Destiny SS of Adilie part 11 on page 13 - 25 august

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Part one

Aditya lost in thought of her and his heart is not helping him much Now Adiitya got why Imlie is so desperately want to go back to home in evening itself but the time slip from his hand like sand ….they are locked in room so both get married on pointed gun ..Aditya feel so much helpless first time in his life Malini face again and again coming front of him His love 7 year of his love …and now innext 24 hour its going to destroy like anything ….like Dream jo such hote hote toot kar bikhar jane wala tha

Kya karu how I am going to control this situation He once look tear stricken face of Imlie who have finger marks of her nani slap on her face A girl of merely 16 year old face such hurdle burdle …she agaian and again pleading for htat they are innocent but all are turn deaf in pargadiya . kash ek min ke liye he got any mobile .

Just than someone open the door and Imlie friend come with food for both of them …..door keeper pull the door ….aditya and Imlie leg isin cage ….

Rachi Imlie friend put food in front of them …..imlie is still in shcok stage she lost her hope futre everything …..in one night .

Rachi once look to Imlie and slowly turn to aditya side ...and slowly pull the dish from food there is mobile in that bowl his mobile Rachi took great risk …..aditya is shock if anyone found it rachi will lost her life before he say anything she nodded in no and pointed to door side aditya get her clue and slowly took that phone …..and next moment he text to Malini and text her all situation where he get traped and ask her to called him as soon as possible he put phone on silent so no one hear the ringtone of mobile .

That 15 min is 15 year for Adiitya and phone come from Malini in next 3 min yes this is his Malini …..he took the call in one ring rain is helping him today because of rain falling they cannot hear the sound of aditya . he shortly say about the situation and ask her to come in morning in pagdadiya along with police so they stop this marriage nonsense.

Aditya thanks rachi and finish the food so no one doughte her both try to feed Imlie but she cannot eat one bite …she so lost in all this ….

That night both canot sleep for moment also …

Next morning marriage ritual start in early 6 o’clock only Adiitya waiting for his moon only his Malini his eyes searching only one face .

Other side Malini first get shock of her life but she somehow control her emotion aidtya alwyes say that sometime we have to think with brain only not involving emotions and this the time that she need to be took decision thru her brain …he called to aditya brother and both take decision now they hide it from family they took early flite so they reach there early ….

They reach to nearby police station around 5 o’clock which is 30km away from pagdadiya but police not ready to go there because they know the villager will be not accepted there interfear of religion ritual .

Malini and Adiitya bro some how convenes then a nd Jeep took direction of pagdandiya ………but rain is not helping them today so many tress fall on road and away from 4 km of pagdandiya they found that bridge of river get damages by rain its impossible that any vehicle cross that pool two more hour ruin by this problem now 8 o’clock Malini heart crying with unknown fear she feellike every moment taking Adiitya away from her .

Next one hour journey they have to finish by walk only and took more than hour to reach in village before police reach there they all stop by villagers malani so much time try to talk with them but all villages make a human wall and other side the chanting of mantra indicating that ritual is going of marriage ….

Malini try to talk with one women so she get some positive response but that women say in hard tone Bride ko 10logo ke hawale ganda (Dirty ) karne se acha hai uska shahari babu se marriage ho jaye …..

That is last strom for Malini she get that she lost the battle she lost everything but she cannot be so selfish that she make someone like hell that women word ….

After 15/20 min all villagers start to went from there and they open way for Malini …but Malini know that her destiny is written and there is nothing left …now only on this is remind that she and aditya along with his brother and that bride have to went back to Delhi sefly ….waha jake hi aage ki soch sakte hai kya karna hai.

She went to temple side where she found Aditya and that small girl around 16/17 surround by men with gun ……

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Aditya and Malini gaze meet for while ….both saw a lost of their love in each other eyes …Malini cannot come in time destiny play cruel with them….now all ritual is finish and aditya went to one house side living back that girl who looking still in shock …stage.

after ten min aditya come outside in other dress he not look to anyone and start to walk

Malini got his mental stage and she went to that girl side where her maybe mother crying like hell and trying to talk with that girl .

Malini reach to Imlie side and ask politely apna saman le lo hum abhi Delhi ja rahe hai……

Imlie mother look to her with some doubt but she get that Malini is good person she went inside the house and brought all Imlie things .

Malini took that from her and hold Imlie hand start to walk Adiitya side …

Till now Adiitya start to walk to outside of village …….after 9/10 hour journey they all reach to Delhi to Tripathi house …Imlie is still in her bride attired …Adiitya not utter single word in all this journey ……which is making more and more tense to Malini and his bro …..dont know what storm he carrying inside himself .

Aditya not wait for anyone and march to his room and lock himself inside that room …..

Other family is in deep shock when they saw a bride along with Malini standing outside of house , aiditya mother lost her heartbeat she something big is wrong ….

Congratulations on your journey and welcome to the forum as a writer.

it’s a lovely start to a interesting concept. Look forward to reading more soon.

Interesting Start.

