SaAz SS: Selfish and Selfless [Chap 6, Page 30] New! :) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SmileyStar



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And yes, I mean Sahir and Arzoo! I've been writing on AsYa for so long that they come naturally to me LOL 😆

Crossing my fingers that you like this SS as well 😃
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Thanks Fari. Haha yep though they are very unforgettable characters till they butchered them...I honestly hope this is not the same for Sahir and Arzoo...I'll be enjoying whatever story you come up with coz you're a fantastic and imaginative writer :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
I don't understand sahir...smthing fishy...is he acting as if he doesn't care much...and I am happy as u r continuing the ss...pm me next time pls...and I just love your way of writing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
oh!! so here,sahir is selfish and aarzoo is selfless...i am loving it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Helllooo... 😊
If iam not wrong your name is Fari...( plzz...spare me if it is wrong...) and one thing i remember about you is that you are a huge fan of Shahid Afridi... 😉
Now you will wonder how i remember you , well it is obvious that iam a huge follower of your work on Q.H...and even i was a silent reader at that time but i have commented on your story " Destinies Intertwined "...and even your last O.S " Sparkling Eyes.."...i really admire you for your writing...and well as i saw you here i can't stop myself from checking this out...and well well iam very happy that you started a new story...well on a new couple...and iam looking forward to it...
So SaAz..it is...then...
The prologue part was brilliant and then this update is also flawless...
I was wondering when you gave this title as SELFISH AND THE SELFLESS...so who was who ?...
Now i can say that clearly that Aarzoo is the selfless one here...and Sahir is somewhat selfish...though i will not judge him now...till i got to know him better here...so yeah...i have to wait for the story to unfold then...
This is such a interesting start...
Plzz...P.M for this story and your other future works also...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
What if saahir did not want to give that cornetto because she was sick?
What if he went away from there because he was hell bent scared of loosing arzoo and didn't want her to see that?

And what if arzoo is selfish? She wants him for herself she does it for her own happiness while sahir he always makes himself look bad. He doesn't care what she thinks of her he just wants her happy.!
Some crap here..i know but just a thought that came to my mind :p

Idk I hope its this only but that was an awsmmm update you are a great writer pls update soon! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
really beautiful start n i must say very intense!
arzoo's selflessness is showed in the very beginning bt sahir's behaviour towards her is a bit difficult to understand...

incomplete love hurts...poor arzoo!😔
continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Hi Fari!
I cant believe i haven't read the other shot yet! I;m usually a silent reader. But i'm slowly changing that lol.
What a beautiful way to start the story. I'm hoping you'll continue soon. keep up the fabulous work!!

Nikki
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyyy :)
You write amazing stuff <3
I read your Destinies Intertwined a while back and I absolutely loved it
And then I find you on humsafars forum
HOW AWESOME IS THAT ? :D
Continue soon
Much Love <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Minahil96

Awww This is such a beautiful start , something fishy with sahir's cornetto thingy? Love it .. please update soon 😳



Thanks Minahil 😳 I hope to update the next part soon 😃

Thanks for reading!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bujee09

😭 Oh dear tht made me SOB SOB 😭 but still waiting for you to continue n surprise us with your next part smiles 😃n giggles 😉😉😉



Aww the ending did become a little sad but this SS is going to get more serious as they grow up so I'm warning you in advance 😆 Beware!! But hoping that you'll enjoy the seriousness as well 😃

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