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riddhima

@RiddhimaK

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome starting shru n mithi.👏..ricky not believe in love.its shocking for me😲 n indira character is awesome.im happy that she is happy in her life...😃

waiting for next scene frnds n sorry for late reply...

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@twila

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Shruti and Mithsi...

Fantastic first chapter ... The characters of both look really Good ... Great beginning . 👏

So they have already met ... and Ricky believes himself to be jilted in Love... hmmm...

Waiting for the tale to unfold . 😊

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@ayeen

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

👍🏼 when is e next chapter???

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Ranjinikishan

@Ranjinikishan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow just wow..eagerly waiting for your next PM i mean your ff

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Ranjinikishan

@Ranjinikishan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: iolahardy
@ Anju: Thank u! Will post this on the forum once we are back there😊

@ Rajinikishan: We will be back soon😊

@ Gunthy: will be posting in english. so u will definitely understand 🤗

@ Ridz, shalu, simple, ayeen, veena, mels: Thank u so much girls 🤗

@bold: sunkar achcha lagrahahai..eagerly waiting for your re-entry👏

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Simran

@ShivuNozzie

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Shruti, Mithsi 🤗

What can i say. you girls, started this ff off with a bang!! 🥳

I just loved the first chapter! and how you two took care of every little detail.

The chapter title was so nice & beautiful- "Destiny", I liked that. Totally a perfect title!!

And the chapter itself!! Gosh, it was so well written & a wonderful way to start the story.

I loved everything about the chapter!! Everything was described so well, from the characters of Ricky & Indira & their personalities to the tiniest details.

It made the chapter so much fun to read, that I re-read it 3 times😳

The last paragraph of the chapter was my favorite though! The way you two described Ricky already knowing Indira, was perfect! I love showing and not telling in stories. Anyone could state Ricky already knew Indira. But the way you wrote "he knew that laugh, he knew the voice, he knew those soft hair". That was wonderful. Really liked reading a ff in this style😳

So Indira & Ricky know each other from before. They have a past😲

ooh, you two really know how to maintain the suspense! This is going to be very interesting!!

I really am eager to know what happens next!

I love the way you girls made the characters in this ff! Their much better than in the show!😳😆

Thanks for the pm!! You guys made my sunday! Now i'll be looking forward to every sunday😳😆

Oh and im sorry im so late! but dont blame me, it's all b/c of stupid time differences😒😆

hope my long comment makes up for being the last one to comment😳

Edited by -RaSu- - 13 years ago

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

@ aliya, gunthy, emymichael, simple, ridz, twila,rajinikishan : Thank u!

@ Shalu: 'class' were what we were aiming for for r Ricky Diwan😳 & Indira too 😳 Glad v achieved it. Thank u so much! 🤗

@ Ayeen: next sunday😊

@ Simran: Awww thank u for all those sweet n encouraging words! hoping u love all the chapters ahead as much as u did dis 1😳

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Cynthia

@-Cyn-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Awesome FF cant wait for next 😍

thanks a lots friends for change my mood 😊

i think Inshi look like this 😍 sorry Incky 😍

Edited by Cyn- - 13 years ago

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melita fernandes

@PeraltaGarranty

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

shruti 👏 amazing first chapter i just love it❤️

the introduction of both characters perfect
rickys was beautiful im already waiting to know more about himthere is so much mystery surrounding him

although its hard to imagine indira in usa 😆😆
but still i just love this
and im waiting for more chapters already

beautiful job guys i wish i could write like u 😳
and now i have to wait for a week

i hate suspense 😆😆 but ill be looking forward to the next chapter guys make it soon😉😆

Edited by adiya1 - 13 years ago