You &Me With A Midnight Smile .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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You &Me With a Midnight smile 😃

Night is descended and induced sleep in to the eyes of the Mishra family .

Everybody is pretending that they are in deep sleep , but nobody is sleeping !

Babuji is seriously thinking about the problem , and silently exploring the ways of solving it without hurting anybody .

Ammaji is planning about the next day's strategy , but she has a doubt that her MIL will definitely try to declare the men folk as winners .To prevent her from doing so , she has to bribe her , by feeding her lots of Rasgullas !

Ratna and Swara have no problems with all this fiasco , they are just enjoying the fun !

But the main problem is with the young couples who are finding it very hard to stay away from each other in the second night also !

Babuji is putting brave face in front of his sons , but at night he has to ask his wife's advise about everything , while pressing her feet he used to ask her how to solve Pappu's joru ka gulam image , and how to make him stand straight and go out for doing a job with his mere skills . Babuji wanted to talk with his wife at that night hour and slowly came out from the bedroom and crossed the line and went in to the ladies' bedroom ! It was pitch dark , because his sister in the previous night scared of herself after seeing her own image in the Mirror in the middle of the night, and it was very difficult for the remaining women to calm her down , to convince her that it is nothing but her own image ! To prevent her from screaming at midnight, they put off the light, so that they can sleep peacefully tonight !

Babuji went in to the room , and from the window , there is a ray of light which is directly falling on the face of Ammaji , he scratched her hand and with a howl she sat on the bed !

Nowadays she is getting nightmares of Saagz and Bunty roaming in the fields and on the river banks with hand in hand , like a crying hyena she is waking - up at night and go running in to the bedroom of the newly married couple to check them , whether they are sleeping at a distance and maintain the promise or not , then walk back peacefully and again she used to slip in to deep sleep ! It was happening everyday ! So ,after this everyday ritual, silently SagUn closed the door and spending their time in their own romantic way till the dawn !

Everybody heard her wail and as if it was a daily routine, again slipped in to sleep . Babuji whispered in to her ear that come out and he has to talk with her !

At this hour ? She questioned in muted tone .

Yes now itself , I can't wait !

Then let us go in to the veranda of backyard !Ammaji said .

Pappu saw his father went out and thought that he must be preparing notes for his next day lecture in the college.

He must be in the hall, so I will take my dream girl Rani in to the backyard !

He entered in to the room and whispered in to the ear of Rani ' Hey darling, come on, let us spend some time there , talking about some secrets !A small resistance from her , but later silently followed him !

Bunty saw his father and brother went out , wanted to have some sweet moments with his wife !

Went in to the room and started touching the feet of the ladies !No Paayal on Swara and Ratna's feet !

Moved forward, a big figure , no need to touch the feet and search , must be Aunty !

But two ladies are missing , he wondered , what about the missing two persons , how will he be able to make out his Saagarika from the remaining two ? He touched the feet of the next one and she whispered " Pappu Raja , bring some ice-cream to me !" --he realized that it is Bhabhi's voice , Baapre , moved away from that person and next one -tried to touch the feet , but she grabbed his hand and kissed it , a sweet low voice of laughter !

"Saagz , please come on ,nobody is in our portion ! Baabuji and Bhayya went out for an important work !Let us go there !"---They silently came out from that room and moved towards the other side of the line and closed the door . Before going in , Saagz collected some sweets and a glass of milk from the kitchen and went inside !

Pappu heard a whisper , "press my feet "!

Why only feet darling , ask me what ever you want me to press I will ! In his over enthusiasm he said these words and got a slap on his face !

Hearing this commotion ,Ammaji went out running and entered in to the ladies bedroom and acted like sleeping , without noticing the empty places there .

Babuji put on the light and saw Pappu pressing the feet of Daadi !

What is happening here Pappu ? Are you becoming mad again just like in

your childhood ? Angrily he pulled Pappu away from his mother ! His mother was laughing uncontrollably !

For this uproar all the ladies wake up and came there ! Seeing Daadi in front of him Pappu was stunned and stand there with blank face !

Rani with tension questioned him , What happened dear ? Is that wrestler came here again?

