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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: desi-gal

tht story waz soooo kl
omgd carry on
i wanted harry potter ending to be really happy not with tonks and lupin dead but caryy on peops nice work! 👏

Thanx a lot!!!!

well, dont worry about sad stuffs...this is out fan fic....n we like

happy endings....u'll can give ur ideas too...just to make it more

cool and special!😃 Thanx a lot , again!

n yeah don worry.....agar isme koi maregha, then it will be the villian {but i like Voldy😭}

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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sumera siddiqui

OK ppl...we know we havn't updated for months...but we had reasons...and BTW IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!!!!!!! You'll don't review and we get discouraged...so pllllz guyz...even if you dont like our fanfic,LIE!...for our sake!!!!
aapki chote chote jhoot bhi hum dono ko khushi degi....
so plllllllz review!!!!!!!!!

bcoz u r pleading so much that's why I ma saying ur fanfic's really gud.Justt love it.Keep on updating it.(just kidding) 😉

Thanx.....😛

jhoot yeah sach....atleast u said u liked it 😆

Thsanx a lot yaar....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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THhanx a lot!!!😛😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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now plz update fast or the hell will break loose
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Harri Putthar aur Mehndi ka rang: Part 2

Ron screamed 'Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin'. Harri who was passing by heard him and ran towards him. 'Kya hua?' he asked breathlessly.
Ron fainted. Harry looked scared and looked around and what he saw made his heart skip a beat. 'Nahin…nahin! Ye nahin ho sakta….Ginny…Krum??? Nahin!" he thought as he saw Ginny and Krum kissing in the broom cupboard. Harry fainted. Fred and George entered screaming 'Oye Ron di putthar lassi kahaan hain? Wahaan mehmaan…..' they stopped when they saw Harry and Ron lying on the floor. Fred and George hurried to see what happened to the boys, with their wands out just to see Krum kissing Sunehri. Fred looked like he was about to 'Aveda kedavra' Krum, but then Sunehri turned into Shonali, Fred sighed but George moved forward to punch Krum. But their senses which had stopped working for few seconds returned and they realized what was happening. 'Riddikulus' both of them screamed pointing their wands at the boggart-Krum and it disappeared in a puff of smoke.
Pointing their wands at Harry and Ron they cried, 'Aguamenti'. A jet of water flew out of their wands and Harry and Ron woke up blinking stupidly. Then both got on their feet shouting 'Main Krum ko nahin chodoonga….' And then they saw Fred and George.
'Pakda hi kahaan hain jo tum choodoge, waise who boggart tha' George said.

* * *

The four boys sat in the hall thinking what to do next. 'Usko Muriel aunty ke saath chod dete hain, kudh hi marjaayega' Ron suggested. 'Nahin woh bhi uske tarah hi ek sar-dard hai, ek dhoosre ki company enjoy karenge' Fred said. George and Harry agreed. Ron said 'Jo chaahe karlo…Hermione toh usse hi pasand karti hai' and he got up and went away. 'Bichaara Ron' Harry said looking at Ron who looked depressed, 'Seriously, Kuch toh karna hi padega'. 'Usse murgi ke shed mein bandh kardethe hain' George suggested. But Harry got a brain wave. 'Serious…..Sirius….' Harry chanted looking happy. 'Accha ab hum seriously socthe hain…itne baar bolne ke zaroorath nahin hain' Fred said. 'Nahin, tum log samjhe nahi, mere mathlab hain………….Hum Sirius se poochenge…Sirius Black.....mere Godfather! Woh humaari madadh karenge!'. Since Sirius was in a mission for the order he wasn't able to attend the functions. Harry dug the mirror out of his pocket and said 'Sirius' to the mirror. Sirius appeared on the mirror.
Zuman: Looking as handsome as ever!
Zoya: *rolling her eyes*


'Hey kya hua champ?' Sirius asked winking at him.
*Zoya and Zuman faint*
Zoya: Okay okay…..am allright now… Sirius, don't do all that…
Zuman: *still unconscious*

