FF : Avita : Opposites Ki Pyaar - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks, maj i will update part 1 soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Moniik i really like your characters intro ,

n title to sounding quite interesting will wait for your first update

nice work šŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 14 years ago
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MoniikAvita , welcome to the forum. I'm happy that you have decided to write such a beautiful story. Arpi with attitude is very interesting and even Mitu being a bold character. Aww, Avi is a top student that wants a perfect wife, he is such a sweet heart and loves law. Avita is again on the opposite sides of law and this time their roles have changed. I'm happy to see most of the GKD gang and can't wait for Avita's special day. Please pm me when you update.
Edited by Sidda8 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Heyy guys. I am very sorry, i didnt update part 1 for a very long time but I was very at home so I hope that you can forgive me :)

But on the up side, i am going to update 2 parts to day, so enjoy.


PART 1
"In 2001, the turnover of solicitors in England and Wales was a record of 10.4 billion, of which 1 billion came from over seas earnings" Avdesh read confused.
"How am I going to learrn all about the law and legal rules for crime in 2 days."
"BHAIYYAJI!!!!"
Avdesh looked round to see his comical friend, Chulbul, at his bedroom door.
"Pranam Bhaiyyaji. Ka hua? Why do you look so pressured? Preshaani hai ka?"
"Nahi, just dont know how I am going to revise 4 chapters of law in 2 days. I usually take ages to learn just half a chapter."
Avdesh was worried because he had an important exam that could determine if his life went his way or not. This exam could determine is he was going to be the lawyer he always wanted to be or not.
"You'll do well, like you always do. Don't worry, you think that you will fail but wait till the exam, you'll come out with full marks as usual."
"CHULBUL!! AVDESH!!"
Their conversation was interrupted by Avdesh's mum. She had had a tough life after Avdesh's birth as her husband died the day after her younger daughter, Shikha, was born.This left her having to loom after Avdesh and his younger sister by herself. Shikgha is also Arpita Rai's best friend.
"Ka hua, Umma?" Avdesh asked his mum politely.
"Nothing beta, just weanted to give you my blessings before you leave for college. I know that today is a very important day for you."
Avdesh replied, !ka Umma, I have revision class today, not my exam. Anyways you know that I wouldn't go to college without your blessings."
"I don't care whether you its your exam or revision class. These days are important as I know that you haven't been able to revise properly because of Holi and your father's death anniversary"
"Shukriya I'm off to college now. Bye"
With that, Avdesh and his mates were off for college.
Edited by MoniikAvita - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
Part 2
"MMMUUMM!!"
This was the voice of Arpita, Lallanpur's top girl.
Quickly her mum cam running upstairs to see what situation her daughter was in.
"What is it puttar?" her mother, Mitu, asked.
"Mum, you know that I HATE wearing sarees and all that India jazz. I've told you to get my trousers and tops out when I come out of the bathroom. I just want to-"
Her complaining weas paused by her mother.
"I've also told you that while you are living in Lallanpur, India, you will be wearin sarees, salwar kameez's and anything else that I put out for you.. Besides, it's not as if you are going to impress a ladka, is it?"
At this point, Arpita had nothing to say as she knew that her mum had spoke the truth once again.
Just at that moment, Manjari, her best friend was knocking on the door.
"Namaste Auntyji. Hi Arpita" she said politely.
"Hi Manjari. Can you just wait downstairs because I have to put my salwar kameez on. Is it okay?" Arpita asked her best friend.
"Yh sure," Manjari replied.
A few minutes later, Arpita came downstairs wearing a pink salwar kameez, red nail polish and a bit of make-up.
"I'm going to eat a paratha before I go to college," Arpita said.
So after the breakfast was over, Arpita and Manjari headed towards to Lallanpur College of Crime and Medicine.

But today Arpita's mum was worng.
What Avdesh and Arpita didn't know was that they were going to be growing closer than ever before on this day.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hye monika,
just seen ur ff the character sketch seems realy intresting.

We would like to read further,
i will coment further after reading ur 1st&2nd part.
Thankx for updating.
Edited by Cuty16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Both the parts are nice dear.

Waiting for avitas first meet.

Avi is a good boy only study study.

(not to worry avi jald hi arpi ka pravesh hone wala hai aapki ki life ko happening banane k liye šŸ˜› )

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