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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: preet_ic



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I am writing about a day in my life. Enjoy it😊

A day in my life that was long, lazy, tyring, boring plus hot and humid.🤢 A day when I felt absolutely uncomfortable and some kind of disturbing feeling was annoying me😕. It was 11 o'clock in the night, I decided to take a walk and headed towards the terrrace. I was feeling better. Clear sky attracted my attention. After a long,long time I was staring at the sky, the moon and the beautiful tiny, thousands and thousands of stars. I felt better or may be happy😊. I was completely immersed and mesmerised by this beautiful scene. Air started blowing hard. It was a feeling that I experienced many times but observed how beautiful it was, for the first time😛. I was walking very slowly, I can say that even a snail would have won the race if it were a contest.😛😉😃
Constantly admiring the sky, I was walking without looking at the ground. Suddenly, I heard something under my slipper getting crushed😕. Immediately I looked down and alas!! I have crushed a cockroach half alive and struggling for life😕. I felt sorry, bad and guilty for hurting a life. I dont like cockroaches but I still felt bad.

I could hear religious songs played in Mata Rani's temple near our home. I prayed to Mata Rani for the well being of cockroach and apologised for hurting it and prayed for its speedy recovery.😆😃

Clouds were moving slowly, "it might rain" I told to myself. I came down.
Next morning I got up and was brushing my teeth, just then I overheard two pigeons talking about me!!! Yes they were talking about me, they said "Look she is the same girl who has hurt chunnu bhai, our friend. Chunnu bhai's two legs, left side ribs and a hand are badly wounded."

I was surprised, shocked and scared. I couldnt believe my ears. They continued "We all shall punish her, by sh*ting on her head, dress and put her through awkward situations wherever she goes."🤢 I was completely numb. I was scared. I didnt feel like going out. After my breakfast I talked some sense to myself. Talking to my reflection inn the mirror I said," Stop being so stupid, how can you hear birds taking, stop making a fool of yourself!" I talked many other things and convinced myself that everything is alright😊.
Convinced that it was my imagination I was prepared to take up a new day. The moment I stepped out of my home I heard somebody calling my name! I looked around for people but no one was calling me. I dismissed it to be my over active brain. I again heard the same voice "Look down, here I am, calling you! look down Preeti". I looked down and to my surprise I found a white rat speaking to me and smiling at me. I screamed at the very sight of it.!!! It said, "Dont worry I am not going to harm you, I am here as a messenger intending to help you and save you!!" I couldnt believe my eyes and ears. My building is a neat and clean place, I never found insects,bugs, worms or animals here, but yesterday night I saw a cockroach aka chunnu bhai and now a rat. I am not only seeing them but also hearing them!! Worried, I asked the rat "who are you? why do you want to help me and save me? what is going to happen to me? Am I dreaming? How can I hear you all? The rat answered me patiently "I am Chaman Lal, the king of rats. I am here because yesterday night you have hurt "Chunnu bhai" and it has approached its community head for justice. Not only the cockroaches but also the lizards, the pigeons, the pigs, the donkeys, the cows, the oxes, the buffaloes, the crows and a variety of birds have joined hands against you. They all wasnt to shit on you and avenge the wounds." It blew my mind, it was somthing that no sensible person would believe, so did I do. I laughed out loud. Chaman Lal added " Preeti, listen dear, only a few of us are with you like we, the rats, the horses, the elephants, the dogs, the cats. Rest are against you. Take this matter seriously, I am not here to crack jokes with you. We all will support you and try our best to save you. Trees, Air, Sky, Moon,Stars,Clouds, Earth,Rain, Lightening, Rainbow, Sun are also in support of you." Chaman Lal was waiting for my response. I asked "why are y;ou supporting me and why are they all trying to put me through this shit.?" Chaman Lal said "we are helping you because directly or indirectly you were nice to us, and not so good to them!!!"

I was totally confused😕, I said "but I never hurt any bird or cow! why are they doing this". Chaman Lal explained "It is a fight not against you but against the human race itself. It so happened that you are the first one! We dont believe in revenge,but they do. But ,it is justified to a great extent. God created us all and has treated us equal, but humans have claimed superiority over others and this is not quite right.!!!" It continued "we want to hold talks with human beings and others want to take action."
"I came here because I could gain easy entry, if a horse or an elephant were to be here , you would harm them!😃 so kindly listen to me and be careful!"
I was seriously ponderingf over Chaman Lal's explaination. I thought of walking to my work place. I started walking, with a very heavy debate in my mind. As I stepped out of my building I saw a lizard staring at me, I ws totally scared, and I ran for my life!!😃😆😆 and alas! I was standing in cow's dung. I was convinced that I am on the hit list of these creatures"
I washed my feet and decided to drive my bike to the work place. Driving on my way to office, I noticed that many of these creatures staring at me with a killer look in the eyes.

