SpellBound(HarryPotter+DMGff)Pt:3 Pg:1 - Page 2

Hey Bakra and Bandarya,
First of All, I love the part, It's amazing!
Ridhima is just so cute, thinking about magical world in muggle world. Loved when her father started screaming about the owl and when Ridhima convinced her father she was a witch.
Muskaan is also too good just like Neville in Harry Potter, These things will come late to her.
Rahul, great you put him as a friend to Armaan rather that a foe. When he tried to apparete and his mother had already prepared that for him, Gr8!
In all, Very well written! Waiting for funny actions in MAFYA
Continue soon.
Take care.

Pm me plz.

Originally posted by: bisma_4eva!

i loveeee it!! its great i like it how u mixed DMG and harrry potter.... reeally likthe character sketch as well and the first part was superb.... just a question is harry potter peopla gunna be in it to like are they gonna e the patients???? pls update soonnnnnnnnnnn!
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?bisma?

read both the parts..they are very well written👏really liked it😃 and am waiting to read further...do cont soon😊

ok i read it completely....who have carved it soooooooo well👏...am now adoring it!😳want to read further so plz do cont soon😃