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Part 2

Malini entered in house and went to Adiitya mother’s side she is also looking worried as well as shock …her gaze on bride only ….Malini slowly took mom hand in her hand and in short she say all which is happen in village ….Adiitya mother feel like someone snatch the land from her feet …her son life get ruin like this in no time .she don’t get how to react with news . what is mistake of her son in all this …..

Malini say softly ma we have to be strong for Adiitya he need us this is hardest time of his life please ma ….ma once look to Malini in Adiitya thought she forget about Malini …Malini lost her life her love her Adiitya fir bhi she trying to protect Adiitya she not even thinking about her own loss her love its biggest lost .

Next moment Adiitya mother took malani in her hug …malini feel tease in her heart her hurt heart feel like crying loudly but now she is more worried for Adiitya than herself usko khood ka dard chota lag raha tha in front of the pain of Adiitya .

Both women like silently saying to each other uske liye humko strong hona hoga . uske liye ….we have to be strong .

Both parted away after while and clean each other tear ….ma start to walk to Adiitya room ..she took spare key she very well know that he not going to open door ….she slowly open the door and she skip the heartbeat with room ki halat he brake almost everything of room the room is real mess there he seat on floor near the sofa with closed eyes rested head on sofa hand ma somehow reach .

She seat near Adiitya and caressed his face with plam next second tear slip from Adiitya eyes till now he feel so helpless so hurt like his soul get hurt with this and there is no medicin for that his whole life get destroy like this in two three days……

Ma - called softly adi baat karo mujse beta ….

Adiitya mummer softly kuch bacha kaha hai ma baat karne main khood ne sab kuch kharab kar diya destroy kar diya apne ego main samne wali ki na sunane ki adat ne …

I destroy three life meri ,moon ki and us ladki ki u know ma wo baar baar bol rahi thi hum log fas jaayege musibat chailye gaav chalet hai but main usko choti samjakr unsuno kar diya and today I destroy a girl life who is hardly 16 to 17 year …aur moon unka kya ….kaise javu main unke samne unhone jo trust mere upper dikha ya tha wo kya kiya main ….i ruin everything .

Bahot ghamnd tha khood pe that I am best dekho zindgi ne ya fhir main khood ne kaise bikharkar rakh diya hai main khali apni zindgi se nahi un dono ki zingi se bhi khela hu ma …..How many time u say me Adiitya apne anger pe ego pe control karo lakin main sab unsuna kar diaya …..he slowly put his head on her shoulder ….next moment ma took Adiitya in hug and caressed his back she give time him to open up so he feel little bit relax ..she very well know how much his guilt eating him now .

Adiitya sometime destiny play with us if you have mistake in it ….its only 10 % its destiny decision that , that girl bounded with in such manner beta …she say slowly she very well know she have to handle Adiitya very carefully else once again his anger not help in such situation.

Afitya once look to ma and ask in hard tone what bounded ma she is child 16 ki hai wo sirf how could you think like this …….and before he get angry ma hold wait wait aditiya its not only your decision now …I can say you without talking with that girl she already accept you as Husband .

Adiitya give one shock look to ma ….he said no no ma aisa nahi ho sakta we have to make her understand that its all bullshit nothing eles ma banduk ke nok pe humari shadi kar di thi un logo ne …..ye koi bandhan nahi hai ye ek thopa hua rista hai ma….and above that main moon ke alava just than his gaze went to moon and so many emotions pass from both face …both can feel each other pain ….they know each other from last 7 year the know each other very closely .

He cannot hold her painful gaze and turn to ma…..ma its impossible to me to be with this relation .

Ma - look as I say its not your decision its should be your both decision …First I will talk with girl than the future of this marriage will decided she say in firm tone …..

Ma turn to malini and say beta app baat ker lo Adiitya se its needed that you both talk now itself than maybe situation is different .

Both nodded and ma went outside ……

Malini come inside and Adiitya went to window side he can’t face her.

Adiitya Malini called softly ma thik keh rahi hai baat sirf apki nahi hai and girl cannot be away from such relation jo bhi hoga wo practical thinking nahi karegi she will think with only her heart not with brain Upon that she belong to such small village to uski sanskar usko jada help nahi karne wale to took practical decision …with each word Malini voice start to turn heavy ….aditya can feel the sadness the hurt of Malini word and heart .

He when cannot not take more he turn to Malini side Adiitya face so much sad and pain Malini feel like someone cut her heart with knife and ask is that so simple sab ko us ladki ki padi what about me kabhi socha kya main jab bhi usko dekhun ga muje apne helpness ki yaad dilayegi meri bebesi ki and meri haar humare payyar ke haar ki …apko kuch feel nahi hota humara pyyar toot raha hai humara rishta kho raha hai …..moon … he say with painful tone.

Other side ma went to outside that girl is still outside thou nishat give her water to drink . and try to make confatable but she is not opening up she is totally silent .

Ma once look to her and feel very bad to her she already decided Adiitya ka jo bhi decision ho she will protect this child till last breath ..she slowly come to that girl side who took some step back may be she scare for ma reaction…

Ma daro mat app humse beta mother soft tone brought tear in her eyes after being first time away from her mother she is feeling so lonely above that from last two day become hell fro her …..

