The show needs to lighten up..let's share ideas!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok...everyone...the last few days the show has become really really dark...pain and guilt and anger rule...it's becoming really heavy to handle...
While we cannot expect it to have comedy given tbe storyline and content we can definitely have some light moments that are woven in without seeming out of place..which would make it easier to watch and more enjoyable...

So let's share ideas on how this can be done...how can we have some smiles woven in..

Let me start off...

1. Sahir talking to Asharfi..sharing his feelings...a dil aur man halka karne wala scene...where the extreme anguish we see in him is lessened if only temporarily...

2. Sahir remembering something Arzoo said or did and involuntarily smiling..a beautiful smile that struggles through tears..

Do share your thoughts and ideas...!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pri tbh the illogical stuff they show is an insult to humor also 😆?.do u remember tht bloody test Track n the doc multipurpose ..

Anyway first I wud request the Cvs to pls make the show watchable n not give disjoint filler epis..it just royally pisses me off ...there is no flow , no conjugation ..why don't they sit n wonder how come they never get TRPs 😆..wht they need Is to tighten up tue script ASAP

Sorry I am Just in a bad mood
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lighter moments... in HC's own words there are not going to be any lighter moments.. all heavy stuff he said na Priya

Anyway... as I can see... if they are going to show Arzoo in pain and confusion, we would need something to break through her pain and notice Sahir's pain... she might hate him for playing with her feelings but love and hate are two sides of the same coin. She can't switch off caring like a tap. So there can be a scene where she can see his injured hand (I would have preferred she see his back but unless Sahir decides to walk about the house shirtless😆, she is not going to go into his room any time soon..so settling for hand.. but such beautiful hand) Maybe he has trouble eating or whatever and her natural self can take over for a few moments. Some hint for him that she is hurting but she does care. And some hint for her that there is more to his side than what he has shown so far. Or maybe she somehow gets to see his writings..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvika.

Lighter moments... in HC's own words there are not going to be any lighter moments.. all heavy stuff he said na Priya

Anyway... as I can see... if they are going to show Arzoo in pain and confusion, we would need something to break through her pain and notice Sahir's pain... she might hate him for playing with her feelings but love and hate are two sides of the same coin. She can't switch off caring like a tap. So there can be a scene where she can see his injured hand (I would have preferred she see his back but unless Sahir decides to walk about the house shirtless😆, she is not going to go into his room any time soon..so settling for hand.. but such beautiful hand) Maybe he has trouble eating or whatever and her natural self can take over for a few moments. Some hint for him that she is hurting but she does care. And some hint for her that there is more to his side than what he has shown so far. Or maybe she somehow gets to see his writings..


Yeah Suvika he did say that...but man...and woman...survive on hope😆..so I thought...we can atleast imagine those lighter moments and lighten our thoughts ...after such heavy episodes it might help...

Your idea is very good...it's waiting to be incorporated...yes ideally Arzoo cannot stop caring...her natural instinct has to show up..when he is hurting and she sees..so they can very well have a scene where he is either not able to eat or unable to hold his coffee cup and she sees the wound...before the game started she was starting to be sensitive to that very thing about him...when he was hurt she got restless...
Seeing his back...yes he won't walk around shirtless and she won't go to his room and him bending and she seeing his back is done already...but...she used to walk past his room also before so she can do that again by force of habit maybe? And see...😆.

If she cares even unintentionally till she realizes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Habit or not Priya... I want this girl to see and feel his pain. The stalemate needs to be broken pronto.


I have another scene.. Sahir recognizes Arzoo's pain and confusion. The trauma of the incident keeps coming back to her the moment she stands still for a moment. So he can put her to work (thru Linda of course) some designs that his clients needs urgently or whatever.. try and keep her mind busy and occupied. And at the end of the day she is tired enough to go to sleep without nightmares jerking her awake.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvika.

Habit or not Priya... I want this girl to see and feel his pain. The stalemate needs to be broken pronto.



I have another scene.. Sahir recognizes Arzoo's pain and confusion. The trauma of the incident keeps coming back to her the moment she stands still for a moment. So he can put her to work (thru Linda of course) some designs that his clients needs urgently or whatever.. try and keep her mind busy and occupied. And at the end of the day she is tired enough to go to sleep without nightmares jerking her awake.


Yes! That's very much in character for Sahir...and very much possible to include currently...and it means they show Saiyaaara as well...which I would love...too much of the house now...scene shift would be refreshing!
Although if this happens credit would probably still go to Zaki again and he would lecture Sahir on his 'heartlessness'
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prettypri


Yes! That's very much in character for Sahir...and very much possible to include currently...and it means they show Saiyaaara as well...which I would love...too much of the house now...scene shift would be refreshing!
Although if this happens credit would probably still go to Zaki again and he would lecture Sahir on his 'heartlessness'



Come on.. don't be disheartened🤗 . You said just now that we survive on hope. We can hope na. Maybe Rahman will kidnap Zaki for a few days and we can see all these scenes... 😆😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvika.



Come on.. don't be disheartened🤗 . You said just now that we survive on hope. We can hope na. Maybe Rahman will kidnap Zaki for a few days and we can see all these scenes... 😆😉


Actually...that's a great idea too...rehman can decide to get Zaki married at gunpoint...and keep him away till he agrees to stay married to Samaira...😆.

You are right..let's keep the hope alive 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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for me the light moments will be Asharfi's scenes with both Sahir n aarzoo individually. ..I want they share their feelings n frustration with asharfi.
Edited by Manali_IamGCian - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok here is one - these guys need a break together - Mr Mehta's daughter is getting married and insists that Sahir come along with the young designer Arzoo who's work he loves. The wedding is at his farmhouse outside Mumbai. So reluctantly both go together. Unfortunately the car can't breakdown again but we could certainly see a series of mishaps, bring in some light moments. Ultimately on this trip, Arzoo sees the scars on his back, the hand etc...she confronts, we have a complete breakdown from Sahir. They finally have a proper chat on things and agree to be friends. At the wedding, Arzoo can be happy as can Sahir. Happy happy days!!

I would also like to see them having to spend the night together in one room - that would also help break the ice!!

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