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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Suvika.




FF?? I don't think so Sagi. Right now the show itself is interesting for me. and I am on a break after my last book. So no FF or OS for now.



Abhi latest kaunsa book likha?

Yahan par to assignements poori karte karte sari creativity gayi. Anyway, I started a FF, you can read that. But don't laugh...I am trying to grow up. You know what I mean?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sho-shweet

Amazing...fantastic..mind blowing etc etc etc

You just nailed it.Sahir's anguish,turmoil and jealousy was brought forth beautifully. I always thought that Sahir feels that Aarzoo has fallen for him that's why all the door Raho mjh se,faraq nai parta,kuch aur banne ki koshish na karo,designer ban kr Raho happened.But somewhere in his heart he enjoyed her attention that's why the restlessness and the sorry came when she was avoiding him.Now if Zaki tells him that Aarzoo loves him only then he'll think that she's a two timer.Though it would be extremely unfair to Aarzoo but still I want to see how the Shark woos her lady love and confesses to her. It would be painful to watch,I agree but the curiosity to see his fake romantic side is too overpowering to think about anything else.



Thank you so much.

And yes. He felt her feelings for him and he was falling for her. It was like he was fighting to stop himself AND her.

Lets see how the story unfolds. Its gripping for sure.
Edited by Suvika. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well I do have to commend your talent! Beautifully written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!
That's one brilliantly explained POV
👏

I admit that while I have been able to understand and relate to almost all of sahirs actions ... Except burning the factory... I couldn't quite get what made him think arzoo is after money in particular!

But you have put down his thought process so well!

Human emotions are not governed by rationality.. Especially those like love and jealousy.. So true... And when you have been betrayed bitterly in the past in love.. You will always be extra sensitive.

In Sahirs case.. From what I understand of his past... He was the kind who implicitly trusted and gave his all to the one he loved.. When his trust was broken he was so shattered that he built a shell around himself and lived a bitter lonely life! It wasn't easy or possible for him to believe goodness still existed after that.. Arzoo made him believe... She cracked that shell..!

However rude he was she cared.. She kept wanting to share his pain... He didn't want to believe someone could care for him but her persistence convinced him slowly..

Besides he saw her as a person who spoke her mind and did not tolerate injustice... If there was something wrong she would always talk.. Not leave it to get solved on its own!

He isn't able to acknowledge his feelings even to himself but his trust in her was slowly building to a point when he didn't need proof to defend her against his own family!

However that trust is a very precious thing for Sahir.. Very brittle... It would take very little to break it... This whole pregnancy drama... Atzoo refusing to explain... Him seeing her in the hospital with the test forms... Her refusal to explain anything but that she wasn't pregnant ... And now zakis assertion that he loves her... Put them together along with the fact that he hasn't really gotten over his past yet... And bam... He would think why she showed so much care for him when she loves zaki! And that would lead to him thinking of the most plausible reason.. Again influenced by his past.. Is she after money? There is no rational reason... No practical reasoning involved there!
This is the thinking of a man who was living with the bitterness of his past and just when he accepted it.. Was shown how beautiful his life could be.. Only to feel like he was experiencing the same past again!

Definitely explains his thinking at the present moment!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Suvi 🤗
Ur back with a bang ...

Oh ok so u have explained it all I will Just add tht both ARZOO n sahir have tormented pasts n to be happy together they need to overcome their insecurities ...however this ain't life ..n life doesn't work acc to us ..n tht is why we see them both dealing with it in a very diff way 😆

Also as a viewer I feel more connected to sahir Most of the times n I think the Cvs are a LIL at fault Here cos they show sahir n his pain n his monologues n we connect to him but with ARZOO they show nothing 😆

Anyway suvi ji look forward to reading ur posts regularly 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Sagi.



Abhi latest kaunsa book likha?

Yahan par to assignements poori karte karte sari creativity gayi. Anyway, I started a FF, you can read that. But don't laugh...I am trying to grow up. You know what I mean?



Latest is with the publishers. Partridge Publications so its going to take some time. But the Kindle version is out. Title - Perfect Love.

Will read your FF aaraam se later.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: redviolet

Well I do have to commend your talent! Beautifully written!



thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: prettypri

Wow!

That's one brilliantly explained POV
👏

Thank you.. May I know your name? Or what you would prefer me to call you? 😳

I admit that while I have been able to understand and relate to almost all of sahirs actions ... Except burning the factory... I couldn't quite get what made him think arzoo is after money in particular!

But you have put down his thought process so well!

Human emotions are not governed by rationality.. Especially those like love and jealousy.. So true... And when you have been betrayed bitterly in the past in love.. You will always be extra sensitive.

In Sahirs case.. From what I understand of his past... He was the kind who implicitly trusted and gave his all to the one he loved.. When his trust was broken he was so shattered that he built a shell around himself and lived a bitter lonely life! It wasn't easy or possible for him to believe goodness still existed after that.. Arzoo made him believe... She cracked that shell..!

However rude he was she cared.. She kept wanting to share his pain... He didn't want to believe someone could care for him but her persistence convinced him slowly..

yes. And it was mutual too. He could not stand the sight of her tear glazed eyes.

Besides he saw her as a person who spoke her mind and did not tolerate injustice... If there was something wrong she would always talk.. Not leave it to get solved on its own!

He isn't able to acknowledge his feelings even to himself but his trust in her was slowly building to a point when he didn't need proof to defend her against his own family!

However that trust is a very precious thing for Sahir.. Very brittle... It would take very little to break it... This whole pregnancy drama... Atzoo refusing to explain... Him seeing her in the hospital with the test forms... Her refusal to explain anything but that she wasn't pregnant ... And now zakis assertion that he loves her... Put them together along with the fact that he hasn't really gotten over his past yet... And bam... He would think why she showed so much care for him when she loves zaki! And that would lead to him thinking of the most plausible reason.. Again influenced by his past.. Is she after money? There is no rational reason... No practical reasoning involved there!
This is the thinking of a man who was living with the bitterness of his past and just when he accepted it.. Was shown how beautiful his life could be.. Only to feel like he was experiencing the same past again!

Definitely explains his thinking at the present moment!


@red. Exactly. Thank you once again for reading, liking and sharing your views.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: ecrivain

Suvi 🤗

Ur back with a bang ...

Thank you so much Ecri. Feels so great to see you here 🤗


Oh ok so u have explained it all I will Just add tht both ARZOO n sahir have tormented pasts n to be happy together they need to overcome their insecurities ...however this ain't life ..n life doesn't work acc to us ..n tht is why we see them both dealing with it in a very diff way 😆

Also as a viewer I feel more connected to sahir Most of the times n I think the Cvs are a LIL at fault Here cos they show sahir n his pain n his monologues n we connect to him but with ARZOO they show nothing 😆

You are absolutely right. This IS the story of two imperfect people. Not one. I was planning for something in this direction for tomorrow. Lets see. 😉

Anyway suvi ji look forward to reading ur posts regularly 😃

Define regular. 😆 Will try to be as regular as I can. 😳

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