my first fanfiction(part 1)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys i'm aditya,and i'm a big fan of india calling
but never came here as i'm also a fan of remix and was involved in there,
in the remix section .now vaise to i'm not good at writing but because
i've seen ppl writing very beautiful fanfics here i have decided that "chalo
ganga mein ek dubki ham bhi laga ke dekh levat hain" .now my fiction
obviously involves india calling but with a twist or you can say wiith a
REMIX.yes i'm trying to get my two faourite shows close to each other
and let's see how far my imagination takes me.if any of you don't like
it ,as in discussing remix here, i'll not write it.

waiting for your permission.

aditya.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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No need for permission, this is a free place, and a free country. Besides, good work will always be appreciated. Go ahead.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sure go ahead.........
i like ur concept.....
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now a brief
introduction of remix to all of you who doesn't know much about it.
those who know can continue from the next paragraph.
it is astory set on the backdrop of a school for rich but scholarships
are also offered to the poorer students .four protagonists (ashi,yuvi,tia,
ranveer)play in a band called remix ,ASHI daughter of a super star single
mom.YUVI-son OF A POLITICIAN, is a music freak, loves ashi.
TIA-plays a self obsessed teenager who is caring about her friends
and a total romantic she loves ranveer.RANVEER-possibly the best
looking guy in the school ,his character is also a total romantic,loves tia
but just can't get along with her courtesy some ppl,comesfrom a poor family
there are other characters which obviously involves students of the school(maurya high)
now the charactersin my story will be VRINDA ,friend of ashi sweetest girl you'll ever see
(playedby the same girl who is playing smita in I.C. ) .MEHER and PRI -tia's angels
these girls play the part of tia's friends.meher -quite a beautiful girl
who carries herself very well.pri is an overweight girl-tia's best friend.SIDD
-a rank joker ,is dating meher and a popular dude in school.best friend
of yuvi.VARUN-has changed in the story from a nerd to a stud,ranveer's friend
LATIKA-principal's dughter and a total loser kind of vamp.MR. JAMWAL-
principal of the school and latika's father.GLORIA-p.a to mr jamwal.
now i'm starting the story.everything in ( ) will be things whichppl think
in their minds.

the story starts in the khanna mansion...............
vishesh,dadaji and adi on the breakfast table.dadaji is seen saying
something to adi in actions.
VISHESH-dadaji ,yeh kya khichdi pakate rehten hain aap log haan,hoon adi
kya baat hai,kabhi,kabhi apne bhai se bhi apne dil ki baatein kar liya karo.
ADI-bhaiya,aap bhi na yeh dil wil ki baat and all that ,yeh adi ka style
nahin hai,yeh ityadiyon ka style hain,you know na adi rocks.
DADAJI-haan ,vishesh hum toh bas soch rahe the ki kyon na aaj sab bahar dinner
karein,bahu ko bhi kaam se thodi fursat mil jayegi.
meanwhile kamini enters ....
KAMINI-dadaji aap bhi na bilkul bacchon jaisi baatein karte hain ,aapko malum
hai na office mein kitna kaam hai and.....
VISHESH -haan dadaji ,aur maine kucch guests ko bhi bulaya haiaaj raat ki
shift mein.
adi,kamini aur dadaji vishesh ko dekhte hue ek saath "kise".
vishesh haath mei bread slice le kar usmein butter laga te hue -woh kucch
students hain,maurya high ke.they are working on aproject and they wanted
to see how do we ppl work in a call centre ,so they wanted to come to india
calling .
ADI-magar bhaiya isse hamein kya fayeda ,i mean woh bacche..............
KAMINI-darling,ek baar mujhse pooch to liya hota.
VISHESH -are aap log khud hi bologe ki mujhe bhi kucch bolne doge.see adi
maurya is the best school in th country and hamare kafi sare clients
ke bacche wahan padte hain and kamini is mein itna bada issue kya hai
kucch dus-bees bacche agar humara call centre dekh lein to.

meanwhile in chandini's home ......
BIJI-puttar aaj woh doodh wale kabill bharte jana.
CHANDI-haan biji,vaise biji aap yeh hisab hi karti rehti hain ki kucch aur bhi
karti hain.jab se hum mumbai aayein hain aap ek baar bhi bahar nahin gayein
BIJI-ae le kabhi le hi nahin gayi tu mujhe.
CHANDU- matlab? ,accha to mujhse narazgi dikhayee ja rahi hai issi bahane.
chalo thik hai kal chalte hain juhu beach.
BIJI-aaho.
and then donon apni parandi ghoomati hain ek thumka lagati hain.


meanwhile at maurya ..........
TIA -oh tia's god itna stress aur aaj raat ko tia apni beauty sleep bhi nahin
le payegi .
MEHER-but tia it will be so exciting na.
PRI-ya tia.
TIA- babes,tum log tia's angels ho devils nahin raat ko sirf devils jagte hain
aur kya ho gaya hai tum logon ko jo is tacky se call centre ,naam hi kitna
non happening lagta hain ,vahan jaane ke liye itna kyon desperate ho rahe
ho. aur babes,pri wahan khane ko nahin milega tumhe,to itna excited matho. (end of part 1)


I'll write the next part on sunday if at all u ppl like it .

btw,i am a chandni fan.

aditya

Edited by aditya_rikh - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very good aditya .............. 👏 i like the concept of merging remix into ic ....
plz contunue it soon

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