Sahir FF - A First Sight Into Sahir (UPDATE ON PG 17)

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Thanks for the pm Di.

Loved the update, you have managed to lengthen it a bit. Its Ok for the time being, magar isse bhi zyaada chalega. Preferred is still longer than this. In case you are typing in Word, then at least 6 pgs.

Anyways, could just visualize Arzoo (Ms Baqbaq) and Mr Gabbar (the irritated one) in the car. I dont know how many times Gabbar must have shouted "Silence" and nobody would have listened.

And who is the lady? some new character that you plan to introduce?

Car main agar Joe bhi Arzoo ki Baq Baq main join hi jaate to? amidst the glares from Gabbar...
Next time also pm me. I am looking forward to your updates.

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minaz

@minaz296

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Wonderful update...loved it

Thanks for pm

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Maddy

@THEfanOFheartz

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Hey!!!🤗

Me wanttt moree!!!❤️

I just love it 😉

Please do update soon!x

@Thanks for the Pm😉

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bhshre95

@bhshre95

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

awesome update👍🏼

plz continue soon😊

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zohra

@zohra80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Fantastic update ...plz update soon

Thanks for pm

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vandana

@VandyP

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

lubz ben...the car convo reminded me of jab we met🤣

i like how both r so different...yet so similar

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Pizza_maniac

@Pizza_maniac

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Nice update..!
But yeh dil manage more, want a bigger and more detailed update next time 😊

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

I like Arzoo's nature in this chapter :P Sahir so adorable! I love how you show him in this FF :) <3

Jaldi update karna and I have few demands for the next update. 🤣

1. Long update honi chaiye.

2. Office romance chaiye.

3. Eyelocks chaiye.

Bus itna sa. 🤪

Nisha <3

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Neha

@silky_harshad

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

eekkksss 🤗 sorry for being so late...college ne meri charas bo rkhi hy...😭 awesome as usual..chapter five ka I loved that sahir felt something when he heard momma's worries and chapter 6..awww so sweet..so arzoo eating her sahir sir's brain ...how much I love her for that 🤣 I really want this to happen in show..so proud of you mera bacha *ducks from chappal* keep it up 👍🏼

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Lubna Ahmed

@LubzA

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice..👍🏼

Thanks! <3

Originally posted by: ploydome
Nice update
love the nonstop talking Arzoo😊

Thankss. ^=^ <3

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome

Thanks <3

Originally posted by: rosal_awesome
Hi dear, I'm Sanaya and I'm new to this forum 😳 you have an awesome storyline going there! it's good that you're establishing the characters' personalities before delving directly into unjustified romantic scenes like the CVs are do pm me when we you update :)) thank you and eagerly waiting for your next update!! 😉

Heey Sanaya! Welcome to the forum 😊

Aaaw, thank you! Glad you're enjoying it so far.

I know. That's one of the reasons I enjoy writing stuff like this. I know CVs of any show can be unreliable so I leave up to my imagination! <3

Will be sure to PM you when I update next, which should be soon insha'Allah <3

Originally posted by: zainabmohamed13
Hey !
It was awessome ! Very much related to the real humsafars ! 😆
Keep writing !
Thanks for the pm ! :)

Thank you! Will update soon insha'Allah <3

Originally posted by: s_danger
Thanks for the pm Di.

Loved the update, you have managed to lengthen it a bit. Its Ok for the time being, magar isse bhi zyaada chalega. Preferred is still longer than this. In case you are typing in Word, then at least 6 pgs.

Anyways, could just visualize Arzoo (Ms Baqbaq) and Mr Gabbar (the irritated one) in the car. I dont know how many times Gabbar must have shouted "Silence" and nobody would have listened.

And who is the lady? some new character that you plan to introduce?

Car main agar Joe bhi Arzoo ki Baq Baq main join hi jaate to? amidst the glares from Gabbar...
Next time also pm me. I am looking forward to your updates.

6 pages?? Sagi! Tum bhi na! 😆

Will be sure to make it as long as I can next time. Hmmm, she may be. You'll have to wait & see <3

Thank you for reading. Will be sure to PM you when I update <3