Arylie TS: Chapter 2 Graduation, 16+ updated Pg 15 - Page 7

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow! I take a bow . U spell magic . Can I stop it here ?

Well no m not going to stop , U created such a stupor m still reeling on the things I have read. All those butterflies have taken a home in my stomach .it felt so real either m watching it happen or something .bliss could be the word .I liked the Arylie chemistry what made me fall in love with Arylie is u . The slow progression and here today they hav grown .its Like watching a bud bloom into a flower u know all the beauty.

Finally a milestone for which they worked hard. Imlie to make her parents dream come true . He worked towards her dream . Such a perfect partners I love them to bits.

Her big day, he bringing her 3 sets of parents is to be the bestest gift ever.

They gradually met where there is only love after all they have been they truly surely worldly deserve this kind of love which is so serene and pure. In love with their love.

I can go on writing for this one coz u dunno how immensely happy iAM to read this TS. Its like reading my fav poetry again and again until I know it by heart. Those emotions were so real . Alas they are fictional character. Your Aryan is my favvv fictional character after someone who immensely loved his girl, but he was flawed .here I am genuinely ignoring Aryan flaw side.

Someday I too would like to write something ,where the reader feels love bursting through them .


Khayalon jise tassavur kiye,ehsaas main jiye

Unsiyat ki raahon main ab tak thay khoye

Ab nhi koi arzoo ek tere jo hogaye


If above things make no sense just ignore

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Bloody good one!! Your characterisation of Aryan in your story so closely resembles to that of the show that these events could be easily shown..that is minus the *cough cough* so what were we talking about? *insert googly eyes*


So the neck..ehm.mhmm..Wake up Amy! You were saying....

*back to earth* I loved his thought process. More than anything, Imlie holds family close to her heart..and that's exactly what he gave her. Is the Aparna in your story tolerable? 😆

And the Imlie in your story is still Imlie..and yet different. I like how confident she is ..in her abilities.. in the way she carries herself..in her relationship.

How did he stay away for so long? With that much money, if I were in his place, would have flown just to get her in bed for the night and then flown back. 😆

(Reminds myself of the immigration queues and the jetlag.Nah, not worth it. Good thing Aryan, you stayed put)😆

So, the neck..ehm..mhmm..Wake up Amy! You were saying.. (Argues with myself..kya Wake up, I have reached there..so I am gonna talk only about...)😆

Sacchi mucchi..I could feel fingers trailing down my back 🙈 .....


Oye hoye Amy. Time for a cold shower or that bucket of ice, kya? You know when you complete 4 seems work in 3 there is no time to lift your head forget …..any hanky panky.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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LOL that goes without being said! did you model it after a specific dress? or just a nice black dress for graduation??

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You write such dreamy reviews @TM. Aur tumhari shaayari. Thanks for your beautiful words! ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Just a nice classic sheath. Now what was underneath, that I did have ideas about 😉😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aha the student trying to being the master and do some seduction .Go imlie go😂.But OG alpha master is another level .

Kim and John are love .all sets of parents here for imlie and her parents dream getting fulfilled .Aryan Standing way at the back of the door behind parents and looking at her -That visual and gift ❤️

When ever she looks up at him and addresses how handsome he is ,I can’t help but feel a bit jealous .There I said it .

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Waao!

Those intricate details...marvellous!!

Beautifuully written...if it isnt obvious😃👏

You surprise me everytime....waiting for the next part..❤️

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