Sahir FF - A First Sight Into Sahir (UPDATE ON PG 17) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: -vandy-

lubzieee

i read the updt abhi

its fabilous



Thankss Di! 🤗

Originally posted by: Jyo_Veebafan

Very nice Update.. Loved it!😊

Thanks! ^=^ <3

Originally posted by: zohra80

Lovely update...plz don't soon

Glad you're enjoying it! <3

Originally posted by: kaku17

fantastically awesome...loved it...😊


Aaaw, thank you! ^=^ <3

Originally posted by: Jyo_Veebafan

Wow, your story is very good. Loved how you've written Sahir's inner trauma so well.
And Arzoo has made an entry with her usual loveliness. Very well written, Continue soon 😊

Aaahh, thank you for your lovely review. Writing up more as we speak ;) <3

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

Amazing! <3

Loved the shayari in the end :)


Nisha

Thankss Nisha! <3

Glad you're enjoying it, stay tuned! <3

Sorrryy Nisha, writing some more up now! <3

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Hey!!🤗

@So sorry i'm late😳
Coming to the update, fab yaar!👏
Loved it so much!❤️
Nicely written!!👏
Please do updatee soon!


Aaaw, it's okay. I appreciate you taking time out to read when you can ^=^ <3

Will update more soon <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Heyy everyone, sorry I haven't been able to update this FF. Life has gotten a bit hectic but I really appreciate you being patient.

Anyway, here's the next chapter. It's a bit short BUT it's almost 3am so I'm sure you can forgive me seeing I made sure I wrote something for you guys before I head off to bed! 😛

P.S: I can't stand the whole 'burnt toast' thing so I just made it so that Sahir doesn't have breakfast at all! :L

P.P.S : I'm PM'ing everyone who 'liked' the First Chapter as it's easier for me. So do let me know if you don't want the PM :)

Thank you for reading, truly love reading all your comments. Gives me that sense of motivation to fit some time in & write more! <3

Chapter Five.

Sahir awoke early the next morning, as was his routine. He got himself ready for work then made his way downstairs. He stopped and looked up when someone called out to him. "Sahir Sir?"

He turned to see his assistant, Joe. "What is it?"
"Do you want me to ask someone to get you some breakfast?" He asked and Sahir sighed, exasperated.
"Joe, you've been around me a long time. Have you ever seen me stop to have breakfast?"
"No Sir. No, I haven't. I just thought..."
"I don't pay you to think. Let's go. We've got plenty to do"

"Sahir?" a voice called and he turned to see his mother at the breakfast table and that girl stood next to her, with a file in hand.
"Yes Ammi?"
"You're going to the office, aren't you?"
"Yes. Do you need something?"
"No. Just take Aarzoo with you" she asked him "It's her first day. I don't want her to be late" She told her son and he simply nodded obediently in reply before glancing at the girl briefly.
"I'll be leaving in 2 minutes" He told her firmly and made his way out to the car, being briefed by Joe about the meetings along the way.

"Go on. Sahir won't like it if you're late" Alvira told Aarzoo.
"Does he never eat breakfast?" She asked and Alvira shook her head, forlorn.
"He doesn't look after himself properly. I don't think I've seen him enjoying a meal for a long time. It's like he's just going through the motions" she said, lost in her own thoughts, before coming back to reality and realising Aarzoo was still standing there. "You'd better go. You don't want to get late on your first day" she smiled faintly and Aarzoo nodded before leaving.

As she began to leave she came face to face with Sahir, who she realised was standing there listening to their conversation. She averted her eyes. "Go to the car. I have to get something" he ordered and she left him to it.

Sahir stood there for a moment and saw his mother leaving the breakfast table, having finished eating. Hearing his mother speak about him. Care about him. It felt a relief. But he was too far gone to be saved. He didn't want to be saved. And why was the girl asking about him eating breakfast? What business was it of hers? She didn't even know him.

Sahir shook his head of his thoughts and went to grab a file from his office before making his way back downstairs to the car.

Joe was already in the front passenger seat and Aarzoo was sat at the back. Sahir sighed before getting into the car.

"Shall we go Sir?" The driver asked and Sahir gave him a small nod and they left to make their way to the office.

He stared out into the window and wondered what the day would have in store for him.
Edited by Lubz.TaAnu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
I lubz you! Thank you for the update. Poor Jyo. 🤣Well with this chapter we know Alvira is caring and worried for Sahir. Sahir is thinking about Arzoo's concern for him. Hmm. The next chapter will interesting. Boss-employee going to work together.
Thank you <3


Nisha

PS: Jaldi update karna. 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
awesome superb update
poor joe and tanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Lubzie
Loved the updt

I hope this first journey in the same car is more eventful...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
finally u updated!!! and it was lovely!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
I wanted a big chapter. Yahan to mallika sherawat bhi zyaada kapde pehenti hai.

Sorry, that was a joke. But before we could get in the chapter, it was over.
Sagi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Lovely post 😊
Waiting for the next to see more of Arzoo&Sahir interaction 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Hey!!🤗
Superb Update!👏
Loved it!❤️ Nicely written😉
Can't wait to see more
Please do update soon!😃
@And thanks for the PM😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Hi lubz !
Awessome update !
Keep writing ! :)
P.s thnx for the pm ! ^_^

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