Aan Milo Sajna ~ An AryLie mini-FF ~ part 5, pg 14 on 23-03-2022 - Page 12

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow that was alot of emotions going on but u did a wonderful job writing it love it yaar❤️👏



Thank u for the tag❤️& cant wait for the next update😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

It makes me cry. This girl and aryan's family has to cross the toughest road I guess.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful fantastic update

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

I loved this one,Pooja! Would say the two weeks wait was well worth it. Oh, I am a sucker for emotional scenes. Not that I am like Sadness in Inside Out or Eeyore in Winnie the Pooh 😆. These are the moments where a person actually bares everything..their insecurities, fears, goes on a guilt trip. Makes them all the more human. These thoughts were kinda expected when she was introduced as a widow. But you penned it down beautifully

My fav line is "She just could not take another mother's wrath.."

Uff..and that Narmada - Imlie scene ❤💯 Turning to each other and becoming each other's strength..

When Arpi say "uss Aunty ko bahaga diya". What does bahaga mean..or was it a typo and you meant bhagaa diya?


Thanks 🙈

I like stories that make me sad sometimes, like deep pain but feels good as well, the good angst, but i also need a good reason for angst otherwise the effect is lost.

Glad you like this.


Yep that maybe a typo i meant bhaga diya only, as in showed her out of the house

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Posted: 3 years ago

Woww...... such an emotional🥲 part. Imlie is always very lucky when it comes to mother and family this girl is Turley blessed. Bechari imlie's in ff also not more then 1 part she is happy😜. Now iam very excited what gonna happen when he'll back. Plz update soon😘😘😘.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Agh I missed the notification somehow. This was a great chapter! Poor imlie and everyone really :( (can you add English transliterations for the next chapters. I mostly understand the dialogue but)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you for the angst warning. I actually cried for Rathores and Imlie.😭

That neighbouring aunty😡.

The family is love❤️

Totally ready for this angsty line story🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome story

L9ving it

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome ff

Loved it

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Posted: 3 years ago

TAG ME TAG ME TAG ME TAG ME

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