'Problem' Harry said biting his lip, and explained their problem. Sirius looked interested, and he seemed to have an idea.
'Ladkiyon ki mentality humse kayi zyaada complicated hai…..aaj tak bhagwaan bhi unhe theek se nahin samajh paaya…..haan ye bath alag hai ke mein unhe samaj saktha hoon…mein uss field mein expert hoon… hmm….In ladkiyon ko line pe laana hai toh tumhe bhi wahi karna padega jo who kar rahi hai……who tumhe bhaav nahin de rahi, toh tum bhi unhe bhaav mat do…..aur Ron ki problem ke liye toh sabse simple formula hai-Hermione ko jalaao!!!!! Get another girl!' Sirius said winking again.
*Zoya fainted again*
Zuman: Waah Sirius kya idea hai!!!!!!!! Zoya can I go to make Hermione jealous??? Plz plz pleeeeeease?? Zoya? ….zo-ohh…she's fainted...
*Zuman sprinkles water on Zoya*

Harry, Fred and George grinned. 'Waah Sirius….mujhe ye idea kyun nahin aaya????' said Fred.
Sirius laughed 'Kyunki aisa dimaag sabke paas nahin hota….anyways mujhe ab jaana padega….emergency....'
'Kya emergency?' Harry asked worried.
'Woh kya hai na champ… do ladkiyan tabse yahin dekh rahi hai…unhe abhi pataana hai….' he said grinning cheekily.
And he left with Harry,Fred and George wondering what sort of mission he was on, that he got to flirt with pretty girls.
Zuman: Hope you get it, who the girls are I mean
Zoya:*Grin*