Safely, I drove half of the distance. From no where a herd of buffaloes started running toward me😆. Standing at the signal I didnt know what to do!!!!. Amidst the traffic I was terrified. Air started blowing very hard and a whirlpool of wind started and dispersed the herd👍🏼. The buffaloes had to change their way. I realized that Air saved me😉!! Chaman Lal was so true😛. On my way I need to travel through a small,dirty road where 8-10 pigs🐷 were waiting for me😆.!!!! Again petrified, I was not sure whether to move ahead or return back. Flowing along the traffic, I moved ahead, but suddenly the fast moving traffic came to a standstill right in front of the pigs😡. I heard them, they were saying "Let's attack her, and show that we are no less than humans"😃😆. As the leader started leading its gang of pigs😆😆 towards me, some dogs started barking at them👏 and scared the pigs away. Dogs saved me😊!!!. Like this there were many instances on my journey(yes a very long and adventourous journey).😊😛😉

I found some solace in my office. During my lunch break I opened my lunch box and a cockroach landed on my food🤢. I jumped out of my chair. The cockroach said in a threatening voice😆😆 "you didnt do the right thing, but you wont be saved for long". Saying this the cockroach was about to fly on my face, and once again a strong wind blew the cockroach out of the window.😊 I couldnt thank the Air enough for saving my life!!

On my way back to home the road was full of ox,cow,buffalo,donkey dung🤢🤢🤢. Everyone was suffering from the stinking smell. Just then heavy rains lashed the city 😊and the dung was washed away👏👏.I took shelter under a tree. Rain and Tree saved me.

ON the way to home I stopped at Mata Rani's temple and prayed. I was confused I didnt knew what to say or ask for? I apologised for the 😊wounds of Chunnu bhai. To my utter horror I could hear Mata Rani. She was speaking to me, with a beautiful smile.
She said "Dear Preeti you are a very good person, and that is why you are apologising for hurting an insect. How many people does this? You did it. I chose you to go through this trouble because I am sure you will spread the message that "you all are equal". Dont worry go home and relax, I will be with you always, you wont be troubled any further." she smiled. I was horrified. Following rituals, visiting temple is something I do out of compulsion or fear or to ask for help, but when I saw Mata Rani in real I could not react.

While escaping the attacks all the day I reaalized the importance of other living, non-living beings in our lives.😊 To live in peace we have to be at peace with ourselves ,other living beings and the nature.😊

what say people. how was my story. do share your views.

Preeti

kindly dont delete this post as I am suppose to provide links.



crazy_heenz thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
Way 2 go pal.......simply luvd it.....hats off 👏.......u actually did it!!!!!!
Edited by crazy_heenz - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
😲 😊 kya baat hai.....its just going great..preeti tusi great ho...great writing...as usual good sence of humor..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
preet whenever u got to post ne link in here....u ve to type [url in caps]link[/url caps]

neways........it was good yar..... 😃 .....ye to 23 lines nahi uske double honge..... 😆.......neways.......good work preet 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
grrrrrr8 preet.very well written.I must say u tackled this dare very nicely.Well dun babes. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_heenz

Well my task 4 both of u is that u hav 2 write d lyrics of Jo tu Akhiyon Ke Samne...4m IC
Preets u hav 2 write d male 1
n Shraddha u hav 2 rite d female 1

PS: Im sorry but i vanted 2 giv u both a stupid task.....n i found dis d most stupidest task 2 do.........n baadme tum apna chun chun ke badla ley sakti ho!!!! 😊 😊 😊



Jo tu aankhiyon ke saamne nahi rehna
to beeba mera dil mod de...

Tere intezaar mein main bhatakta raha,😊❤️
umar bhar tujhe hi main dhoondhta raha,😛😳
Jo tu mujhe tera apna nahi kehna 😕
to beeba mera dil mod de..😳

Jo tu aankhiyon ke saamne nahi rehna😕
to beeba mera dil mod de.

Bechain dil mein tadap thi tumhari,😉
mere sapno mein bhi jhalak thi tumhari,😳
Jo tu dil ko sukoon nahi deena😕
to beeba mera dil mod de.

Jo tu aankhiyon ke saamne nahi rehna
to beeba mera dil mod de.!!!

Edited by preet_ic - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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srry gals i was not well so didnt come onlinee 😭 😭 😭 ok let me explain u ...ksbkbt is kyunki saad bhi kabhi bahu thi...u both have to just go to that section...and u both have to post pics of this character name lakshaya......and u ahve to post nice nice pics of him...and with pics ...write a luv letter also.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Super Kool

Ok here is the task by for u two is :-

Write a letter to dillo xpressing that ur the best person on this earth.U hav to stress on the fact that he is ur MR.RIGHT and u want to spend ur entire life wid him.Basically a luv letter(Sorry scs07 i kno this ll hurt u.). 😉 😉 😉

All the best. 😊



Hey Super Kool..................main badla zaroor lungi.
Actually after watching the recent episodes of IC , I have changed my mind and I think my Dillu is a super good man.😊
___________________________________________________________

My Dear Dillawar❤️😊,

How are you doing honey? I know you must be feeling trapped between the Kapoor's and the Khanna's🤢, but dear you need not worry about them any more. They will find a way to get together, and we shall find our way to be one.😉😳
Dillu😊who else can call you this way😳except me dear😛. No one on this earth could have realized that your name has such a romantic meaning to it. Look I have analysed it , only to show that how much I Love You.
DILLAWAR means Dil----tera dil, La-----lekar aa, War-----dulhe ko war kehte hain 😳 and you are my DILLAWAR, Dillu.😊😉😳.

