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MuktaJaiswal

@MuktaJaiswal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

nice updt dr.😊

waiting fr the next. 😃

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

The beauty and innocence of childhood love...

That part was really sweet Jo...

Makes me all the more excited to know what lead to the breakage of such a beautiful bond...

Loved the update...

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: yoga23priya
res as usual

will edited later

n m waiting as usual😳

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Sidda8
Neha Darling, this update is amazing. I loved Avita's past. So both of their parents are close friends. Childhood memories are the most precious for people and Avi's memories are full of Arpi. Aww, Arpi is so possessive of Avi and she wouldn't share him. So Avi did love Arpi and still does, but something she did has made him eager to seek vengance against her. I'm sure he will sabotage Arpi's shaadi with Pappu. It is so sad Arpi lost her mom at a young age. Btw, does Avi still have the heart locket? Please update soon.

thanx for linking it dear Siddu
yap its true n not only Avi's childhood memories even his whole life is full of Arpi n her thoughts😳

yap he want to give her back what he give her 'Pain'

sweety this locket have importent place in this story u will find it in next update😉

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MuktaJaiswal

@MuktaJaiswal

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: joliefille

thanx for linking it dear Siddu
yap its true n not only Avi's childhood memories even his whole life is full of Arpi n her thoughts😳

yap he want to give her back what he give her 'Pain'

sweety this locket have importent place in this story u will find it in next update😉

WAITING EAGERLY dr

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PrashT

@PrashT

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Myyy Nehaaa😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

Fabulously done update👏👏👏👏👏

They are childhood sweethearts..Hmmm😳😳😳 Awww..Cho chweet😳

Jo..hats off for this wonderful concept darling😳

Avi loves her still...But does Arpi also loves him?? I Hope she does..

ye toh fact hai ki pappu se Arpi ki shaadi toot jayegi😉

The song was just perfect for the situation...Very well written Jo...

The last lines were beautiful😳😳😳 waah..meri sweetie pie👏👏

Update it sooon..Im eagerly waiting for their meeting

Love ya😳

PS:Updated my res posts on page 2 and 5😳

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Kalitondra
Chutki where is the nxt ?😆😊

Di Next is done

will give it Pre soon 😉

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Hey SP
AMAZING update..
So woh dono frnds hai.. Oops, i mean they were frnds.
Feeling sad for Arpi.

I hope things wont worsen when they meet

Oye CP
thanx nahi bolungi chal bata where is Deewngi UD haan😛

oh ho u are still sticking at Friends hehe

u are feeling bad for Arpi are yaar next me tera kya hoga CP😆

btw u should have sympathy for Avi too😳

don't expect too much love this time like Desire this time its going to be different😆