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Posted: 13 years ago
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Indira was very excited today. She kept glancing at her watch constantly. She was distracted. Her best friend in this office & the whole country for that matter, Kathy, was getting married in two weeks & she had asked Indira to be her bridesmaid. The rest of the office was busy gossiping about the recent takeover & its possible effects on all of them, but at the moment Indira was too happy to care much about such trifles. Marriages always made her happy. They symbolized a new beginning. And she absolutely loved the hope & joy that came with any marriage.

Ricky hurried down the stairs of his home taking them two at a time & got into his convertible. He had decided to spring a surprise visit to the new office they had acquired in Chicago. He planned to meet a few key staff members before he officially joined them in a few weeks time. He put on his glares to shield his eyes against the hot afternoon sun. It would take him almost 2 hours to reach the new office. The warm air ruffled his hair. He switched on the car stereo & grimaced at the song playing on his CD player

Maine uske shehar ko choda;Uski gali mein dil ko toda

Fir bhi seene mein dhadakta hai ye dil

Maine dil se use nikal; jo na karna tha kar dala

Fir bhi yaad usiko karta hai ye dil

What a stupid song to be heard first thing in the morning. According to him love was a vastly over rated issue which brought nothing but headache to those foolish enough to fall in its trap. God! But it seemed as if Sonu Nigam was singing the above lines just for him. He gave a tight smile at the ways fate had of reminding him of his one mistake & switched over to the local radio station which was playing out some Rock music. Completely unaware of the admiring glances he was getting from the many female drivers on the highway Ricky Diwan, the younger of the two Diwan brothers & the heir to 50% of the Diwan Empire & chain of industries sped along the dusty road, lost in his own world.

Indira hurried out of her cubicle. It was 3 & she was late meeting with her friends. She had to hurry if she was to meet her friends on time. She had promised to go shopping with them. She hurried towards the elevators. She had to meet Kathy at the mall before the shops closed for the day. The elevators pinged open & she got in.

Ricky was waiting impatiently for the elevators to arrive. 4 elevators in this place & not a single one available when he needed it! Patience wasn't one of his virtues! The elevator in front of him opened up. However it was preoccupied by two guys in overalls and their huge vacuum cleaner. While he waited patiently for them to maneuver the vacuum cleaner out, the elevator at his back opened & a single woman must have got out. She was obviously popular. The fashionista who worked as the receptionist in this office was teasing her about something.

"Leaving early, are we?"

The woman who had got out of the elevator laughed. The same tinkling laughter which he had so loved'which today, he so hated! Ricky stiffened besides the still open elevator.

"Yup, me off with some friends to do some shopping! I am so excited. Catch ya later Alice"

He turned just in time to catch a flash of shiny black hair which was waist long. He need not see her to know who it was. He knew that laugh, he knew the voice, he knew those soft hair. God! But he knew more about her than he did about himself! His face tightened in distaste. No doubt the company had been going bankrupt! If it employed people who sneaked off early to go shopping he wasn't at all surprised. Well, but things would be changing here soon. Very soon! He would take care of that. He was glad he hadn't introduced himself as Ricky Diwan to Alice. Now he had some chance of observing these new employees of his! And study them thoroughly he would!

Edited by iolahardy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

wow wow wow... shruti/mtihsi.. 😍

as of now tougue tied.. i have no words to express or write... but do u know what i want this in IF,but not now later when riishi/ricky comes back in bang... i will PM u later the reason y.. I was online today and from when i was refreshing khi when the 1st part will get posted and at the same time saw ur PM.. thanks a ton... i will be eagerly wating for the next part.. All the best and thanks a lot, so we can atleast dream this story of our inshi.. Veena
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃Awesome beginning Shruti.😛

Dil khush ho gaya Sunday ko yeh pad ke😛😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Very well written Shruti and Misthi.
Yes here you used Ricky instead of Rishi finally the truth and very much needed.
a big 🤗 for this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KajAnj

Very well written Shruti and Misthi.

Yes here you used Ricky instead of Rishi finally the truth and very much needed.
a big 🤗 for this.


aww..thank you so much anju di for your kind words..a big 🤗 to you too..throughout the story he will be ricky only..😃

Originally posted by: adinats07

wow wow wow... shruti/mtihsi.. 😍

as of now tougue tied.. i have no words to express or write... but do u know what i want this in IF,but not now later when riishi/ricky comes back in bang... i will PM u later the reason y..I was online today and from when i was refreshing khi when the 1st part will get posted and at the same time saw ur PM.. thanks a ton... i will be eagerly wating for the next part..All the best and thanks a lot, so we can atleast dream this story of our inshi..Veena


awww veena...we are overwhelmed by your comment..thanks a ton for this wonderful reply..and its so nice to hear that you were waiting for the first part..thank you so much veena once again..ok do PM us..🤗

Originally posted by: ashish.sachi

😃Awesome beginning Shruti.😛


Dil khush ho gaya Sunday ko yeh pad ke😛😃



thanks a lot ashish..we are glad to know it made your sunday..😃
Edited by mithsi_22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
awesome start..its a change reading about such different characters of ricky and indira..continue soon
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice starting to this FF. You really wrote very well Mithila and Shruti. Now i can't wait for the next chapters...ahhh but have to wait for a whole week. I always like the Ricky Diwan you both imagine or wanted to see in the show, but now we are getting to see him through your FF 😳. Thanks for the PM Mithila :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear thank you for the PM...
the beginning of this ff sounds very promissing ofvan interesting track ahead... I wonder wats gonna happen between indira n ricky... Awww... ;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
wow great starting of the FF 😳 and i must say its a classy FF ever i read till now ❤️ ricky-indira,,,do continue soon i cnt wait till nxt sunday 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Awesome starting of FF.
Very well written shruti & mithsi.
Eagerly waiting for next update...
Thanks for the Pm dear.

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