'Chalo, problem ka solution toh mil gaya. Ab ek hi problem hai' said George.
'Kya?' asked Harry.
'Ladki kahan milegi????' said Fred and George together.
--------------------1/2 hour later---------------------------
'I can't believe it. Iss party mein har ladki uss Vicky ke peeche padhi hai. Humaari baat sunne ke liye bhi time nahin tha unke paas! Ab ladki ko kahan se dhoond ke laayenge?' Fred asked frustrated.
'Mil gayi!' Harry exclaimed.
'Kya ladki?' George asked.
'Haan….'
'Aur kaun hain woh?'
'Woh' Harry said pointing at a gorgeous girl who just entered the hall.
'Woah… she's BEAUTIFUL!' Fred said staring at the girl.
'Haan….woh Sirius ki niece hai…main usse last summer mila tha…unka naam hai….AGLAEA BLACK.'
Aglaea spotted Harry and walked towards him 'Hello Harry! How are you?' She asked, hugging him. Fred and George coughed.
'Main theek hoon…tum kaisi ho? aur tum yahan?' said Harry.
'Main? Rocking! As usual…aur main yahan isliye hoon kyunki Sirius ne kaha ke tumhe meri help chahiye.'
Harry grinned and said 'Sirius is the best!'
Aglaea said 'Waise iske badle mein mujhe kuch chahiye'
Harry said 'Kuch bhi! Tum hamaare liye jo kar rahi ho uske badle hum kuch bhi karne ke liye tayyar hai..'
'Toh phir theek hai…mujhe Viktor ka autograph chahiye….'
Harry,Fred and George looked horrified.
'Arre mazaak kar rahi hoon!' she said 'Waise bhi Aglaea Black ladkon ke peeche nahin bhaag thi…ladke mere peeche bhaagthe hain.'
Harry grinned and said 'Aglaea these are Fred and George….and now let's go to the garden and make a plan….'
-----------------------------------15 minutes later---------------------------
Ron was drinking yet another glass of lassi. Harry went to Hermione and said 'Hermione, ek minute ke liye aaogi zara….Ron aur tumse kuch baat karni hai'
Hermione had been talking to a few girls, she got up and said 'Haan Harry…chalo…kuch zarrori baat hai kya?'
'Arre chalo toh sahi'
Harry and Hermione had just reached the table where Ron was standing and drinking Lassi when there was a loud shriek and they turned to see who the girl was. Aglaea was running towards them looking very happy.
'Lo, Harry tumhaari aur ek fan aagayi…Yaah phir Viktor ki hogi' Hermione said smirking. Ron looked hurt.
But the girl flung her arms around Ron. Ron shocked, dropped his glass of Lassi and Hermione looked like someone had slapped her.
The girl screamed 'Tum Ron Weasley ho na?...maine suna hai ke tum Gryffindor team ke keeper reh chuke ho? Aur tum bohut acha chess khelte ho na?? tum dikhne mein bhi waise hi ho jaise meri doston ne kaha tha-ek dum jhakaas! Nahin actually,unhone jitna kaha tha tum usse bhi zyaada handsome ho!!!' she said.
Harry was trying to suppress his laughter. Hermione looked like she would strangle Aglaea.
Ron looked very surprised and stuttered-'Kya???... Tum…tumhaare dost?... Main??? Kya?'
But Aglaea just beamed at him and then Fred announced-'chalo ab kuch naach gaana ho jaaye…dance floor tayyar hai…chalo sab munde in pyaari pyaari kudiyon ko lekar aa jaao..' All the girls looked at Viktor hopefully.
Aglaea asked 'Ron kya tum please please pleeeease mere saath dance karoge? Main khaas tumse hi milne aayi thi.'
'Mujhse??? Par kyun?' asked Ron.
'Dance karthe karthe bolu?' Ron still looked hesitant so Harry pulled him to a corner and said 'Hermione ko jalaane ka perfect mauka hai! Ja dance kar!'
Ron thought for a minute and then grinned at Harry and went and said to Aglaea 'Acha chalo…dance karte hain…but pehle tumhaara naam toh bataao'
Aglaea gave him a dazzling smile and said 'Aglaea….'
Hermione said 'Isn't that the name of the Greek Goddess of…'
'Greek goddess of beauty, splendour, glory, magnificence and adornment…yes. That's why my mother named me Aglaea!' she smiled 'Par log mujhe pyaar se Kale bulaate hain…it means beauty.'
'Hmmm….kehna padega, tumhaari ma ne bilkul theek naam rakha hai tumhaare liye Aglaea…Main bhi tumhe pyaar se Kale hi bulaaunga' Ron said to Aglaea and then he extended his hand which she took, giving him a sweet smile and they walked towards the dance floor.
Hermione stomped her foot and said 'Main Viktor ke saath dance karne jaa rahi hoon'
At the dance floor Aglaea winked at a Harry. Everyone was watching them because Aglaea was looking stunning and she was dancing very gracefully, Even Ron seemed to dance perfectly. Hermione went and stood next to Krum 'Hey Viktor Dance kare?' she asked.
But Krum did not notice her, he was busy staring at Aglaea. 'Vikkktor!!!!!' Hermione told a bit more loudly. 'Huh?' he asked, his eyes still glued to Aglaea. 'Dance?' Hermione asked. Krum nodded and led her to the dance floor.
Ginny was looking at Harry with her most dazzling smile, Harry was about to return it, but then he remembered his plan, he pretended not to notice it. Harry went to one of the pretty girls and asked her for dance. She looked awestruck, but agreed happily. As they both danced to the music Ginny glared at them angrily.

Shonali and Sunehri were standing together. George walked towards them, Shonali smiled, expecting him to ask her to dance, but George extended his hand towards Sunehri 'Aap mere saath dance karengi please?'
Sunehri looked puzzled and dint know what to do. Finally, she took his hand and walked to the dance floor. Shonali glared at them for a while and walked to Fred and started dragging him to the dance floor. 'Oye! Oye kudiye kya kar rahi hai? kahan le jaa rahi hai?'
She smiled at him sweetly and said 'Dance kare please?' Fred smiled and walked with her to the dance floor.
Ginny walked over to some of Fleur's cousin and dragged one of them to the dance floor. He was surprised initially but looked very happy to dance with such a beautiful girl!
AT THE DANCE FLOOR:
{Song-Golmaal}
golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal
golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal

'Oh yes…everything is gonna be golmaal!' Harry thought.
jaane kyo dil yeh kehne laga hai
ab toh tu dil mein rehne laga hai
bas gaya hai tu meri ragon mein
dil sitam tere sehne laga hai

Aglaea was dancing around Ron singing along the lines and he was laughing.

golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal
'woh Aglaea ki bachi! Kaise dance kar rahi hai…aur Ron kya bandaron jaise has raha hai!' Hermione thought angrily.
Viktor and she were both staring at Ron and Aglaea

jaane kyo dil yeh kehne laga hai
ab toh tu dil mein rehne laga hai
bas gaya hai tu meri ragon mein
dil sitam tere sehne laga hai

Harry twirled the pretty girl and then said something which to which she started laughing.

golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal
golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal
'Karo karo…aur dance karo…iske baad phir dance karne laayak nahin rahoge…'Ginny thought glaring at Harry.

