Sahir FF - A First Sight Into Sahir (UPDATE ON PG 17)

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Maddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Hey!🤗

Superb!👏 Loved it!❤️

Nicely written👏 Keep it up👍🏼

😆 Their first meeting loool 😆

Keeep updating this fast!😃

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Sagi97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Kya takkar thi...standard entry of the heroine.
Uski files aur books nahi ude? uska dupatta Sahir saab ke haath se nahi ja chipka?
Dono ke identity cards entangle ho sakte the. Magar phir bhi...usko gadi to uthana pada na.

And this headache is going to be in Saiyyara? Oh my god.
Well going. Carry on.
Sagi

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Lubna Ahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: zainabmohamed13
Awessome !
Keep writing ! 👍🏼

Thanks! <3

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI
superb update
poor arzoo feeling bad for sahir he really wants his mothers love
plz continue soon
tanx for the pm

Aaah, glad you're enjoying it, stay tuned! <3

Originally posted by: vinnithelover
here,is the entry of aarzoo...it was awesome!! do continue soon!!

Will do. *=* <3

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome update
Arzoo and sahir frst meeting was nteresting, he pull away his hand and she got dropped on the floor. Their office days will be interesting.
update next chapter soon
thanks for the PM

Thaanks. Will update soon and let you know <3

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Lubna Ahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: silky_harshad
amazing just amazing 👏 please didu, on public demand make sahir blast anam 😳 please please

🤗 ty <3 Lolss, chal. Will do when I update tomorrow insha'Allah :L

Originally posted by: Amrita_18
Fantastic update...plz update soon

Aaaw, thanks! Will do <3

Originally posted by: .HarshRutu.
Awesome awesome awesome👏🤗

Thankss Rutu! 🤗 <3

Originally posted by: ploydome
Love Arzoo character and Sahir 😳
I'm waiting for your next update
Keep it👏

Aaah, thank you. Will update soon! <3

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Lubna Ahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz
Hey!🤗
Superb!👏 Loved it!❤️
Nicely written👏 Keep it up👍🏼
😆 Their first meeting loool 😆
Keeep updating this fast!😃
@Thanks for the pm😃

Lols, glad you're enjoying it ^=^ will update soon insha'Allah <3

Originally posted by: s_danger
Kya takkar thi...standard entry of the heroine.
Uski files aur books nahi ude? uska dupatta Sahir saab ke haath se nahi ja chipka?
Dono ke identity cards entangle ho sakte the. Magar phir bhi...usko gadi to uthana pada na.

And this headache is going to be in Saiyyara? Oh my god.
Well going. Carry on.
Sagi

Lolss, exactly! Will update soon and let you know <3

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Lubna Ahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

NOTE: Please like this post so I can add you to the regular PM list incase you don't want to be bombarded with PM's and also, so I don't confuse myself in the process :L <3

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Lubna Ahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Chapter Four.

Sahir entered his room and threw his phone onto his bed before loosening the tie around his neck.

He had his back to the door when it opened, causing him to exclaim; "Have I not said that you should knock before entering!?"
"Relax Bhai. a familiar and jubilant voice called closing the door behind him "it's me!"
"That rule goes for you too. Understood?" He asked his younger brother
"Yeees" He sighed. His brother was always so formal. "Would you like me to re-enter your room?"
"No. Just get on with it. What do you want?" He asked
"Nothing!" He exclaimed, mocking offense. "Can't a guy come and say hey to his brother?"
"No. Now out with it"
"I need some money" He said, coming to the point, making a pleading expression to go with it. Sahir sighed. This was Zaki all over. "Please" he added
"Now what?"
"I just told a friend I'd take them out"
"A friend. Yeah, right" He shook his head and took his wallet out from his trouser's back pocket. "How much do you need for this 'friend' then?"
"Not much" He said and took a gander into Sahir's wallet. "This'll do" He said grabbing 2 of the 3 notes that were in there. "You're the best bhai!"
"Zaki" He sighed as his brother turned to leave but stopped when he remembered something
"Oh; Did you hear about ammi's friend's daughter living with us"
"Living with us??" Sahir exclaimed
"Yeah, didn't you know?"
"No. No one informed me" he replied, annoyed
"They probably just forgot" He shrugged
"Yeah right" He shook his head "Probably knew I'd say no if I found out so they didn't bother to tell me" he muttered
"Did you say something bhai?"
"No" He shook his head "Was that it?"
"Okay, I see you're ready to explode so I'll go" he told his brother and was about to leave when he spotted something on his brother's bedside cabinet. He picked the bottle of aftershave up and made a quick getaway before Sahir could catch him. ""I'll bring it back when I'm done!" he called and left.

So, not only did he have to put up with this girl in his office, he also had to tolerate her in his home!

Sahir made his way over to his large window sill and sat down beside the window. He sat there and stared deep into the abyss, longing to somehow find an answer to the questions that remained deep inside him.

All of a sudden, the door knocked. Sahir sighed. When would he find the time to just be alone with his thoughts? When would people finally get the hint and just let him be?

"Come in" He called authoritively and the door opened slowly for him to see the girl stood there. He sighed in frustration.

"What?" He asked curtly
"I..." she began then paused
"Yes?"
"I... er..."
"What is it!?" he was beginning to lose his patience. Why couldn't she just say what she wanted and leave?

"Ammi said I shouldn't have spoken to you the way I did so I just wanted to apologise for the way I spoke"
"You can go now" He replied
"But... I just..."
"I just what?"
"I'm trying to say sorry"
"You've said it. Now you may leave" he told her opening his door and waited as she gave him a look before leaving.

He closed the door and he looked out across the room to saw his desk so he made his way over and sat down and began writing:

Pura Dukh Aur Adha Chaand
Hijr Ki Shab Aur Aisa Chaand
Itne Ghane Baadal Ke Peeche
Kitna Tanha Hoga Chaand
Meri Karwat Par Jag Uthe
Neend Ka Kitna kachcha Chaand
Sehara Sehra Bhatak Raha Hai
Apne Ishq Main Sachcha Chand
Raat Ke Shayad Ek Baje Hain

Sohta Hoga Mera Chaand

EDIT (6/11) Totally forgot to credit Parveen Shakir for the shayari... Clearly I was tired :L

This is the result of me being half asleep. And it's only 6PM over here so imagine what kinda day I must've had :L

Sorry it's so short! Will make sure the next one is longer. Just had a looong day!

And remember to like my previous post on this page so I can PM you in future insha'Allah!

Edited by Lubz.TaAnu - 10 years ago