SiRa OS: Raghav's comeback...! Updated Pg 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
wow kri waiting for another long and magical update and please don end it. take time as much as you want
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Again Am Here With The Next Part Of My OS… Enjoy !

Recap: Back from elite raghav sits on a bench in a park and thinks of Sia.. Suddenly he imagines sia with him and spends some sweet moments with her.. After regaining senses he discover dat he was just dreaming and hence break down…

Raghav fell on ground and started weeping hard.. he cried for her name but she was not dere..

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Continued…

Raghav cried for long sitting there alone… That moment made him more restless. He decided not to exhibit his feelings infront of anybody and stood up to leave with a smile on his face. But his heart ached from within. He decided to go to elite and stay there with juno coz he didn't want his parents to see him in this weary condition.

Raghav makes a call to her mom.

Raghav: 'hey mom did you guys reach safely to farm house'.. with low voice

Neeta: 'yes ofcrse raghav.. but wats wrong with you why are you sounding so strange beta.. Is evrythng alright…Did you meet your frnds..?' she inquired

Raghav: ' oh yes mom am with them only.. we are partying here in school.. We are having a blast mom… Anyways I called you for something.. mom I wud be staying at hostel today with juno and will see you tomoro.. take care of urself and dad..'

Neeta: 'oh dats fine raghav you stay dere.. and have fun.. see you tomoro..'

Raghav: 'Ok bye mom'.

And cuts the call before any further questioning from her.

Raghav den moves towards elite.. After walking a few miles he reached there… When he passed by the party hall he saw an eerie silence dere and thought of peeping in. Everybody was quiet dere and the party was over. Raghav caught juno's eye.

Juno: " Raghav kahan tha tu ? hum sab kitna pareshan ho rahe the.." asked worried

Raghav: "Juno am all fine. Just wanted to spend some time alone so went for a walk.."

Juno: "chal room par chal mjhe tujhse baatein karni hn…"

Raghav: "nahin juno tu chal mn thodi der mein aata hun.. And dnt wry I'll be fine " said raghav before juno asked anything.

Everybody got up and went to their rooms.. The hall was complete empty now. Raghav den walked towards the corridors of elite. He just wanted to relive each and every moment he spent here coz dis wud be his last day here. While wondering he passed through the gym and sees it open. He carefully moves inside and shut the door behind him. Raghav den move towards his locker which he recognized easily. He felt the same gush of energy again in him which he felt wen he practiced in dis gym.

While away from elite raghav dropped boxing almost. But today he was back again at his arena. He saw a pair of gloves dere and immediately he puts dem on and den walked towards the punching bag. Without thinking even for a second he started dropping punches on it. He could picture each and every moment he spent with sia with each punch. He tried venting out all his anger on it so dat he could feel light. After a while he felt light headed. Suddenly the back door of the gym opens with a nonchalant sound.

Raghav turns back to see who was dere. A spotlight fell on his face dat made him unable to see through it. He saw a reflection entering and in a few seconds amazed to see sia there wearing the same dress in which he saw her in the park. He thought dat her thoughts are again playing with him and dat made him react in anger.

Raghav: "Kyun kar rahi ho tum yeh sab ? Nahin ho nah mere sath yahan toh phir kyun dikh rahi ho bar bar mjhe har jagah.." said agitatedly

Sia smiles hard seeing raghav like dis and speaks.

Sia:" Tumne kaise soch liya ki tumhari pushpa tumhe bhool sakti hn ?" said smiling.

Raghav was now all shocked and couldn't react. Sia continued to speak.

Sia:" Apne aap ko itna bada rockstar kehte ho, itna smart samajhte ho khud ko par andar se ekdum ulloo ho…Said smiling.. Raghav tumne mjhe life mein har mushkil se ladna sikhaya hn aaj mn jahan bhi hun sirf tumhari wajah se hun toh tum yeh kaise soch sakte ho ki mn tumhe hi bhool jaungi… Baap re humein toh laga tha ki tum humein pakad loge par tum toh ekdum bewakoof nikle…" Laughing hard now.

Raghav den touched slightly on her cheeks and realizes dat she was dere for real. Within fraction of seconds he understood dat sia played with him and drenched in anger he pinned sia against a wall behind her.

Raghav:" How dare you Pushpa ? Tumne mere saath aisa kiya ? tumhe yeh ehsaas bhi hn ki mujhpe kya beeti hn ? Kyun kiya tumne yeh.." moving closer to her.

Sia smiled at him somewhere deep down she knew dat its hurt raghav that is reacting and his fear of losing his love dat is commanding him.

"Cut it Cut it Arey bhai jaane do usey yeh sab toh hamara plan tha" Raghav's parents steps in.

Raghav turns back to see his parents and everybody else standing and smiling dere. His face showed more embarrassment dan anger and he started blabbering… On this everybody broke into laughter.

Neeta :"Oh raghav you are so gullible… Han humne hi juno ko phone kiya tha aur tumhare aane ka plan bataya aur yeh bhi ki kaise tum unhe shock dena chahte ho.." She den moves near sia and speaks " Ahem toh yeh pushpa hn oh sory I mean purane zamane ki filmo ki maa.. "said teasingly.

SiRa now started blushing hard and den raghav spoke to all.

Raghav: " Par tum sabko yeh sab karne ki kya zarurat thi aur wo bhi mere comeback par" asked confused.