Shonali was glaring at George. George was smiling sweetly at Sunehri. Sunehri, still looking puzzled, smiled back at him. Shonali was furious. She decided to ignore George too and smiled at Fred.

teri baahon mein aati hoon main saare jahaan ko bhula ke
lele teri panaahon mein tu ab toh gale se laga ke

Aglaea placed her arms on Ron's shoulder.
Hermione stepped on Viktor's toes and her grip on Viktor's hand tightened, her nails biting into his flesh. Viktor yelped and said to Hermione 'Hermione,kya kar rahi ho.' But she was still glaring at them

teri baahon mein aati hoon main saare jahaan ko bhula ke
lele teri panaahon mein tu ab toh gale se laga ke

The girl was standing too close too Harry. Too close. Harry whispered something in her ears and she blushed.

if u say u want me i gotta say u got me
teri chaahaton mein huaan hai yeh haal

Sunehri kept glancing at Fred but he seemed to be having the time of his life dancing and laughing with Shonali!

golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal
Aglaea caught Harry's eye and grinned.

golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal
Fred winked at George.

teri sapnon mein rehti hoon main apani hi duniya banake
teri sapnon mein rehti hoon main apani hi duniya banake
rang bhar de hawwaaon mein tu sapanon ko mere saja ke


They were laughing. But to Hermione it seemed like they had done some crime… she had had enough!!!

love me somebody I want you right there for me
kab tum mere honge hai dil ka sawaal


Urgh! Ginny was fuming… Now the girl was whispering something in Harry's ears…That's it!!!!

golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal
golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal
Shonali and Sunehri were tired of giving fake smiles to their dance partners and glaring at the each other's dance partners.
golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal
golmaal golmaal everything is gonna be golmaal

Hermione, Ginny, Shonali and Sunehri walked away leaving their dance partners on the dance floor. Viktor and Ginny's dance partner looked confused. Fred and George exchanged a high-five.
Harry stopped dancing and said to the girl 'Aapke saath dance karke bada acha laga…ab mujhe jaana padega,who mujhe zara kaam hai…' The girl looked disappointed but smiled at him. Harry went towards Fred and George and they went to the garden.
Aglaea and Ron saw Hermione go. Ron was worried. Aglaea said 'Mujhe ab jaana hoga…agar ho sakhe toh main aapse phir kal milungi...' she smiled and walked away from there before he could ask any questions.
------------------------------------The Garden---------------------------
MISSION ACCOMPLISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shouted Fred,George,harry and Aglaea high-fiving each other.
'Line pe toh aagayi……ab bas unhe manaana hoga' said Harry looking nervous.
Edited by zuman - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
yup!Sirius Black is here!!!! the explanation will be given in the next chapter...
and Aglaea Black is Sirius' niece...she's good,none of that pure-blood nonsence....and she's 17.....exactlt the same age as Harry....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: kmilw

now plz update fast or the hell will break loose

update is done! now plllz reply fast!😊😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its damn gud yar...loved it honestly!!!
tussi te kamaal ker ditta ji!!! 😉
Keep updating m having alota fun reading it!! post asap!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ^PoocHi^

hey its damn gud yar...loved it honestly!!!
tussi te kamaal ker ditta ji!!! 😉
Keep updating m having alota fun reading it!! post asap!


Thanx a lot!!!!!😊.......this is my favourite chapoter also....n this time

Zuman did the major thinking n typing......i was busy chona hain aasman...helped a bit'
sorry ZUman....luks like u do a better job without me
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ^PoocHi^

hey its damn gud yar...loved it honestly!!!
tussi te kamaal ker ditta ji!!! 😉
Keep updating m having alota fun reading it!! post asap!

thnx!!!!!😊 I'm glad you like it....

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