A lovely post and one full of soul and pain. You have penned it beautifully and you could see the twist of faith.

each character is showing there grief they know best. Loved it.

Congrats on the SS!

Part 1 and 2

Emotional updates... beautifully written

feeling for all of them

sad that Malini reached late

she handled the situation well

destiny played a cruel game

update soon

part 3

Ma once look to her and feel very bad to her she already decided Adiitya ka jobhi decision ho she will protect this child till last breath ..she slowly come to that girl side who took some step back may be she scare for ma reaction…

Mafeel bad for her and slowly say daro mat app humse beta mother soft tone brought tear in her eyes after being first time away from her mother she is feeling so lonely above that from last two day become hell for her …..next moment tear took their way and the tear start to flow with her eyes. Ma slowly took her inher arm and start to caressed her back ..shuu beta don’t cry sab thik ho jayega . chalo now come inside the house …first u get first fresh …..thik hai she nodeed and ma took her inside the house …she don’t want to make grahpravesh and all because this ritual now more hurt to this girl ,Malini and mostly Adiitya …first they will took any decision regarding this than …they will follow all the rituals .ritual that’s performed by mind and soul that called true ritual …

She took her to guset room …..she don’t find much luggage with girl ma show her washroom and almari so she put her all things …

Ma– beta chage kar lo ….fresh ho ke bahar aa jo …ok

Imlifirst time feel ok after her so called marriage she found her ma ….shaayd sita maiya make her meet her babu mother for her only .

She went to bathroom side and change in salwar kamiz ..this sari making her so uncomfatable after half hour she come out side and walk to kichen side ..there she found babu ma there in kitchen …

Ma give her simle and ask fresh ho gai beta acha apka naam kya hai….she ans to ma ji Imlie….

Ma want to make comuunication to her so ask aur ghar main kon kon hai beta …

Imlie– wo meri ma ,meri nani and meri bakari she say innocently …..ma smile on her innocent ans ….

Ok and apki padai ….

That change the emotions of Imlie face …she say with sad tone ji wo 12 th ki exam diya hai abhi last week result laga hai …

Ma feel sadness in her voice and ask ok to kya result tha apka beta …

Imlie wo main wo main …..

A voice come from back wo apne state main third ranker hai chachi Adiitya cousin reply …..a shock appear on ma face what how u know ….wo uska photo dekha tha main Tv pe jo merit list dikhaya tha Inka ward disturbed place main hone ke wajse inka Interview nahi hua tha .

Ma come near to Imlie and cup her face very good beta app to bahot hosiyaar ho fhir why u sad….

Imlie muje aur bhi padna tha ..lakin ab ….

Ma - abkya beta apki studi nahi rukne wali beta age jo bhi ho u are going to study bahot padna hai apko beta …imalie ask innocnelty sachi ….a big smile appear on her face its like jo uska sapana bikhara hua lag raha tha wo fhir se sach hote dikh raha tha fhir bhi uska innocent heart fearing for trust this new dreams .

Ma read with her face her fear her sadness she say soft yet determine voice no beta this time no one going to snatch your dreams ye marriage ka kya future hai I don’t no but I know your future you are my girl and your are getting more haier study and job jo bhi I am going to make you an Independent women jiski khood ki ek pechan hogi… and next moment Imlie hug ma in happiness…schi her sita maya send her for her only.

Other in room He when cannot not take more he turn to Malini side Adiitya face so much sad and pain Malini feel like someone cut her heart with knife and ask is that so simple sab ko us ladki ki padi what about me kabhi socha kya main jab bhi usko dekhun ga muje apne helpness ki yaad dilayegi meri bebesi ki and meri haar humare payyar ke haar ki …apko kuch feel nahi hota humara pyyar toot raha hai humara rishta kho raha hai …..moon … he say with painful tone A bolo moon hum ye punishment milne itna bada humara crime tha kya .

Ajj humara dream tootke bikar gaya and hum usko savar bhi nahi sakte na app na mi=ain sab kuch khatam ho gaya hai moon sab kuch …..

Malini called out Adiitya please meri baat suniye syaad ye humara last talk hoga as couple ……Adiitya look her with sock ….

Yes Adiitya yahi sach hai humare realation ka aur jitni jaldi u will accept it ,it will be easy for you apka pata nahi laking now I cannot accept u as husband wo rishta finish ho gaya …but I need a friend like you in this hard parse of life anger range is not answer of every questions..aditya u have to learn this ….and now in this situation tumko sab ke bare main sochna hai specially about that girl jiski na to age hai na life ka exprieance abhi to uske bachpan ne bhi uska sath nahi choda hai Adiitya …

This is time where we have to thought about other rather than us now its upto you what is your decision now I am going home papa bahot worried hoge I have to talk with them also itsvery nessecory…..

Adiitya look to Malini as usual she react so maturely every problem she can handle it very easy ye maturity mere main ku nahi hai why every time my anger havi hota hai mere samjne ke taqat pe. Bahot sari baate thik hoti …

Yes Malini is true we could not be with each other now sab kuch badal chukka hai and Imlie…she is still child……

Interesting, continue soon

Part 3

fabulous update.... well written

feeling for all 3....

what will happen?