Shruti, Mithsi 🤗
What can i say. you girls, started this ff off with a bang!! 🥳
I just loved the first chapter! and how you two took care of every little detail.
The chapter title was so nice & beautiful- "Destiny", I liked that. Totally a perfect title!!
And the chapter itself!! Gosh, it was so well written & a wonderful way to start the story.
I loved everything about the chapter!! Everything was described so well, from the characters of Ricky & Indira & their personalities to the tiniest details.
It made the chapter so much fun to read, that I re-read it 3 times😳
The last paragraph of the chapter was my favorite though! The way you two described Ricky already knowing Indira, was perfect! I love showing and not telling in stories. Anyone could state Ricky already knew Indira. But the way you wrote "he knew that laugh, he knew the voice, he knew those soft hair". That was wonderful. Really liked reading a ff in this style😳
So Indira & Ricky know each other from before. They have a past😲
ooh, you two really know how to maintain the suspense! This is going to be very interesting!!
I really am eager to know what happens next!
I love the way you girls made the characters in this ff! Their much better than in the show!😳😆
Thanks for the pm!! You guys made my sunday! Now i'll be looking forward to every sunday😳😆
Oh and im sorry im so late! but dont blame me, it's all b/c of stupid time differences😒😆
hope my long comment makes up for being the last one to comment😳
Edited by -RaSu- - 13 years ago
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