FF: New Beginnings? Updtd Chap 12 on pg 37 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
hi dii🤗
first , i m really sorry for being late...
lovely update...
Loved Avdesh's dream...
thanks for the pm...
and update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Amit_Mehra

Lovely FF prashu di😛 Thanks Amitwa😛😛😛

though I have never watched GKD,but i have found it Romantic,entertaining and rocking.😊 Yeah...Its is😍
have read both the two parts😃
keep it up👏👏👏 Thts is really sweet of you 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Gaurishah

Hi Prashu, lovely update and well written too. Looking forward for the next one !



Hiee Gauri Di😳

Thanks a lot Di...


Vil soon update😊😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: joliefille

Hey Prashuu Hey Jo.🤗..Finally u commented..was waitin fr urs 😊😊😊

lovely FF n super lovely UD Awww😳😳 Urs too was brilliant👏👏👏

huuun so Miss rai had to wait for Avi haan Yep...nd she was damn frustated😆😆

good but i m loving this Avi yaar different in Office haan but kya kren dil to dil hai fisalega to hai hi hehe Hmmm...wo toh hoga bt thode time k baad😉

n about dream hehe yaar drean me bhi slap Hehehe😆😆😆 Bt dream mein hi tha...😉😛

i m waiting for the Party , hope wahan Arpi ke past ke kuch glimps milegi . may be or may be not😈

update soon dear m waiting >_ < Vil update sooon Jo Darling😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: rainurubal

hi dii🤗 Hieee Rubal🤗

first , i m really sorry for being late... Aww...Its completely ok..U had exams na😊
lovely update... Thanks😉
Loved Avdesh's dream... Hehehe😆😆 Thanks😊
thanks for the pm...
and update soon... Vil update sooon😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
GJ 🤗

i unres my post in pg 5 and 9 finally

so better reply it before i come 🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Heyyy GJ 🤗 Heyyy My CIC🤗


loved the first chapter 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 😳😳😳😳😳

Arpi past is very painful but interesting and make sure Avi will teach lesson to that guy also one 1.94 kg mukka from me 😎 hehehe...Ill make him give surely😈

Avi entry was as usual Awesome and u sent to la la land 😍 I was also in lala land 😃😃😃😃



Update Soon 😛 Vil update dear😉

love ya🤗 Love ya too❤️

@ jo

i am always right 🤣

PS make sure u add alots romance 😳 If story demands, Ill put loads of romance😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Heyyy GJ 🤗 Heyyy CIC🤗


look who is editing post 😎 Finally😆😆😆

u made me fall for your writing 😳 Awww😳😳

just loved the way you described the relationship between two friends and i hope Arpi will understand Avi and forget the past then new life or may be new beginning for them 😉 God knws or to b precise..I knw😛😛😛 Lets see if she moves on😛

ha ha ha every one is PMP on Avi like u 😍 🤣 I knw me😆😆😆

btw liked very much Avi's professionality and Arpi's mysteryness 👏 ⭐️ 👏 Avi is professional when it comes 2 his work...bt he is damn naughty😆😆..Arpi is totally myterious😛

abt dream 🤣 I knw😆 My Poor Avi😆😆




love ya 🤗 Love ya too🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prashu, I love so so much for this fab update. It is well written and very descriptive. Avi's entry was brilliant, of course he flirts with girls outside his business or the poor business goes down the drain. Even we can't take our eyes off him. I loved how Avi first saw her and had this amusing smile. He is fancing her for sure. Arpi is very intelligent and Avi is impressed, he has to work hard to impress her. I loved how he went straight to dreamland when gazing at Arpi, now he knows how we feel when looking at him. I can't wait for the party, Avi and Arpi have signed the contract, soon a personal relation will also start or in Avi's world. I wonder what Arpi's nightmare was, did she get cheated by a guy. May Avi make her forget her past. Loved how Avi dreams walking hand in hand with Arpi and all of a sudden she smacks him. Dude, your dreams are warning you to be cafeful with Arpi, he loves her personality. It is probably the first time a girl rejects him. Avi is going to love her for sure. But will Arpi have the heart or patience to love Avi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Prashu I have just read both the chapters and have to say u=your are a brilliant writer. I have been busy recently but had time so raed both chapters and it was just beautiful...the way you described everything! Please update again soon!

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