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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Congo Diii

yeyeee thnax a lot for this new FF
Diii i m alwz with u
i know how much talented u r and i alwz adore ur writings
u r d best and will remain best for me
anyway coming to ur new ff
the i loved CS-specially Indirra'sand Sameers
Indira is a spoil brat an TOM BOYISH - kahi haam nehi ho rahe . lol. it would be awesome to imagine her in this char...
awww i felt so sad for her..why does she feels that she was unwanted??.hmmm koi bara raz hai kya iske piche???


OMG Sameer Diwan -a military officer..hayeee i already started to imagine him in this attire... lekin pata nehi kyun is attire main mujhe MR Khan ki iamge ekhai de rahi hai...lol lol lol.actually i wanted to C MAlik Khan as a special oficer of intelligence branch / army officer... but Sameer bhi accha hai..


i also loved mayank and NUPUR's char.though u dint telltaht much abt them but still i loved them as they r my most fav. try to give some importance to them iff it wont hamper ur story... .

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Di i know its a challenge 4 u to maintain all this char. but i know u can do it.
aur chinta maat karo sab kuch accha he hoga
though its very difficult but its nothing in front of ur talent

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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Di now coming to ur prologue

Diii Indira sharma is getting married-but with whom????

hey though she was tom BOY type girl but she is very innocent and indian by heart ...
she wants to get married with all rituals-r wah i dint expect it...
Very interesting

loved it di
Keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Faria.

Di now coming to ur prologue

Diii Indira sharma is getting married-but with whom????

hey though she was tom BOY type girl but she is very innocent and indian by heart ...
she wants to get married with all rituals-r wah i dint expect it...
Very interesting

loved it di
Keep it up


she is a girl Faria but she disguises herself as tomboy feeling she is not beautiful 😳 and every girl will sure have marriage as a dream 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: preethimadhavg


she is a girl Faria but she disguises herself as tomboy feeling she is not beautiful 😳 and every girl will sure have marriage as a dream 😉


accha tou ye baat hai
so bhaut sare kahani hai iski piche.
i m waiting di
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
I like ur new ff too...Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for the late comment...


Okay..
first of all..
loved the character sketch..

secondly..


awsome decription about each character...

thirdly...


loved the prologue..
Showing Indira Marriage...

That too church marriage with...a firangi...

if Indira could not still able to adjust their culture then how could she can bear
firangi,...
well i am super excited about this story...

awsome ...
please update the first part soon...


please do pm me...

loved ..it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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everyone want to know why is Indira became tomboy and marrying a English guy but guys did anyone got the doubt why Sameer has two Sur names 🤔 😆

chalo koi baat nahin i will tell in my next chapters 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethimadhavg

everyone want to know why is Indira became tomboy and marrying a English guy but guys did anyone got the doubt why Sameer has two Sur names 🤔 😆


chalo koi baat nahin i will tell in my next chapters 😉


Because Indira marrying firangi was more shocking than Sameer having two surnames...
one more thing..
does Sameer and and Nupur-Gunjan
have any
brother-sister type of relation..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
I give you full permission to play with every character

it's your ff and your imagination...


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