I am the one perfect for you and you are perfect for me. Do you know why?

First of all, your and my surname is same "Choudhary", so I need not change my surname after our marraige or add another surname to my current one😃. You are punjabi 'JAT' and I am marwadi 'JAT' , no caste problem. See it is God decided factor.😃

I dont like men sporting moustache and it doesnt look good on you. See another factor workng in our favour. 😆

We would look good as a pair. We both have dracula teeth.😃 Rab ne banayi hai yeh jodi. Duniya ka khoon piyenge hum dono.😆

I dont have a long nose and you have a long, parrot-nose. See, you are making up for my loss.😆😆

Dear Dillu, you own a transport company "Choudhary Transport Company"(I remember your company's name too!!!, ek aur saboot mere pyar ka!❤️). I am doing my double MBA, together we will flourish our business.😉😉 Kaam ka kaam aur pyaar ka pyaar👍🏼❤️, sara din ek saath.😳 In case labourers dont turn up for work, we will drive the trucks and romance each other in those trucks.😳haila, mujhe to abhi se sharam aa rahi hai.😆

I have made up for your study loss. Yaar, yeh to upar wale ki hi marzi hai. Ab to koi bhi is rishte se inkaar nahi kar sakta.😉

Our physique matches too😆, Our height, colour complexion etc.are almost similar. Apart from this, even I have a brain that thinks👍🏼, two eyes, two ears, a nose that is running 24x7(sinus ka problem hai na!! see I am not hiding anything from you!!), a tounge, 32 teeth(4 wisdom tooth, I said my brain works!), two legs, two hands👍🏼, and many more 😉baaki shaadi ke baad.😳

Dillu, I am not a great foodie, so after the marraige dont force me to gobble down those mega siezed glasses of lassi😳, and yes I can make delicious aloo ke parathe too!!!.😛😛And I can bet that you will love them.
Pyaar se khilana aur mein ek paratha zyada khaloongi.😉

I like your parents too😊. Yes, I simply love the way your......ahem........I mean our bauji talks and laughs.😆😆😆 I always wanted to meet santa claus in my childhood, but I never got a chance to do so. Bauji's tone matches santa babas voice😆😆, so every year on christmas we will ask him to dress up like santa baba......!!!!!!!!!How family oriented I am. 😆
He is also planning to send you and his daughter-in-law to USA for honeymoon. I have already applied to many universities for my further studies, to, ek teer aur do nishaan, honeymoon aur padhai saath-saath ho jayegi. Bas honeymoon thoda lamba ho jayega.😳

Our Maa is also a nice lady😊. She doesnt speak much😛 and the best part is she is always seen doing something or the other for her bahu😃. I want to be her Bahu. She is so understanding, her smile is so innocent, she is a pious, religious lady, looking after the family.I admire her.😊😊 Imagine we all as a family. I cant curtail my happiness.
I can imagine this picture perfect,happy family. Can you? Yes, I know even you are equally eager.
I can feel that you are feeling it.😛😉

My love😳 I know you were engaged to Mini didi earlier, then you were engaged and attracted to Chandni😕😕 but believe me those relations didnt work out because they never deserved you!!!

We are a perfect couple🤗. Made for each other. Even I have suffered a couple of heart aches. Dekho, idhar bhi we are even. Mata Rani ne hi hamare liye yeh sab kiya hai. Humko bhi Mata Rani ke aadesh ka palan karna chahiye aur shaadi kar leni chahiye.😳😳😉

Aur haan, agar tumne idhar-udhar dekha😡, ya kisi aur ke baare mein socha bhi😡 to main tum par Kamini aur Tara naam ki do dayan ko khula chod dungi😆😆, jo ke tumhara jeena haram kar denge.😃

So, seedhe-seedhe haan bolo aur rishta pakka karne apne gharwalon ke saath mere ghar aa jaoo. 😃

I thought of writing this letter with my blood😕, but then I decided not to do so because you would have to donate blood to save my life😆😆😆. Dekho mein tumhare baare mein kitna sochti hoon.

O mere sanam, O mere sanam do jism magar ek jaan hain hum, ek dil ke do armaan hain hum.

Waiting for you DILLU.😳
Lots and Lots of Love,
Your's and only Your's
Preeti.🤗





Edited by preet_ic - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
😆 .......i lked the letter specially Santa Claus part.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
hey i think iss shraddha ko jaake pakadke laana chahiye..... 😛

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