SpellBound(HarryPotter+DMGff)Pt:3 Pg:1 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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The part was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz Plz continue very soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditisilawat

ok i read it completely....who have carved it soooooooo well👏...am now adoring it!😳want to read further so plz do cont soon😃



Thanks Aditi 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg srry for comenting late as i was buzy with he house work!! sorry sorry sorry sorry!!

now the part was...:

amazing!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!! I loved it and the joshi family is just like the weasleysss...awwww i can completely imagine ridhima and her dad and the magica news paper awww that part was emotional when anjali was leaving and omg musskan is totally crazyyy!! i love this fic pla contiue soon as i'm dying to read the next part!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here's the long comment I promised:

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

These are some parts I especially likedThere's only one moral in her mad mind, 'Who needs underwear when we have nappies.'

🤣

Rahul Raina- Rahul 'Naam tau sunna hoga' Raina…

Hehe, SRK's classic line...

Like every diamond, he has many facets.

Nice phrasing, beautiful line...

What makes this building unique is that along with the college, it is probably the first wizard building that is levitating on water.

I'm curious, how do they explain that to the muggles, is it in Venice?



"Di! Di! Godhi tahye!" Natty, her three year old cousin, disturbing her thoughts. "Muhde banda dekna hai!" Her two piggy tails bounced in joy as Riddhima took her into her arms.

"Woh mele jaise hai, isliye muhde patand hai!" Natty said, laughing.

AWWWWW, I'm in love with this little cutie pie, her "tothli zubaan" SO CUTE!😛😃

"GET THE OWL OFF MY HEAD! AAAA, RIDDHIMA!! GIVE HIM SOME ANTIDOTE OR SOMETHING! I think he has diarrea!! AAAAAAA!"

A zookeeper reacting so strongly to a bird pooping on his head😛

"Wow, Muskaan you didn't blow up the house…I think you are getting the hang of using magic now," Muskaan's grandmother said, impressed. She looked into her bowl of soup. "I think I spoke too soon."



Atul was more fascinated by the owl.

Adorable Atul as usual😳



"England won... I got accepted to M.A.F.Y.A... wah wah, khushi pe khushi, that reminds me, I have to dump Khushi.

*Rolls eyes* Arrogant Armaan as usual😛


"But I can do it! I have an Apparation License Dadi!" Muskan whined. Dadi was afraid Muskaan would end up splinching herself, an often occurance.


Kinda reminds me of the the typical "muggle" driver's license scenario😛

Anjali saw the girl grabbing what looked like a CHADDI from someone's head.

🤣Chaddi as portkey, OMG!🤣


"Mayank!! Zaina, man! She's that hot actress. The one that was in Kiss Kis Ki Kisses…and Kahani Kiss Ki….and Kiss Ka Intezaar," Armaan said daydreaming again.

Zaina sounds like a weird hybrid of Ekta Kapoor and Malika Sherawat😆

"Hoot, hoot!" A brown barn owl made it's way through the open window. Blinding sun rays shone through the window.
"Ughhhhhh, subha subha yeh ullu ka patta,

Hehe, loved his choice of swear words😆


Btw... if anyone wants PM's when I update, then let me know 😳

Count me in!😳




I really like this FF, and mind you I"m really picky with the ones I read. This has a very creative concept, mature writing rich with an extensive array of vocab, and great comedy! Keep it up, you've got yourself a loyal reader😳

Oh and I love the way you showed the scenes with the owl's point of view.
Edited by sweetmagic4u - 17 years ago

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