TS: Imlie & Aditya - I need to see you [Updated Part 3 - 15/10/21]

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Hi,

Great to see you back writing stories again. Honestly speaking, these fanfiction are what is currently helping me keep patience with the show. Great to see the angst that was brought out by you. Loved the nuances you brought about in describing their moments on the terrace. Eagerly waiting to read more. Thanks once again. Great job👏

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The stories that you ✍️ are so breathtaking and real that you could not get enough but continue reading.

How could he 🤔 that Imlie did not breathe without thinking of him night and day, her 🌍 begin with him and ends with him and everything between does not matter as long as they both are together.🤪

please take a 🙇‍♀️ and I take my 🎩 off to you always for writing such beautiful stories about the two people who are special to each other


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Hi,

Great to see you back writing stories again. Honestly speaking, these fanfiction are what is currently helping me keep patience with the show. Great to see the angst that was brought out by you. Loved the nuances you brought about in describing their moments on the terrace. Eagerly waiting to read more. Thanks once again. Great job👏


Hi Rsk, call me raaz 😊


So glad to read that you managed to connect with the feeling of angst in the update this was my the aim of the first part to show the connect both imlie and Aditya feel even though they both are aware of there feelings for another in there relationship.

I always felt and feel that emotion of trust and angst is the strength in there relationship and even when the agree to disagree they manage to find a common ground to protect each other and walk on there journey as they see fit.

I am happy to read that this little snippet is making you feel connect with the show and Aditya and Imlie for they are so much more then the daily struggles they are having to deal with through Maline.

Hope you will like the next update as much as this will share it soon. Thank you for such encouraging words 😊

Love Raaz




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The stories that you ✍️ are so breathtaking and real that you could not get enough but continue reading.

How could he 🤔 that Imlie did not breathe without thinking of him night and day, her 🌍 begin with him and ends with him and everything between does not matter as long as they both are together.🤪

please take a 🙇‍♀️ and I take my 🎩 off to you always for writing such beautiful stories about the two people who are special to each other


Hi Sreen22,


Thank you 🤗 my aim has and always is to show the raw emotions they both share and feel for another. Just happy to see that this first part has made you want to read on further. As the show has shown us so far there love was never easy for destiny was there guide but it is faith that binds them. That trust is the emotion I am trying to explore and one of they key issues I have always felt is the angst they both feel when they realise they want to be together.


You have raised some valid questions and I shall address these in the next post, which I shall share soon. Let’s just say he will soon learn that all she does has always been for him from the very start. He was just to naive to not see them. As they say love can connect you with another but it’s there communication that binds them for a life time. Walking away is far harder when you know that the one you love will be lost without you as you shall be without them.

And thank you for such beautiful words what can I say than it has made it all the worth while. Sending you a 🤗

Love Raaz

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Loved it raaz and eagerly waiting for part 2. I hope we soon get to see them like this - carefree, honest and more than anything just ek saath - with each other. I think what I have missed the most was then just finding that little space of their own even in the toughest times. Even when Imlie was going through everything with the truth coming out, Adi's kidnapping or even this entire drama with Malini, what was getting us through the sad times was their togetherness, which has been missing since a few day. Reading this reminded me of what it looks like when they do come together, giving me hope to see them together happy, soon.

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Originally posted by: Apsvenky

Loved it raaz and eagerly waiting for part 2. I hope we soon get to see them like this - carefree, honest and more than anything just ek saath - with each other. I think what I have missed the most was then just finding that little space of their own even in the toughest times. Even when Imlie was going through everything with the truth coming out, Adi's kidnapping or even this entire drama with Malini, what was getting us through the sad times was their togetherness, which has been missing since a few day. Reading this reminded me of what it looks like when they do come together, giving me hope to see them together happy, soon.


Hi Aps,


Thank you so much for the wonderful words 🤗and managing to connect with the longing of wanting to be with another. I cannot agree with you more about the fact what I have missed most in there relationship is the support of for and share without having to voice it out. The angst I always found was the weapon to reunite and fight through the storms of negativity Maline brings.

I believe for sure we will see them like this one day soon but for that to happen Aditya will need to acknowledgment he was wronged and is a victim of his friends abuse. Part two is in draft and being edited just trying to mirror what Imlie and Aditya need for them to come out of this bind.


I always felt there communication may that have been through there acts or emotions was a key to the acceptance of another and the truth they share. This is what has laid the foundation but the idea I wish to share. Hopefully part two will deliver on what there reunion can bring.

The need of space is something I wish they both would demand from another without the fear of worrying what others feel. I feel this feeling has been lost in all the worry of gaining approval of the family and social pressures when in reality there relationships was never one about these to begin with. There owning of there mistake band acceptance of love has set them free to focus on there own journey and never should be bound by others views. Sadly these days that is all set aback in the need to make Maline relevant.

I just hope the next part will offer you a better insight of imlie inner strength and his struggles. And I look forward to reading your opinion on that take too.

will update soon.😊


Love Raaz


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As promised part two has been updated of the TS I need to see you.smiley1


Happy reading everyone and let me know your thoughts.

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