Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_
Why can't they focus on Arpita and Sundar?
Why don't they show if Sundar is coping up wuth whatever he is studying? (Isn't he doing a course?)
It's not a matter if Arylie did the deed or not..the transitions are extremely rocky..duh obviously they will proceed to the next level..Maybe ST or both aren't comfortable with showing more intimacy..I get it..but then show clearly that days/months have passed..maybe show some other article she is working on...
Yes no smooth transitions, the gaps in storytelling are obvious.
The subplots if given balanced time, can develop in a good parallel story.
Even Arpita is sidelined now with the traumas cured, and married, no need to watch out for her as well, but she could be given a good parallel plot. Arpi-sunder still have potential.