Arylie SS: Sabr - Part 17 Pg. 61 Homecoming NEW UPDATE!!! - Page 21

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: nish_vir

I am not a buttoned up bore like you. You dress like an Undertaker

🤣🤣🤣🤣

This cracked me up big time. And I was like, what an astute observation on your part and now I see Undertaker everytime I imagine aryan😆.

Onto the last part, this proposal truly was one of a kind🤣I did worry for a second if in place of proposal, they were going to murder each other by plucking the other person bald🤣

There is nothing like romance + comedy. I don't really know how imlie is, but yours surely is the kind I love to read😆. She won't guess, she won't give you the easy way out and be difficult out of habit, and ASR, poor soul🤣, I did worry for his sanity when he was trying to propose😆

Finally he did and they spent the night in each other's embrace. Went 0-200 real quick and i loved it.

Di, privacy!!!🤣🤣

Sorry Aryan, what is that?!🤪

Phew, gonna end this finally with I absolutely love your write-up and hound this forum solely in search of your update 😃

(Side note- The kind of life you live, inspires me to live mine the way I want to too❤️)


Your words mean a lot to me. Thank you for reading and for your support.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24

Imlie hung up on aryan stealing her payal when aryan wwas trying to propose or say trying to beat around the bush was so beautifully written.loved it .


Thank you, I am so glad you liked it.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Throughly enjoyed your fan fiction. Bang on the emotions , the character traits and the words flowed beautifully. Who would have thought of proposing with an anklet? So utterly romantic that pulls heart strings. Been watching Imlie since the day the show started and have seen all the ups and downs. I truly wish for Imlie to realize one day that though her love for Adi was true and pure, he wasn’t worth it. Aryan, seems to be right guy and hope she moves on with him, when the time is right, just as in your story.


Please keep writing. I am totally hooked onto it.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Noredink

Throughly enjoyed your fan fiction. Bang on the emotions , the character traits and the words flowed beautifully. Who would have thought of proposing with an anklet? So utterly romantic that pulls heart strings. Been watching Imlie since the day the show started and have seen all the ups and downs. I truly wish for Imlie to realize one day that though her love for Adi was true and pure, he wasn’t worth it. Aryan, seems to be right guy and hope she moves on with him, when the time is right, just as in your story.


Please keep writing. I am totally hooked onto it.


Thank you very much for reading and paying close attention. I am glad you saw the ethos of the engagement, by the feet though it was 👍🏼 I agree that while Imlie's love is genuine, Aditya's is conditional and temperamental. That makes him not worth it anymore. He lost all when he sided with Malini and also questioned Imlie's character over Malini's.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Such a fun proposal that was! The fact that Aryan chooses to come clean about Arpita having done the decorations is so him! And Imlie is not one to let it go.


Imlie: If Didi did everything, what did you do?

Aryan: I am trying to! Give me time. 😆


It was nice to see how Aryan was being so cautious with the proposal to not trigger any negative memories for her. The payal scene reflected how she's still scarred about some things and Aryan understands that. The cozy conversation through the night was lovely with a hilarious morning after. Enjoyed it all!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Such a fun proposal that was! The fact that Aryan chooses to come clean about Arpita having done the decorations is so him! And Imlie is not one to let it go.


Imlie: If Didi did everything, what did you do?

Aryan: I am trying to! Give me time. 😆


It was nice to see how Aryan was being so cautious with the proposal to not trigger any negative memories for her. The payal scene reflected how she's still scarred about some things and Aryan understands that. The cozy conversation through the night was lovely with a hilarious morning after. Enjoyed it all!


I wanted to set him apart from Aditya who is full of flowery words of love and no follow-through. Aryan doesn't sugarcoat anything but what feelings are there are very much there. Thanks for noticing that.

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Posted: 3 years ago

When is next part coming the big day for arylie as its there wedding day...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Priti1610

When is next part coming the big day for arylie as its there wedding day...


I need to do some creative thinking of the next part. I haven't seen through the story yet, so probably tomorrow.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Manal88

aryan's behavior harsh but in the same time so sweet 🥰🥰🥰🥰im dead

Soooo manly !!!!waiting for the big daaay


I am glad you found it so, he's a bit harder to write than Aditya because he's so new and we have had little interaction between him and Imlie in comparison to Aditya.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ok i will be waiting do tag me further

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