Juno: " tere welcome ki tayari karne ka time chahiye tha isiliye tera mind kahin aur divert kar diya simple.." said chuckling.." waise manna padega mn ek acha actor ban sakta hun " said patting his shoulders..

Kabir : " chal rehne de head boy tujhe toh raghav ne almost pakad liya tha thank god who toh mujhe ek instant kahaani soojh gayi aur mne usey suna di tab jaake maana wo.. Acha actor mn hun."

On this Raghav eyed Kabir and thought in mind " beware dude pushpa kahaani mein bhi kisi aur ki nhn ho sakti wo sirf meri hn.." thought mischieviously.

Raghav: " Ruko tum dono ki performance ke liye mn Oscar baad mein doonga pehle zara is pushpa se nipat loon.. "

Listening to this sia runs away from dere and raghav started chasing her.

Juno: "Loh inka Tom and jerry phir shuru ho gaya " and all started laughing.

Sia ran near an empty room and hid dere but suddenly tiptoed and fell down and raghav fell just over her trying to prevent her from falling and ultimately ending on top of her..

** Hee hee imagine PTA DAY **

Raghav:" Pushpa ki bachchi ab kahan bhagogi" and he cuddles her in his arms " saza to milegi tumhe raghav ko tang karne ke liye."

Sia:" Arey kya keh rahe ho mne tumhare liye date kii tayaari kii aur tum ho kii mujhe saza dena chahte ho.. "pouts like a kid.

Raghav: In all amusement "what date ???"

Sia: "Yaad nahin jab tum gaye the toh hamari frst date spoil ho gayi thi isiliye jab aunty ka call aaya toh sabne tumhare liye kuch karne ka plan kiya aur tum ho ki itni jaldi tapak gaye isiliye who sab kahaani banani padii…" She smiles.." mn tumhare liye kuch special karna chahti thi. Chalo ab utho mn tumhe wahan leke chalti hun."

Raghav hearing to all dis felt extremely happy.. and speaks " nahin pushpa mujhe aise hi rehna hn hamesha " and pulls her back to him again

Sia:"Raghav agar humesha hi aise rahenge toh back pain ho jayega, tum kab bade hoge chalo nah "and pulled him up to make him stand.

Raghav: " Kya pushpa itne romantic moment ko kaise spoil karna hai yeh koi tumse seekhe" Huh

Sia den blindfolds raghav as dey walked towards their date venue..


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Precap: Sia's surprise for raghav..😳

Okay guys am done for now. Personally Am not satisfied with dis and I apologise for the length, I just kept writing and didn't realise how long it was…So I totally understand if you fall asleep halfway through it.

PS: okay I knw the frst two parts were very emotional and made you all sad so thought of giving you a treat as SiRa date in my last chapter… Till den keep waiting and dnt frgt to share ur views..

Sorry for typo errors didn't recheck 😳

Edited by jane_krittzz... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Wow wow wow!!!!
i just loved this update to the core. Well i had a doubt from the beginning that they were playing a prank with him...but after kabir said his part i felt slightly true...but never expected his parents also involved and the way they did it. Great plan!!!
well prank on the best prankster was jus too good!!!
Looking forward for the date!!!😳
Thanks for the pm 😊
Edited by nimmi-hhl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Amazing update kri jst loved it. Waiting 4 their date.
Edited by SamaaNoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Awesum update kri.. haye m so happy.. although i knew it was a prank.. bechara raghav.. elite ka sabse bada prankster ek ullu ban gaya..🤣🤣 waiting 4 der date.. continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
wow what a update i just love it ... u know what jb maine 2nd update pada tha i was feeling bad that raghav k sath aisa kaise ho sakta hai i wish raghav 's pushpa (sia) never ever forget her raghav . and eagerly waiting for ur next update plz update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Kri Its Just Super Awesome Update. Totally Loved The Update

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Thanks For The Update. Please Do Continue Soon.

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It Was Really Nice Pranks. I Loved The Prank And I Also Love Emotional Updates. Because It Adds Spice And Hype Over Meeting Of Raghav-Sia And Their True Confession.

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~Kri~ One Request Please Please Don End This Beautiful Series So Soon. Please Don End It Because I Love Your Updates So Much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: princessanaya28

wow what a update i just love it ... u know what jb maine 2nd update pada tha i was feeling bad that raghav k sath aisa kaise ho sakta hai i wish raghav 's pushpa (sia) never ever forget her raghav . and eagerly waiting for ur next update plz update soon ...


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: AbiAnshUtpol

Kri Its Just Super Awesome Update. Totally Loved The Update

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Thanks For The Update. Please Do Continue Soon.

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It Was Really Nice Pranks. I Loved The Prank And I Also Love Emotional Updates. Because It Adds Spice And Hype Over Meeting Of Raghav-Sia And Their True Confession.

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~Kri~ One Request Please Please Don End This Beautiful Series So Soon. Please Don End It Because I Love Your Updates So Much



Thanks a lot.. 😊

For now I dunno if i cud continue dis or not.. lets see...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
kritzz,agn a supr episde!!!!!!! i was feeling soo bad for raghav!!!!!!!! prnkstr khud hi faas gaya!!!!!!! arjun ne kya acting ki manaa padega!!!!!!!! and parents r also invlvedd,oh my god,raghav ke parents nikle!!!!!!!!! woww pushpa and rags datee,hmm will be waitnggg!!!!!!!!!!!! o and frgt to say dat last line wasss suprbb dat rmntic moment spoil karna pushpa se koi sikkhe😊

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