Adilie Clusters (Fanfiction of Aditya and Imlie)-OS 'INGORE' - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raaz19

Lovely piece of writing 😊 I just love how you have captured the essence of both Imlie and Aditya feelings in this one moment.


It was nice read about the conflict of emotions one of yearning, acceptance and fear. For me the most soulful part on the story was when Aditya took strength from the chunari to show her the strength he holds and the hope he has not just in her but in them. His actions showed the love he holds but has discovered and the purity on which he wants to take this forward but the act itself allowed him to offer he a sign that he has grown as a person and has come to value her traditions. It was so key to show her he has learned and come fo value and so is willing to walk this path forever where they can grow together. Such emotions are priceless and cannot be replaced. 🤗

Not only is he asking for her hand but in essence he is asking for her soul for them. He showed his fears by opening his heart. So magical

Imlie resolve to wait was nice because just like him she went with her believes but I loved how she did not decline his act. She let him on emotional and physically which is something that gave him the courage to wait. I feel it showed he mattered and that is something that both will strengthen there relationship but also there trust to sat a side there fears.


what is love without a bit of pain but ultimately his wait will become his biggest boon❤️


Such a soulful update and one I wonder with time how it may end when imlie learns of the truth to finally lay her fears at bay to hold his heart and let him grow with her to walk this path. 😊

Love Raaz

A bigggesttt Thank you for you. But you are best. I love your stories very much.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiti

A bigggesttt Thank you for you. But you are best. I love your stories very much.


Thank you 😊 and your welcome. So let me know which one was your favourite. 🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow. Loved the chunni part.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: storyshaheer

Wow. Loved the chunni part.

Thank you.

What about the whole part??

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is very good!!!!


You guys write better than the writers.... take over guys ❤

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