Babuji tried to explain --Bahu , you don't know your husband's stupidity !In his childhood ---one day he came running from the school crying ," my legs are paining , please press them Mom" !

Why should I ? I am busy taking care of your father , he is not feeling well !Go and marry a girl , she will take care of you ! Mockingly she said .

Then he went in to Daadi's room and she pressed his feet and feed him puri halwa ,and kissed him on the forehead !Suddenly he got an idea and grabbed her in front of his parents and said "I want to marry Daadi , she will take care of me forever and feed me puri halwa !"

His father with a stick in his hand started running behind him " how dare you talk like that , stupid?

He shouted back at his father " If you can marry my mother, it is OK for you ? Then why can't I marry your mother ?

Remembered that incident and everybody started laughing loudly .

Suddenly they realized the absence of SagUn !Where is my Shivji ka Prasaad and Saagarika?

Ammaji was tensed up .

Babuji patted her on her back and said don't worry , Bunty is an obedient son of yours ! He must be sleeping in the room !

They all went there and found the door was closed . Ammaji the first person who realized the danger and knocked at the door fanatically with tension .

After few minutes slowly the door was opened and Saagz with the plate and empty glass in her hand came out !

What happened Saagarika ? Why are you here , at this hour ? Forgot all the rules ?

Hmm, no Ammaji , Bunty was not eat well tonight , thought that he must be hungry , so some sweets and milk for him -

Then why that milk drops in the edge of your lips and those lipstick marks on his shirt ?

Whether I mixed sugar properly or not , to test it , I tasted a little and gave it to him ...hauuumm, while giving him sweets plate I slipped and fall on him , may be at that time ---

OK,OK , let us follow the rules strictly from now on wards , Ammaji said and lead the ladies in to their room !

Daadi , closed Saagz's neck with her hand where there is pinkish marks because of the beard of Bunty !

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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW Madhuri so romantic you made me ☺️ and yet so funny, Pappu wants to marry Dadi 🤣

PS: quite possible all this might happen in the coming episodes😳
Edited by ppp333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Madhuri, hope the creatives take a cue from you, real fun! Loved the ending, you are good at it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Padmaja and Vibha for liking my story .
Waiting to see in the serial , how this situation will create comic scenes between the two teams ,the Men and the Women !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣🤣 Madhuri , what a comic relief it is !😆

Pappu wanted to marry Dadi ,

Amma running towards the ladies bedroom after hearing the commotion ,

Aunty's scare of herself ,

Saagz opening the door slowly and later her explanations to Ammaji ,

You only can imagine such funny situations !

The indication of fierce romance at the end is the high light of this OS !👏

Love you Madhu , very good comedy !😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Madhuri,excellent work 👏romantic and fun story,great 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Madhuri, great story 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excellent ⭐️, Madhuri, made me laugh from the beginning , almost till the end.🤣

Great OS 👏, I could just see everything happening,as you wrote, in front of my eyes...Actually I always thought that Sagarika will for sure sneak out, and took some food for her Bunty, after watching how he was suffering, while eating the food men prepared...so maybe something from
this will actually come true on Monday...

Just love the ending 😳, that allusion on stolen passionate moments, in which SagUn managed to delight in, amidst all that midnight madness😃 Beautiful ending of the beautiful story. Love it. ❤️

Edit to add: Forgot to say, love the Title 😃
Edited by Sneha...Love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kety76

Madhuri,excellent work 👏romantic and fun story,great👍🏼

Thank you Kety for liking my OS and for saying good words ! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avyakta

🤣🤣Madhuri , what a comic relief it is !😆

Pappu wanted to marry Dadi ,

Amma running towards the ladies bedroom after hearing the commotion ,

Aunty's scare of herself ,

Saagz opening the door slowly and later her explanations to Ammaji ,

You only can imagine such funny situations !

The indication of fierce romance at the end is the high light of this OS !👏

Love you Madhu , very good comedy !😊


Avi thank you dear . 🤗 So you want to read about strong romantic scenes ?Be calm and prepare yourself well for exams . Will talk about romance in detail later . OK? 😡

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