FF : Avita : Opposites Ki Pyaar

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heyyy everyone!!!!! I have been reading the forums for a few serials here but havent done my own yet. Me and a couple of friends of mine decided to do a FF on a serial. I chose this one cuz i think that no one get more romance then AVITA can.
As it is my first post, please be kind but do tell me ways in which i can improve. I would to here what you have to say.

OPPOSITES KI PYAAR

CHARACTER SKETCH:

Avdesh Singh Thakkur:

Avdesh Singh Thakkur aka Bhaiiyaji ( nicknames by his friends as he turns into gangster mode when he sees the innocent being pressured). A cute, loving, warm-hearted and girl-attention grabbing guy. He is an A-level student who belivees that you should never do bad with violence. He is strongly in favour of punishing the evil but using the law not by taking the law into your own hands. Avdesh has always wanted a girl who understands him, clever and knows how to cook. More to the point, that's the kind of girl that Avdesh's parents want for him. He just wants someone who loves him and doesn't play with his feelings. He doesn't mind if she's not beautiful. However, these points go out of the window on a particular day.

Arpita Rai:

A pretty, popular and respected young woman with a lot of attitude. She hides her feelings very well. She like to handle things quickly without thinking as she speaks her mind and doesn't care about people's feelings. She believes that evry criminal and gangster should be treated with violence asa warning before entering the jail cell. Arpita doesn't want to get married as she thinks that all boys are waste of space. Plus she wants the independency instead of being tied down. Also, she believes that love oly happens once and only to the lucky. If she was to get married, the boy would have to put up with her moods, choice of foods and her attitude. Under the attitude-known girl, there is a bubbly, fun and emotional side to this Arpita who only comes out on a certain day.

Manjari:

Arpita's best friend. She is loyal and trusts Arpita with her life as she has known her sine they are little. Manjari, like Arpita, believes that love only happens once but she is in favour of the phrase :
RAB NE BANA DI JODI (God's couple). Unlike Arpita, Manjari believes that violence isn't the solution to everything.

Shikha and Simple:

These are Arpita's other 2 best friends. They are very like Manjari and Arpita but they have only known them since middle and senior school.

Tanmay and Jagat:

Shikha and Simple's boyfriends.

Chulbul, Pehlwan, Sirvon and Pahekar :

These are Avdesh's best friends who have nicknamed him Bhaiyyaji. They folllow Avdesh around but they are the college clowns whereas Avdesh is the top student.

Other characters

Mitu
: Arpita's mum. She sticks up for herself and what she thinks is right..

Rannvijay : Avdesh's arch enemy. He has been his enemy since they were little.

Umma : Avdesh's mum. She is quiet and follows her son's decisons as she is a widow.

Chirag : Arpita's younger brother who has never been taught any manner. He always teases Arpita but he gets slapped for it. He had a crush on Manjari, Arpita's best friend.


There's the character sketch and I hope to get Part 1 done by the end of this week.
You can also give me things for improvements.

😊 😊
😛




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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hieee Monika...

Welcome to our Family.. 🤗 🤗

Hope you have lots of fun here...

I loved the intro of your FF..

pls continue soon..


Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks and i hope to continue, the first should be on by the end of the week,
hopefully
Edited by MoniikAvita - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I wanted to secure this post for a better comment..

thats why I typed res..😃

got it?? 😊

feel free to ask us all your doubts..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls send me a PM when you update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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no probs, just add me as a friend then i will send u a pm when i have updated xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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welcome monika
dear
i justy love u r charcters
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Posted: 14 years ago
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MoniikAvita😃


Welcome to GKD gang🤗 and GKD Forum🤗

Im Prashu😊

Im sure Ull have fun..

Do participate in activities😳

Ur Character Sketch sounds woooww

Avita are totally different😉😛

Im sure Im going to Love this one😳❤️

Update part 1 sooon


By The way

Fr ur FF😃




PS: PM me when u update😊

Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
heyy, guys, i wanted to know how to add an extra page so i do part 1
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😃Greeaat ff character sketch... please upload part 1 as soon as possibble.. 😆

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