Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 6

Beautiful written 💛 Keep Writing ✍️

Beautiful update soon

Thanks for tagging..... Part 3 is amazing.....Imlie feelong malinis pain.... Love Aryan and Imlie banter......and the last pera....☺️....amazingly written the story.. .....😊❤️

Hellooo

Thanks for the tag - what a wonderful way to start the day 😃

After everything Malini has done, I think she is redeeming herself by making the right choice before she goes. Poor Neel, really upsets me when children are caught in the middle of toxic families.

The whole scene between Aryan and Imlie was penned beautifully. He is such a loving husband

Would love to know the circumstances behind their marriage and how things progressed from what he originally agreed to regarding adoption. Although, I can imagine it would be hard to resist the love of someone like Aryan Singh Rathore. His one eyebrow raise would be enough for me haha

Love how Aryan is empathising with Neel and considering the proposition based on his welfare and separating him from the Tripathi clan.

Imlie's innocent wiggling (or not so innocent) made me laugh out loud. I could picture Aryan's exasperated face.

Thoroughly enjoyed it, you're an exceptional writer xx

Thanks Zara. I find that this writing thing is a little obesessive. And comments like this make me want to write better. You will soon get the progression to marriage and a lot more. Keep reading, keep commenting. That's my fuel to continue writing. 🤗

I love to read stories which while reading, automatically begins to visualize the lines into picture. I have never read the chapters like a thread infact after reading this and watching imlie serial i cannot see their pair because arylie acc to me is husband and wife 😁😁😁 so acc to your story you are including malinis pain and agony but deep down i really wanted you to write more of aryan and imlie and their relationship cute romantic moments. And i really want arylie to experience pregnancy phase together because in serial we got to see malini pregnancy which everybody got irritated. Now i want to see they cherishing their babys growth and pregnancy

Ah. For all the late comers to the serial Imlie. I understand the need to see mainly Arylie. But the core of this story is how the destinies of the two couples are intertwined whether they want it to or not. Imlie and Adi at one point had amazing chemistry and I was firmly int Adilie camp. But chemistry alone is not enough. Imlie needs trust, that goes both ways. Which is where they lost their way. I appreciate your feedback very much. Please stay tuned for more. 🤗

Loved all three parts. As I said for your earlier os I like the calm, love , understanding and respect. I found Neel very sweet and lovable. Felt sad about Aditya and Malini's condition but it was expected. Do continue writing.

Lovely part .Malini’s situation and pain is very poignantly written .The reader can feel her resentment towards Imlie seething time and time again,but the mother in her trumps it all Neel’s attachment and liking towardsImlie is a boon and burden to Malini .I love how Neel and Imlie has the great relationship .

Aryan being the steady guy as always .Aww braiding hair and all .The toe thingy.I am triggered and would punch anyone who does that 😂

The intimacy is super well written .Her triumph about a still got it and works like a charm is 😂.Last para was fire 🔥

looking forward to the next chapter .In chapter 1 ,there was a mention of divine intervention or so .Cant wait .

I read all three parts in one go…Loved the take… quite interesting I must say. Also you write very well. I don’t want Imlie to take in Malini and Adi’s child… that is just cruel and horrendous, the woman needs to live her life and cut off!

Also tag me for the next update!