Orphaned again : On behalf of SAC

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I had a mother once
Before I was born
I have felt her loving caress
While still in her womb

As a child I wondered
Where she had gone
Nothing I could do
My life just went on

When I learnt to walk
I fell time and again
And she wasnt there
To tend to my pain

I faltered
And fell in love
Even then I thought, my mother
Sent her from above

Wicked she was
But a new mother I did find
With a heart full of love
And a caring mind

Her smiles were my smiles
Her tears, my tears
Every word of hers
I held above mine

But now when I know
That she had pretended too
My old wounds are open
I am orphaned..yet again



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OMG Pearly... I'm crying after reading this.. I can only see Sahir and his pain..
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This is so beautiful... I wish I could just hug sahir and tell him it'll be ok ..
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U made me cry 😭

Need I say how touching this was 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Your poems are so beautiful and always come from the heart Pearl. N somehow Sahir has always touched a nerve inside you, you are always able to read him so superbly well.
I am so glad that we met coz of Humsafars and I got a chance to read your beautiful poetry. Now that safar is coming to an end, I will miss your poems the most. 😭 I do hope you will give us a fabulous farewell poem as well. The walk in the sunset wala ...This time please write about SAAZ if you can. Thanks.
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This poem is so beautiful. It expresses Sahir's pain clearly 😭
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I can feel Sahir's pain 👏,very nicely put together
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Thank you Suvi 😃
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Originally posted by: humsafarsclub

OMG Pearly... I'm crying after reading this.. I can only see Sahir and his pain..


Thank you humsafars club ! Glad you liked it

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