Sushpective: So this is how the story goes.....(all updated) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Madhuz

was waiting last night ..u r becoming a habit Sush ! read ur post then sleep 😃

Very poetic write-up and ultimate collages by ultimaterudra 👏

I think Sahir never lost his senses, he was just enjoying the moment but his mind was always in control.

I thought it was really cold the way he replied to Sam's interruption 3-4 hrs..it was ruthless.

Brave to Arzoo to say No!!! 👏

For Sahir to hear the No, I wonder what it told him about Arzoo??? does she really loves Zaki? but how can it be..the way she trembled in my arms...Hell no it is the deal ..I need it, I have to WIN at any cost.

A forced nikah is on the way but real story will unfold after the nikah and then how Sahir gets Arzoo's heart back will be it.

ok now my fav topic 😃 Sahir had shampooed his hair so kamiyaan chup gyee theen..but I bet you next couple of episode the hair is going to be flat when the scene changes from his white dress😆😆

offcourse the episode was an eye candy..Harshad was looking great..personally I like Indian men with dusky/honey complexion ,HC breaks the rule 😳

Shivya has innocent charm on her face..she looks good with minimal makeup but red was suiting her and the earrings⭐️...I want to see her in chiffon wine color sari.

Happy weekend

Originally posted by: -Sush-

Jay, Aidan and all those who said that they were not impressed with the "fake" romance and didn't get into the scene...(and I think this includes Red...that's why we didn't hear from her)...

I must admit...

That besides describing the fairly tale, and seeing it as one...I too, did not "feel the romance" from Sahirs side...I felt it loud and clear from Aarzoo...but the only moment when I thought Sahir was not faking was when he accidentally burns his fingers with the match...when Arzoo makes an entrance...

Rest everything was controlled, manipulating...Sure we know the background story...that he had fallen for her...and will eventually realize that Arzoo is the same Arzoo he fell in love with...it's only the image he is seeing is tinted...and then his real feelings will surface again...

But for now...the real feelings were completely brushed aside...he played the game...in a very calculating business like manner...!

Originally posted by: BHAVII

@Jay looks like you are not getting enough hugs from new work place😆. I knew it personal space will be your weapon today but your poem😲. DO U really thibk that this is what Sahir feels?

No for now deal of his life is the only imp thing not Arzoo. He bloody has not told her that he is married and also I think its not love its more like care and attraction on his side. So eventhough you wrote nice lines does not jive with Sahir at this point and time.

Originally posted by: -Sush-

Bhavii and Jay...I can sense you guys go a long back...and I can't even pretend to understand the dynamic that you two share...😃 call it luck or bad luck on Bha7 part but yes we do go back 😆

But chiming in because the discussion is very interesting...

Yes, Arzoo let her guard down...she let him get close to her, touch her...in a way...no traditional girl would allow anyone to...unless she is really in love with him and trusts him at least inherently...but like Bhavii says...we all let ourselves loose sometimes... it was still bit hard for me to digest, i wud say transition from their very bitter to very sweet was too fast for my liking but oh well !

And yes, he has not been forthcoming...the deal has been the main driver...not his emotions...

But it is also true that...

I WOULD like to see more conflict on Saahirs side when he is being driven by motives like the deal...and not care or love... now when that happens i wud be willing to pen down much mroe than just few lines, that I await for inner turmoil is my fav !

I WOULD like him to struggle to carry on in a business way... that's what i said earlier that he should get the deal but not joy for it, some self-destructive matter, pushing aarzoo away more but not being able to stop her to come close, let aarzoo show how much power she has on him that he makes conscious effort to go away

We saw some of it on Friday...if I was the director...you would have seen more of that and less romance and less touching...but that's me.,..😃 shouldn't have said that now i'll annoy you with if i was writer 😆 I wud not haven written OTT scenario nor dialgues. I wud have preffered to see as sahir keeps the fcade up and aarzoo gets happier, it gets harder for him. like he had to close his ees and swllow, then have his grip tighten on chair standing behind aarzoo coz she is too happy ! Use HC's eyes as he is very expressive - show it red, him hiding his face few more times, etc !!

I can't expect another person to do it exactly like I would...right? yeap i don't get paid to write it so not going to think too much 😆

Jay did I hear Bhavii correctly that you are a guy not a girl?A rare species on this kind of discussion indeed! yes indeed i am rare specie on IF who stumbled upon here but that is also reason i don't care much abt looks of male lead and want to see his struggle, meri biradari ki baat he 😆

BTW another friend of mine who is not on IF has had issues with Saahir getting too close to Arzoo's face when he talks to her...to me it did not seem unnatural...specially if he is trying to seduce her...😆 well i know nothing abt art of seduction but lack of personal space just doesn't sit well with me 😳

Originally posted by: BHAVII

How can any woman allow any man to be so close][/DIV]

Originally posted by: -Rojaa-

Tell me about it, I though I was from an old school irrespective of my age and background.