prajakta567

@prajakta567

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

lolz.....ani....so here u complete all ur dares....congratz.......!!!!

Btw the ways....Awesome Poem!!!!! 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

yaa cool poem yaar ...............so u r free frm being bakra next time ....shit!!
koi baat nahi ....botw 3 mein na sahi ........botw 4 mein toh wapas se ban sakti ho 😆 😉

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Anisha

@Cuhrazy.Anisha

Dazzler

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Posted: 18 years ago

he he yesssss yipppeeeee im free from the bakri spell whoopeeeeeeee im human again

ye ye bakri 4 mey mey bakri nahi banungi ab toh wo sab bakre banenge jinney mereko bakra banaya 😛 😉 😛

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Saniya Shah

@Evilgenius_S.S™

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

👏 👏 reallly nice very 1st tryy!! 😃 u knw writing lyrics is a really hard job!! u only cum to knw abt it wen u get 2 write it..........!! i knw na...coz i have written many...---so i thought tmko koi hatke dare dein! 😉 n u provd dat ur a HUMAN..nt a bAKRI! 😆 ========very nicely written...though its short .but as its ur 1st try ...and also i didn't mention it 2 b long enuff........to...its really fine!!!!!!! 😃 bst of luck!
aur haaan ..yea..i didn';t mention abt ORIGINALITY too.....hmmmmmm...chalo koi nai...maaf kia..kya ayd rkhogi! 😳 😆 😉 ==========
GOD BLESS U ALWAYS! 😃 👏