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TBDRESS

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Saumya, I haven't read the os yet...will read when I can give proper time and concentration...tumhari saari galtiya aur bloopers jo point out karne hain😆

But read the wiki part you posted...Honestly, if this was real life, I don't think Zara could plead the insanity defense or even temporary insanity. When she started engaging in these criminal acts, she was shown to know and understand quite well that what she was doing was wrong and she took every step to cover up her tracks. Usually people who do things while being "insane" are not so methodical and also don't have insight into the criminality of their behavior (Zara clearly did know that killing Savita and Indira was wrong).

Ok will comment more after I read the os.

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Dia! I am nervous about it now. 😆 You think Zara was methodical , I surely could have planned it better 😉 . You can sure point out bloopers but remember its related to HD so there should be a high tolerance level 😆 I just wish Heema di doesn't read it, otherwise toh the whole thing is going down the drain. Waise I read somewhere that someone killed some president and later was found suffering with temporary insanity... I wonder if he could have done it without properly planning it. That's where I made an assumption and started off. I might have very well made a huge mistake in assuming so.

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designersaini

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Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nice OS saumya.
dont worry im not gonna point out any mistakes in ur OS coz i didnt find any.

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TBDRESS

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: _saumya_
Dia! I am nervous about it now. 😆 You think Zara was methodical , I surely could have planned it better 😉 . You can sure point out bloopers but remember its related to HD so there should be a high tolerance level 😆 I just wish Heema di doesn't read it, otherwise toh the whole thing is going down the drain. Waise I read somewhere that someone killed some president and later was found suffering with temporary insanity... I wonder if he could have done it without properly planning it. That's where I made an assumption and started off. I might have very well made a huge mistake in assuming so.

haha we should totally ask heema what she thinks about an insanity defense for Zara...but according to little I know, Zara didn't seem to be psychotic (in medical terms)- she seemed to know exactly what she was doing and an insanity defense in real life in really difficult to plead and win- huge buden of proof on the defendant to prove insanity. Doesen't mean that even sane people who committ murders don't need some psychiatric help- i mean just to murder someone is kinda crazy even if you are not medically "insane". Anyway, I think I'm trolling 😆 Will comment after I read the os.

Edited by Walden - 12 years ago

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TBDRESS

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Okay all this talk about insanity made me think of a movie that i liked that sort of deals with this topic- its called Shutter island...if you can get a hold of it, watch it and tell me what you think.

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: designersaini
nice OS saumya.
dont worry im not gonna point out any mistakes in ur OS coz i didnt find any.

aww... Thank you so much seema 😃 that's so sweet of you to not degrade it publicly 😉 kidding, thank you so much for reading it and liking it.

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Each time you say troll, reminds me of your trolling streak when you were trolling with every comment if yours. 🤣 those were my favourite moments at the forum.. You were just mind blowing... The only o other comment that was somewhere near yours , considering entertainment quotient was the prince Harry comment by Surma.

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TBDRESS

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Alright, I read it...are you ready for my review? 😆 Are you sure you can handle it? 😆

Actually it was really good!! I had to just make one assumption while reading it...I assumed that all this happened before Zara killed Savita and kidnapped Indira (like I said, I don't buy the insanity defense for Zara and so I have a hard time imagining this scene after all that happened). I wish this could have happened in the show- maybe Zara having an outburst at Rishi and saying some harsh things about Indira and telling Rishi how she feels and then what you wrote in the os (or maybe Rishi comes across Zara's journal or something). Then they could have worked thru their problems and lived happily ever after 😊

Okay blooper wise, I just have one question. Did this scene happen after Indira had moved on to her Saheb jaap. Because if she was still on her Ishi jaap, she would be attached to Rishi at the hip, and you forgot to mention that Indira was right there next to rishi while the os happened 🤣 Also where is Indu in all this? I'm shocked she wasn't trying to switch Zara with another patient in the mental asylum 🤣

Keep writing more!

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

🤣 guess what! Even I was thinking that Indira and indu not creating a mess over all this is a so not possible but then its an OS, I could at least keep then out of my fiction 😆 . And if you take that part of insanity defense out of it, there is nothing left in the story except for execution 😉

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TBDRESS

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: _saumya_
🤣 guess what! Even I was thinking that Indira and indu not creating a mess over all this is a so not possible but then its an OS, I could at least keep then out of my fiction 😆 . And if you take that part of insanity defense out of it, there is nothing left in the story except for execution 😉

@bold 1: This is precisely why this scene could never happen in HD 😆

@bold 2: Arre, that's why I said that I imagined that your os happened pre Savita execution. So no need for insanity defense in my version of your os 😆

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