Arzoo's ramblings (An attempt at poem)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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You took me in your arms and literally saved my life
You didn't hesitate to act and not just because I am your wife
You shielded me from the hurt and put yourself in harm's way
I realized that you love me, always did, you can't hide that now, no way
Don't just lie here with your eyes closed, wake up and talk to me please
A storm of thousand questions is raging inside me waiting for the release
I won't permit you to leave me now, I want to, I must know it all
I will do whatever it takes to break down that impenetrable wall
Lie to me, hurt me, even threaten to be at best your pyscho baaz
It wont' affect me anymore, you have made me privy to your innermost raaz
So quit playing these foolish games with me and have guts to own it all
Have faith and trust in me won't you, we are HUMSAFARS after all


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written dear.
The puzzle which Arzoo didn't understand by sahir's action and his words all these days today opened her eyes to see in action of her husband and know what she means to him? What he always meant and always wanted to be her protector .

Sure she will realise she cannot pretend it's all about money any more ...it's love ...pure love.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi MM,

Lovely poem ...you should post one for every epi 😛

Thxs for the PM .




"I finally understood what true love meant...love meant that you care for another person's happiness more than your own, no matter how painful the choices you face might be."
~ Nicholas Sparks
Edited by ultimaterudra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I read the sahir one first and then this. ... beautiful yaar... you have nicely encapsulated the Saaz emotions n reaction to the shooting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful MM...Aarzoo's emotions nicely penned down.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful words 👏 Arzoo is finally realising that Sahir protected her and took the bullet that was meant for her. I hope they have a flashback scene for Arzoo so that she realizes what Sahir means to her
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all for the encouraging feedback on my poem attempts. I have yet to catch up on couple of weeks of epis. The beautiful and poignant collages inspired me to pen down the lines on behalf of Arzoo and Sahir.

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